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Silverfist

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Short story
« on: March 19, 2005, 06:22:43 am »
\"Leaving Dermoria\"

An bloody evil time has come
The dark nomadic knights arrives
They forced us to leave our home
We hardly try to save our lives
A bright light finally appears
The portal open it huge door
Leaving our home with many tears
Finally end this scary war


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Any comments please :)

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Draklar

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« Reply #1 on: March 19, 2005, 07:18:49 am »
heh... short and sweet :P
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« Reply #2 on: March 19, 2005, 09:55:00 am »
eah, its less of a story more of a poem, i think you thought of the wrong word to use for a title...
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« Reply #3 on: March 19, 2005, 10:18:57 am »
Story can be wrote both in prose or verse ;)

However a Short Story, indeed, is what a piece of prose (shorter than a novel) is commonly called.

either way, me liketh ;)
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