Nolthrir Couple

[Onilise]

[Onilise]

It's not done. I want to make the sand look messed up some and put some trees and a little patches of grasses... I think his shadow is messed a little too XD

[Aramara Meibi]

cute Oni! I know it's a work in progress so I'm gonna point something out. Unless she's double jointed, there's something odd about the girl's thumb. Personally I can't extend mine past a 90 degree angle from the rest of my hand, let alone a 180 degree angle. (unless you're going for a cubist style, then i'll keep quiet)

looks like you're having fun with that tablet

[Onilise]

Thanks Ara!!! I'll fix her 

[Mariana Xiechai]

  Cool!

[Gilrond]

Nice work Oni! What tablet did you use for it?

[Onilise]

it's a Wacom Cintiq

[LigH]

Much more convenient this way!

And now for the horizon?

[Bonifarzia]

So far, I like the concept and style.

Without being disrespectful to your art,
what do you think about making her mouth and chin a bit more diminutive?


(I hope you don't mind about the trivial modification of your image... otherwise I will remove it at once.)

[Onilise]

I kind of saw her with a very round face ... yacking and smiling I don't mind. Okay horizon. what the heck goes there??? Flying pterosaur? haha

[Onilise]

[Soloyos]

This is great   

[Aramara Meibi]

oh! groffel!

I have an idea for the sky, instead of making it the standard Earth blue, add in some hazy details of the dome ceiling, or if they are on a lower level, there should be distant high cliffs in the background.

[miomo]

This confirms my suspicions. "The Daughters of Xiosia" should be renamed "The Artists of Xiosia."

[Caraick]

This confirms my suspicions. "The Daughters of Xiosia" should be renamed "The Artists of Xiosia."

Someone else has noticed, finally!  They all draw!!!