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Fan Area => Roleplaying (Communitive Storywriting) => Poetry, Comedy, and other. => Topic started by: miomo on May 18, 2011, 05:18:01 am

Title: Miomai's Ravings
Post by: miomo on May 18, 2011, 05:18:01 am

Oh how the bloodlets, the evicerates.
A trembling heart doth beat its final pound.
The daggers, sheathed in flesh, do penetrate!
A curdling scream from her: the only sound.

I chanced upon this hapless victim there,
and started talking in a nat'rl way.
A comment on her soft and shiny hair.
A question: tell me where the snowbuds lay.

The kindness in her heart would soon betray.
The tell turned show, off to her resting place.
So hard to not reveal her final day.
I wont forget the look upon her face!

A trembling heart doth beat its final pound.
But mine keeps beating, harder still, I've found.

Title: Re: Miomai's Ravings
Post by: Aramara Meibi on May 18, 2011, 06:32:21 pm

/me claps politely

Title: Re: Miomai's Ravings
Post by: Dannae on May 18, 2011, 09:08:38 pm

/me gets chills up and down her spine and the hair rises on her neck

Title: Re: Miomai's Ravings
Post by: Sangwa on May 19, 2011, 06:30:32 am

Haha, perfect!

Title: Re: Miomai's Ravings
Post by: Onilise on May 20, 2011, 08:09:32 pm

Wow *gulps*

Title: Re: Miomai's Ravings
Post by: Lady Crankenstein on June 17, 2011, 01:18:44 pm

Down right creepy......  eeee

la crank

Title: Re: Miomai's Ravings
Post by: Mariana Xiechai on October 19, 2011, 08:15:40 pm

/me snaps her fingers  :thumbup: