Author Topic: A Kran leave home.  (Read 795 times)

ragglare

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A Kran leave home.
« on: June 22, 2005, 01:31:33 pm »
Hello my friend\'s.
Now i gonna tell you a little story from my life.
But first i must tell you that i am a big and nice Kran, but i can\'t think so good.
Well a mage told me i\'m stupid, but i don\'t care. I think it\'s better to be kind, than to think fast.

It started when i was little and was with my father in the mine. He was famous for finding food.
I was asking why i newer have meet my mother, and he told me my mother is travel in the big world.

Yes i have two parent\'s. Not all Kran have. Many people have ask me how we know if it\'s a female or a male.
So now i tell, you can\'t see it on the outside as far as i know, but when you talk you kind of feel it.
A female Kran give a soft, calm feeling, and a male Kran give a hard and safe feeling.
I think you must be a Kran to understand.

I thinking. What is in that big world? And can i meet my mother?
I think a long time about what i need to take with me.
After that, i leave my home with a mine-pick. If i have a mine-pick i can find food, i thinked.
I walked for 2 days before my food was empty, so i find a rock and start digging.
I have good luck with digging. My father have told me ware it\'s best to dig.
After i have digged a time and find me little gold ore, i see something strange.
There was a little...err...hmm...something that was talking with me.
I don\'t understand so good what he say, but i think he maybe was hungry.
He was verry little and have something on his face.
I tryed to feed him little gold. Thinking he looked so little he maybe to weak to eat.
I did not understand why he get so angry. I only tryed to help him.
I run away. He was scary so i was hiding behind a rock. I hide a long time before i looked again.
He was not there anymore.

It started to get dark, so i looked around to see if i find a good place to sleep.
And there was a little house. I know it is a house. I have see in pictures, and it looked like this.

I started to walk against the house, slow. I was afraid to meet the little one again.
Inside the house there was another strange thing. He was smaller than me, but bigger than little one.
Just when i was about to run away, he started to talk with me.
He sound kind and he talked so i can understand, so i stoped and talked with him.
He told me that the little one was a dwarf.
When i asked why dwarf get angry and don\'t eat, he look strange and told me that dwarf\'s don\'t eat mineral\'s.
I was confused. Why dig food and not eat it?
He told me that dwarf\'s use it for making wapon\'s or sell it. Now i know, i don\'t like dwarf\'s.
Maybe there is kind dwarf\'s, but i have hard to trust them.

I ask the kind man how he know so much.
He told me it\'s becaurse he is a mage and have read many book\'s.
What is book\'s i ask, and what does reading meen?
Then he open something he call book. In the book there was many small pictures.
I even tryed to taste on the book, but he became angry.
It was then he tell me i am stupid. And again a was afraid and run away.
This time i hide in a forrest with many trees.

I started to walk in the forrest, and after a long time i see a place with big houses.
And the biggest house look different, it was a big pointy red house.
What i do after that i tell another time.

With regards from a strong and nice Kran.




*writer\'s notes*
It may look strange, but i made a promice to write exactly like my Kran friend told me.
In exange he promiced to tell me more storys from his life.
Someone told me that Kran\'s don\'t have gender, and so i ask my friend.
He told me that i\'m a human, and i can\'t understand how a Kran feel.
So i just have to beleve his story.

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« Reply #1 on: June 22, 2005, 01:44:08 pm »
Very amusing, keep them comming!
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« Reply #2 on: June 22, 2005, 02:47:59 pm »
/me agrees with Hitancrias

Good stuff!  And I like how you handled the gender issue.
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« Reply #3 on: June 22, 2005, 03:19:17 pm »
The style of writing, intentional or not, gives a very beautiful portrayal of the Kran\'s slightly-simpler-than-human mind. It\'s certainly a unique experience to read these, and they\'re very entertaining. Keep it up! :)

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« Reply #4 on: June 22, 2005, 04:10:03 pm »
Thank\'s everyone.
I gonna follow my Kran so i can write it down for you all to read.  :]

I didn\'t know how fun it was to write stories, but it IS fun.
The hard part was to try keeping it simple.
The story goes on mostly by itself, so i need to step on the brakes sometimes, or it start to get to complicated.
I will continue his adventure, so you will se more off my Kran.

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« Reply #5 on: June 22, 2005, 11:18:33 pm »
I am looking forward to it.
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« Reply #6 on: June 23, 2005, 09:17:58 am »
This story soon get a new part.
If i dare. It make me stupid.  :P
I have started to talk like my Kran ingame, all the time.

Edit* ohh. just remember. i AM a Kran ingame.
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