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Fan Area => Roleplaying (Communitive Storywriting) => Poetry, Comedy, and other. => Topic started by: Elentor on June 24, 2002, 06:05:42 pm

Title: Shadowmelt - Secrets of Below (poem)
Post by: Elentor on June 24, 2002, 06:05:42 pm: As usual, it was dark and cold
in the strange labyrints of below.
\"Behold\" - said the guard
to the strange who tried to pass.
\"Tis\' not for your kind.
Turn around and go back
For nothing beyond you will find\"

\"Beyond some places\"
- A Dwarf once said -
\"Lies a guild only few knows.
And some even dare to say
that with ease they can beat a troll\"

Rumors around, people talking
But few ever dare to go walking
beyond the beyond ever know.
Some says \"nothing but gossip\"
But just few ever dare to go.

And truth there be spoken:
Between the lies there was fear.
For the few who walked once
beyond the beyond ever know,
there isn\'t there even a token
of their bodies somewhere thrown.

And truth there be spoken:
Between forever lost tears
A hero alive once returned.
\"Behold! \'Tis not for everyone
Even if you want to hear.
For the news I have are strange
Few will believe without seeing.
In the deepest caves of below
Something cruel has begun
Broken spells and diaboli corpses
thrown to the crow\'s crowd.
And in the wall lurking dark shadows
Ever whispering about the lost\"

Well, I think I will end here for now, I will continue that later :D
Title: Part 2
Post by: Elentor on June 24, 2002, 06:37:57 pm: \"Laanx\"? softly a Xacha asked
But they are not part of the god who\'s masked.
\"No\" - The traveller pondered.
And then, quickly breathing,
almost not hearing people\'s stepping,
he talked with the young lady:
\"They said with the voice of a ghost:
\"Thou who dared to cross the realms of below
be warned it\'s not time yet to everything know.
The space between the spheres has breen broken.
And they are now melting in a big totem
beyond Vod?l\'s realm.
And the people, all them melt
Will never ever know death.
The portals have been closed
In the dimension leaving us.
Perfect beings never to be touched.
nor made of bone and dust.\"

\"Beyond gods are our power
and so corrupted are our mind.
We shall crush castle and tower
Soon shall begin the Shadow War.
Forget this place and what was heard
Forget that thee have gone this far.
Just keep in mind to choose the place
Where soon in pain thou shall die.\"

I\'m evil today ?.? :D
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Post by: Cyonamie on June 24, 2002, 11:13:44 pm: EXCELENT poem:)
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Post by: Elentor on June 25, 2002, 01:21:57 pm: But no one, men or women
to the traveller\'s word attention paid.
And suddenly from void emerging,
a dark cloud of destruction appeared.
Terror\'s screams like an anthem
covered all the underground\'s days.

And from the few who chased
- With\'em, some says
\"the best ever armors to wear\" -
the shadow cast upon Yliakum,
returned a woman, almost a year later
not expected to return so soon.
And in respect with the lady
with her spoke the might Vod?l.

\"Good news I bring
Even in the face of the shadow things
I may have found what is the source.
Something strange just happened
The eternal portals have been melt
And with them the life\'s spheres
Creating races that I don\'t know well
But what we meet are hybrids
from some place too far called \"hell\"
Also, if you want me to tell
\'tis the place every Diaboli came\"

Writting something this way...is so...SO hard.. ?.?
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Post by: kyalin on June 25, 2002, 03:58:41 pm: but its coming out very well.
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Post by: TheGeneral on July 08, 2002, 10:57:31 pm: DON\'T stop!!! ;(
U can be my hero, plz don\'t stop!
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Post by: Elentor on July 09, 2002, 07:29:41 am: hahah i will stop...people doesnt seems much interested.
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Post by: TheGeneral on July 09, 2002, 02:55:37 pm: I am people, I AM INTERESTED. ;(
Just finish the story poem atleast, and than u can stop as much as you want.
PLZ!
Title: Hey i applaud you!!
Post by: MagiBountyHunter on July 09, 2002, 06:05:33 pm: Wow that was really good i have read a lot of poems about fantasy and u should post that some where but i enjoyed it... hey i got to read it again GoodJob :))

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Title: Wait i meant...
Post by: MagiBountyHunter on July 09, 2002, 06:09:17 pm: What i meant was post it more places like at poem places. sorry bout that it sounded like i said this froum was stupid sorry i love this forum. so long... may ur journeys be bright and violent.

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Post by: -Raeon Volune- on July 16, 2002, 07:03:51 pm: I haven\'t read the whole poem but what I did read, was a masterpeice. I hope you never lose that little....machine thingy inside of your body that popped out that little jewel. ((That means keep it up in illiterate terms.))