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Merdarion

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« Reply #15 on: November 21, 2004, 06:22:45 am »
Thinking the idea of a drink wasn\'t too bad, you follow him into the tavern.
\"Seems like ya had a big fall on your head! You say ya awoke in the plaines? Stupid idea to go outta there! All these elves, Jalko ,  You must have had a big drunk!\"
Suddenly, a Meridian runs in shouting.
 \"Elves! Elves got in here!\"
Do you take your sword and fight against those elves, or hide behind the bar?

P.S.: If someone has the knowlege he should really try to draw a Meridian.
« Last Edit: November 27, 2004, 01:50:06 pm by Merdarion »
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« Reply #16 on: November 21, 2004, 08:22:28 am »
Knowing that the elves had almost killed you, you want revenge and you draw your sword. You run outside the building just to see some elves and a terrifying monster.

Do you fight the elves or do you try to hide from the monster?
« Last Edit: November 22, 2004, 12:25:27 pm by glenduil »
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« Reply #17 on: November 21, 2004, 12:32:03 pm »
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I would like to stress my insistance on grammar please.
\"You must have had a very big drunk\"? This makes no sense.
I think you mean \"hide from the monster\".
A story needs to flow.
Also where did we get 250 tria? Did I miss that part?
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Looking around you, the city is in chaos.
You weigh your options and decide there is only one choice. Letting loose a war cry you charge towards the elven attackers.
Seeing a challenge, a small group of elves make their way towards you. They fan out to surround you and your chances look dim.
You lunge towards the closet elf, who is taken offguard by your attack and you smile with grim satisfaction as your blade slides cleanly through his abdomen. His lifeblood pills to the floor as you quickly withdraw your blade.
Turning to dispatch your foes, you notice they are now extremely cautious and are no longer advancing on you.
As you engage the next opponent, you begin a high low, high low combo. The elf deftly parries each blow and thinking you have fallen into a rhythm raises his blade to deflect yours. He realises his error too late as your rising blade slices him open from hip to shoulder.
These elves are no match for you and both you and they know it. He slumps to the ground in a pool of blood.
As you catch your breath, you notice the creature the elfs brought has cornered a young Meridian couple and their child. They are unarmed and have no hope of survival without your aid. But is it wise to leave four armed elves alive behind you?

Do you attempt to save the Meridians or do you kill the remaining elves?
« Last Edit: November 21, 2004, 12:32:47 pm by Adeli »

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« Reply #18 on: November 21, 2004, 10:28:35 pm »
Breaking into a run towards the creature you catch one of the elves off guard and manage to deal a fatal blow while you run. You reach the creature and cut an arm length wound into its leg causing it to bellow in pain and turn its attention on you. Suprised by the speed of its turn it knocks you to the ground with its arm and you drop your sword.
Meanwhile you can see your drunk friend fighting the three elves you were battling earlier.  You see your sword just out of arms reach and look back to see the creature getting ready to charge you.

Do you continue to fight the creature or try to lose it and help your friend?
« Last Edit: November 21, 2004, 10:29:29 pm by smoak »
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« Reply #19 on: November 22, 2004, 02:33:57 am »
(ooc) btw merdarion had a good idea the inventory is good as for why does he have 250 trias before he was somehow knocked out and lost his memory he may have had a life, and, hence, money.(ooc)

You charge towards the large creature and leap onto it\'s neck, and drive your blade through it\'s eye and into it\'s brain. It lets out a low moan and slumps to the ground.

You then procede to run through the remaining elves.

\"Hey nice work out there!\" Says a tall blonde meridian woman.

\"Heh what can I say\"

Do you chat this woman up or go and check on your friend?

Inventory:
250 Trias
Steel short sword
decent clothing
Creature\'s tusk
Quote:

\"When I was a little boy, I really wanted a catchers mitt. But my dad wouldn\'t get it for me. So I held my breath until I passed out and hit my head on the coffee table. Doctor said I might have brain damage\"

\"Dad, what\'s the point of this story?\"

\"I like stories...\"

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« Reply #20 on: November 22, 2004, 07:41:09 am »
Turning around you see that your friend is in real trouble. He is surronded by five elves, and in his drunk he isn\'t really capable of holding a sword. Furthermore you see a group of elves streaming into the town\'s hall.

Do you raise to your friend\'s help or do you try to secure the town hall?

Inventory:
250 Trias
Steel short sword
decent clothing
Creature\'s tusk
« Last Edit: November 22, 2004, 07:44:02 am by Merdarion »
I want to be a flame, to crumble to ash, but never ever burnt.

I want to rise higher, rise up to the heavens, but sink, just sink down deeper and deeper into nothing,

I want to be an angel, a chosen, a devil, but I am just a creature that ever wants what it wont get.


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« Reply #21 on: November 22, 2004, 12:11:00 pm »
You yell to the woman to get some people to defend the town hall before rushing off to help your friend, you take out three of the elves attacking him while the others flee and a few elves that charged at you. The woman left a while ago and noone has arrived.

Do you get your friend to a place of safety, run after the woman or head for the town hall.

Inventory

no change
(only write in the inventory if it changes)
« Last Edit: November 22, 2004, 12:13:25 pm by Cyberchu »
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« Reply #22 on: November 22, 2004, 12:23:30 pm »
You run toward the town hall taking your friend with you, knowing that the safest place for him is on your side.
When you arrive you see the complete chaos. But at the moment you want to join the battle you see the woman at the end of the street with some men running towards you. The only thing is that some elfs have blocked there path.
Do you help defending the townhall or do you try to help the woman with the reinforcements?
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« Reply #23 on: November 22, 2004, 12:45:04 pm »
I imediatly drop my friend behind a bush and go to help get the reinforcements, after slaying the elves I go into a weaponsmith and take a bow and a quiver full of arrows before charging at the town hall with the reinforcements. After clearing the entrance of elves I go outside and notice that there are elves near the bush my friend is hidden behind and there are elven reinfocements approaching.

What would you do, save your friend, recue the town hall or deal with the reinforcements

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250 trias
steel short sword
Shortbow
quiver with 40 arrows
decent cloathes
creatures tusk
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« Reply #24 on: November 23, 2004, 12:10:41 am »
You drop back behind a corner, pull out your bow as with a low whistle of the arrow you pierce your friends captor in the eye with precision and force you didn\'t know you had. You then rush into the fray, grasp your friends wrist and climb up a ladder onto the roof. There is a large pile of fire wood.
You hurl a few logs into the frenzied fighting and knock out several elves.
They realise know that you are a foe to be feared and retreat into the tunnels. On the ground you spy a small medallion depicting a coin and a lightning bolt. You rush down and grab it.
\"Thanks. By the way you\'ve lost your mem\'ry \'av\'n\'t ya? Well my names Grash and yours my old friend is Jalko.\"
After checking his and Grash\'s wounds, Jalko wandered around the streets checking fallen elves for money and valuables. After doing his rounds he had 365 trias and 479 more from cashing their clothes at the clothier and bought himself a set of steel armour for 450 tria and swapped his sword and 200 trias for a long broad sword made from a dark metal unknown to him. As he headed towards Grash\'s house a small wrinkled man offered to buy the creatures tusk for 5000 tria.
Do you sell the tusk and make a killing or save it and head towards your mates house. (you see the blonde woman off in the distance)

Inventory:

444 trias
Broad Sword
Shortbow
Quiver with 23 arrows
Decent clothes
Creatures tusk
Medallion
Steel suit of armour


BTW if you don\'t agree with the names I chose feel free to suggest something different. I thought the main character finally needed a name already :).
« Last Edit: November 23, 2004, 12:11:49 am by LondonWalker »
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\"When I was a little boy, I really wanted a catchers mitt. But my dad wouldn\'t get it for me. So I held my breath until I passed out and hit my head on the coffee table. Doctor said I might have brain damage\"

\"Dad, what\'s the point of this story?\"

\"I like stories...\"

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« Reply #25 on: November 23, 2004, 11:33:26 am »
Thinking that the deal seems fair Jalko wants to sell the creatures tusk when the woman rushes towards him.

\"Don\'t be stupid, You can sell it for more than that?\", she says.

\"Shut Up! The deal is a real good for you!\", The Shopkeeper jeals.

Does he listen to the woman, save the tusk, and go to his friends place? Or does he sell it?
I want to be a flame, to crumble to ash, but never ever burnt.

I want to rise higher, rise up to the heavens, but sink, just sink down deeper and deeper into nothing,

I want to be an angel, a chosen, a devil, but I am just a creature that ever wants what it wont get.


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« Reply #26 on: November 23, 2004, 12:56:29 pm »
He keeps the tusk, knowing he has enough money for the present and he realy should find a little more out about the tusk before he sells it. He explains this to the shopkeeper and asks for the adress of the nearest library. With aword of thanks he leaves the shop and out into the plaza. Out of the corner of his eye he spots serveral elves sneaking away from the town.

Does he go after an interogate the elves, go to his friends house or head to the library
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« Reply #27 on: November 23, 2004, 01:41:00 pm »
Thinking that the elves could try to steal something or bring tactical infos to their brethren, Jalko sneaks up to them. They\'re five. He draws his sword and kills all of them. Searching their posessions he finds a letter, and an amulet with a strange engravement, an eye looking trough a clock.

Do you head to the library, or go to your friends house, or do you have a closer look on the letter.

444 trias
Broad Sword
Shortbow
Quiver with 23 arrows
Decent clothes
Creatures tusk
Medallion
Steel suit of armour
Strange Amuet
Letter
I want to be a flame, to crumble to ash, but never ever burnt.

I want to rise higher, rise up to the heavens, but sink, just sink down deeper and deeper into nothing,

I want to be an angel, a chosen, a devil, but I am just a creature that ever wants what it wont get.


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« Reply #28 on: November 24, 2004, 12:06:50 am »
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I don\'t like the idea of things just appearing in our inventory. Nobody ever wrote that we had acquired 250 trias... they just appeared. No one wrote that a tusk was cut off the creature... it just appeared. The tusk is not up to me to fix, I just realised we never actually were given decent clothing either, where did that come from? I\'ll add the money and the clothes into the post where we read the note. LondonWalker, can you please edit your post to include cutting off a tusk?
Cyberchu... in three different posts, you changed your style, from \"you\", to \"I\", to \"he\". This was started as \"you\" so let\'s keep it that way.
I don\'t mind him being called Jalko, but don\'t refer to him as such unless you are being addressed by someone. By using \"you\" we are placing the reader(s) in the role of the protagonist. His name should only be used by other characters, not by us.
Please, let\'s keep it consistent.
Oh and just so I know... is this armor a breastplate (I think it should be) or is it half/full plate? A Cuirass maybe?
Also Merdarion, it was not a shopkeeper that offered to buy the tusk, it was a small, wrinkled man in the street.
I derived \"scryers of time\" from the eye \'scrying\' and the clock \'time\'. Clocks don\'t fit medieval... I\'ll take it as a sundial. Any problems, just ask me and I\'ll change it. Umm we are in Yliakum right?
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You reach down among the remains of the elves and retrieve the amulet. You examine it for quite some time. The odd engravement seems eerily familiar to you, yet you can not recall why. Deciding to examine it closer when you have time, you hang the amulet around your neck and look once more to the ground.
You retrieve the letter from the dead elf.
It is sealed with wax embossed with the logo from the amulet, it is obvious the two are related. You carefully peel off the seel and unfold the parchment. You begin to read.
\"You have served me well in the past Berallion, yet I have need of you once more.
The Meridians have long been a thorn in our side, one more than most. You know who it is I speak of.
It was my understanding that this particular barb had been removed, but I now learn it has returned. The one responsible for misleading me has been destroyed.
Your contact will be in Anath\' Cyren. Remember the phrase \"
Throughout the ages, the eye is ever watchful.\" Without this phrase, one will not keep their head.
Go to the inn known as
Talad\'s Gift, ask for the observer.
The eye is eternal,
The Scryers of Time\"
Finally you can put a name to the seal, but there is no name to go with the one who wrote this letter. It is clear that the author was known to this \'Berallion\'.
The sound of hurried footsteps approaching drives all thought of the seal from your mind.
\"Jalko, I never thought I\'d see you again.\"
This man clearly knows you.
\"The Captain wishes to see you. We will escort you.\"
Looking around you see you are surrounded by Meridians in matching armor, all with sharpened steel pointed in your direction.
This is clearly not an invitation.

Do you go along willingly, or tell them of your need to get to Anath\' Cyren?
« Last Edit: November 24, 2004, 08:57:13 am by Adeli »

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« Reply #29 on: November 24, 2004, 01:34:58 am »
Hey Adeli i don\'t mean to, but i\'m gonna have to speak crudely.
Shut up!
\"I don\'t like the idea of things just appearing in our inventory. Nobody ever wrote that we had acquired 250 trias... they just appeared. No one wrote that a tusk was cut off the creature... it just appeared. The tusk is not up to me to fix, I just realised we never actually were given decent clothing either, where did that come from?\"

Starting at the top of this sentance. I said a while back that maybe this guy was wearing clothes before he appeared in this field? Or are you implying that he was left there entirely naked in the fields. That\'s a bit sick... Do you want me to write for example:
\'Your standing in a town. Your wearing pants\'

In closing so what if I didn\'t write that he cut off the tusk. Who cares? Bad grammar and spelling I don\'t like but the rest isn\'t really annoying at all so I repeat, Shut up!
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\"When I was a little boy, I really wanted a catchers mitt. But my dad wouldn\'t get it for me. So I held my breath until I passed out and hit my head on the coffee table. Doctor said I might have brain damage\"

\"Dad, what\'s the point of this story?\"

\"I like stories...\"