PS FROM NOW ON <><><> BRACKETS ARE USED FOR COMMENTING, just to keep some order>
As dentri flew into the void a chill came over him. He seemed to be within an infinate cube of ice, seeing only its reflective blue light, and not being able to move at all. This lasted for a matter of minutes, until all went blank and he found himself on the ground. He soon realized that this was not correct. He had been flying above a river, and now in his face down possition he found that he lay on a polished wooden floor. Dentri slowly staggered, and then stood and as he did so he heard a smooth and melodious voice say in an accent foreign to him, \"Welcome to the palace of keyunar.\" Dentri quickly turned around to find that before him stood the most graceful creature he had ever seen. Her skin was an oily black, and as she moved toward him it seemed as if she never touched the ground. \"My name is Senafiik, and being that you have not the headband of Keyun, you can not belong here... Guards...\" Only after two Large Kran entered the room, did its proportions become obvious to Dentri. This was one of the largest structures he had ever stood in, and unless it only had one room, it had to be larger than the great temple of laanx... To Dentri\'s luck, just as the Kran came within swords distance of him, another flash of light came from the center of the room, drawing all atention to it. With a loud snap Galnuru appeared, and at the quick gesture of Dentri knocked down the Kran with its incredible stregnth... and then... Dentri looked up....
In awe he trailed the walls upward,upward, and upward until he saw a dim speck of light. This must be a dream, Dentri thought. This single room spanned twice the distance from the second to the first level easily....
As Dentri got on to Galnuru, he realized that there was no way they could fly from this structure. Senafiik in the mean time was still in shock at seeing such a large creature enter her fathers palace. She ran to Dentri, realizing that whoever this was could probably help her escape...
< Just to let ya know i was thinking her father is king and wants to marry her off to scum so she naturally wants to escape... what do ya think... its up to whoever continues>