Don't fret it Jaycol, what you've got here is great - and easily adapted to whatever circumstances a character may desire.
Parallo, I think your wish for religious clarification has been made. Maybe get in touch with Jeraphon or Xililx and see if Settings might not be willing to offer some suggestions for a more theistic adaptation? I think we're still a ways off from any "official" standpoint, as new Gods are still being added. Heck, we've only got what, about an eighth of Yliakum's uppermost tier for a game world? I think there's a lot of room left to grow yet.
And just so I'm reading this right, Jaycol, this was posted as a framework resource upon which to build, yes? So whether your characters are religious or not, they should be able to work with it simply as a basic structure for a ceremony.
And of course, not being official, I would think you're all equally welcome to include other adaptations, interpretations, or entirely new ideas.