That's actually a pretty solid male Enki, you've got a knack for anatomy I must say
Looks like he's crouching, was that part of the overall idea of how he should look? You need to train a bit more on thinner heads and smaller eyes I think, you're still going strong with the manga style but this is a great improvement nonetheless! Experiment some with longer necks, thinner heads and smaller eyes either in your mind or by drawing. I see you've done that, check out some humans on the net. This could help, I was once asked to sketch the statue of David(by Michelangelo) and it might help you get a varied understanding of the human body and help you when you draw different characters and body-types.
Have fun, Tessra
The stage you're in right now was when I realized I could draw anything if I set my mind to it, and had great fun getting help from other people.
