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Fan Area => Roleplaying (Communitive Storywriting) => Poetry, Comedy, and other. => Topic started by: hugox9 on April 16, 2007, 03:21:37 am
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This Is A Story that others can join!
Create a character then make up a story aboute him/her :detective:
Here Is Mine
Name:Hal-Gin :whistling:
Age:15 :o
Job:Spare-Time-Adventurer :sweatdrop:
Race:Klyros :innocent:
Status:LOWLIFE :'(
*edit*
PLZ GIVE HIM A FRIEND
[ Please avoid making one post right after the other in the same thread. Just "Modify" your first post to add more information. Thanks! --Karyuu ]
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Name:Hal-Gin :whistling:
Age:15 :o
Job:Spare-Time-Adventurer :sweatdrop:
Race:Klyros :innocent:
Status:LOWLIFE :'(
I am sorry to inform you that this is not really a story about your character, this is merely some information about him.
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[Shame Shame indeed. Well, I'll go and give a character into this]
Name: Minerva
Age: 25
Job: Seer
Race: Xacha
Status: Unknown, yet
according to Minerva, there is a strange meeting of the gods above. It is of a great battle between the gods of the moon and the gods of the sun. What will come of it is a mystery to her as of yet, but the consequences to the mortals of the world cannot be good.
Not all news is bad, however, as she predicts a party of heros to save the mortals. Amoung them is a fish-like man from another time...
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[/me pokes okim with the read settings stick. no moon.]
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Yeah Thats it okim! keep it up \\o//
han-gin where reading in the lilbery,looking for inforation aboute mining (dunno y) When He Noticed A strange Book,it was about...The Gods Of The Moon And Sun! :sweatdrop:
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[Gee, there is no moon, so there can't be a book about it. Furthermore, there are no gods of the moon and sun, at least it is not known, so these gods can not battle.
han-gin
Name: Hal-gin
What's your characters name?
Amoung them is a fish-like man from another time...
An unkown race from another time? Please guys, read the settings before you try to create a story:
http://www.planeshift.it/setting.html]
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[ Perhaps writing a long(I mean at least 10 lines and with some plot), well articulated history, that is what this forum section is about(It does not have to necessarily fit with the Settings, but in that case it shouldn't make associations with characters in the game), would draw more interest than just putting short character bios, what is written here should be on another thread called Introduce yourself and your character (http://hydlaa.com/smf/index.php?topic=24595.0)
And I think that, although not commonplace, the moon might be mentioned by those few who know the vague histories and legends about the surface world some races came from, like the Ylians.
Also there are only 3 known gods: Vodul, Talad and Laanx]
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[and vodul isnt known to your characters. :)]
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[and vodul isnt known to your characters. :)]
Indeed.
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It is mildly entertaining though. Let them carry on.
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It is mildly entertaining though. Let them carry on.
[ As long as it doesn't turn into a cheap Hercules/He-man/Xena/Thundercats rip-off, I guess so. But this gods of sun X gods of moon stuff reminds me of some of these for a reason. Also fish-like man thing reminds me of Waterworld ]
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hal-gin herd a voice behind him,he saw that it was the seer, she sed: so you are the one to fine the book... :sweatdrop:
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Please try posting more than a single line. Aim for paragraphs, and better spelling :)
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Also fish-like man thing reminds me of Waterworld.
Reminds me of the Klyros.
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[Gee, there is no moon, so there can't be a book about it. Furthermore, there are no gods of the moon and sun, at least it is not known, so these gods can not battle.
han-gin
Name: Hal-gin
What's your characters name?
Amoung them is a fish-like man from another time...
An unkown race from another time? Please guys, read the settings before you try to create a story:
http://www.planeshift.it/setting.html]
I'm well aware that role-play threads on the forums should take on a more mid-evilish (can't spell :$) setting. I've also read the setting bit on the web site, and I find it shocking to hear that there is no moon in the world (what kind of world has no moon? I digress though). By the way, isn't the Klyros fish people?
Well, I'm going to put my seer elsewhere. I had a feeling there was going to be problems when the first post was the following:
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This Is A Story that others can join!
Create a character then make up a story aboute him/her Detective
Here Is Mine
Name:Hal-Gin whistling
Age:15 Shocked
Job:Spare-Time-Adventurer Sweat drop
Race:Klyros Innocent
Status:LOWLIFE Cry
*edit*
PLZ GIVE HIM A FRIEND
[ Please avoid making one post right after the other in the same thread. Just "Modify" your first post to add more information. Thanks! --Karyuu ]
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I find it shocking to hear that there is no moon in the world (what kind of world has no moon? I digress though). By the way, isn't the Klyros fish people?
You can't see a moon in Hollow Earths (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hollow_Earth#Hollow_Earths_in_fiction) or Yliakum, they are underground territories.
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About Klyros, they are more of reptilian or amphibious than of fish to me.
But anyway, here are their "ancestors" in the evolutionary scale if they really came from fishes: ???
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flying_fish (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Flying_fish)
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By the way, isn't the Klyros fish people?
You mean Nolthrir ;)
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To hugox9 and anyone else who's concerned:
When starting stories that anyone will be allowed to contribute to, try providing as much information on the background of the given events as it is possible. People who wish to take part in such threads must have a decent idea as to what's expected from their chunks of story additions. And while I'm at it, chunks is the keyword here. As has already been stated, you should try to avoid making one sentence contributions. The lesser the posts will be, the harder it'll be for people to keep up with the storyline (mostly due to different users having different ideas as to the story; Ergo, each following sentence will push the story in a different direction). And above all else, make sure you have everything thought out before you start anything. Don't just create a new thread and expect other users to do all the work for you. If you are aiming at participating in the thread yourself, you should be able to do all the introductory work on your own.
Said that, I'm surprised this thread hasn't been locked yet. This section definitely requires certain set of rules and guidelines.
P.S. Donari: He meant Klyros. Read the race description.
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Indeed, hugox9 meant Klyros. But my response was to Okim. She mixed Klyros and Nolthrir up.
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[Ok im gona try to steer this thread in the right direction.]
A yound Dermorian watches the fanatics of Laanx fight the followers of Talad from a tall rock somewhere in the fourth level while talking to himself all the time.After the battle ends and there are only three men left the Dermorian turn away and sighs to himself "So the war of the gods has begun.This can not be good for any of us."
After a while of walking he comes up to a small camp set up in the center of the forrrest.He takes out two bags and takes out battle gear from one and puts it on.Then he throws the other on his shoulder and walks away stoping right before he leaves the clearing and says "I hope we make it" then he continues through the woods.
[That is how you might start a multi writer story.Or at least how you add to it.]