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« on: June 19, 2005, 07:06:01 am »
That\'s stupid
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« on: June 19, 2005, 07:04:46 am »
((Nice!!! The narration has become half the story 
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« on: June 17, 2005, 01:39:58 am »
((!! I just want to read your posts now, you can take over if you want... I still love reading it though 
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« on: June 16, 2005, 04:11:03 am »
((Awesome. It would be cool if someone could edit this and put in chapters, I couldn\'t seperate a solid story into chapters :S))
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« on: June 13, 2005, 04:04:29 am »
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It\'s embarassing, you\'re so much better at writing than I am... Good work though! I\'d prefer if you toned down the length though with your additions. Maybe a third of what you just posted.))
Glyure moved inside, quickly, and began making some stew.
Ruben sat down at the kitchen table and made an attempt at thinking it all over.
Glyure walked in and sat on the table, Rubens hand resting very close to her thigh.
((Sorry, I wasn\'t feeling in the mood for writing but just wanted to keep it moving. I\'ll do a longer post next time))
It\'s embarassing, you\'re so much better at writing than I am... Good work though! I\'d prefer if you toned down the length though with your additions. Maybe a third of what you just posted.))Glyure moved inside, quickly, and began making some stew.
Ruben sat down at the kitchen table and made an attempt at thinking it all over.
Glyure walked in and sat on the table, Rubens hand resting very close to her thigh.
((Sorry, I wasn\'t feeling in the mood for writing but just wanted to keep it moving. I\'ll do a longer post next time
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« on: June 12, 2005, 06:11:05 am »
Inventory:
Still the same as above.
Equipped:
Same as above, still wearing his boots.
Status:
Healthy, now slightly aware of his past
Company:
Glyure... An Elfess with a whip and a secret
Still the same as above.
Equipped:
Same as above, still wearing his boots.
Status:
Healthy, now slightly aware of his past
Company:
Glyure... An Elfess with a whip and a secret
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« on: June 12, 2005, 06:07:21 am »
After an extended pause- \"Wh-who am I? Why would I kill you? What\'s happening?\" Ruben said, the words tumbling from his mouth.
A slight smile lifted Glyures lip.
\"Well you are a soldier. Or more likely a town guard. I don\'t know who you are, but I do know that much. That biolance there, do you want to see what it does?\" Ruben nodded vigorously and Glyure picked it up.
She walked down her hallway and through another door out to a clearing behind her house. A few targets were set up, at intervals of 25 metres away. She looked briefly at Ruben, grinned, and crouched down. She raised the biolance, took aim at the furthest target, and raised the rod-like object that accompanied the box-like object. She proceeded to ram the stick into the hole as hard as she could. The other end glowed briefly white then a bolt of pure energy shot out, exploding on impact with the target, causing a hole about 10 cm in diamater to be created. She stood back up and smiled again.
\"So it\'s a weapon... My weapon?\" Ruben said, startled at what he had been obviously carrying around and using.
\"Why would I need to wield that much power?\" Ruben said, dumbfounded.
\"Well it does have a few settings, you can toggle the strength and size of each bolt by sliding your finger along this panel\" She said, pushing slightly on one side of the biolance, causing a cover to pop up, revealing said panel. She closed it and said
\"And the speed and time between each bolt is easily controlled by the user with the handle\" She said, popping the panel and setting it to its weakest setting. She fired a rapid succession of 10 bolts in the direction of the closest target. It only created a slight burn mark.
A slight smile lifted Glyures lip.
\"Well you are a soldier. Or more likely a town guard. I don\'t know who you are, but I do know that much. That biolance there, do you want to see what it does?\" Ruben nodded vigorously and Glyure picked it up.
She walked down her hallway and through another door out to a clearing behind her house. A few targets were set up, at intervals of 25 metres away. She looked briefly at Ruben, grinned, and crouched down. She raised the biolance, took aim at the furthest target, and raised the rod-like object that accompanied the box-like object. She proceeded to ram the stick into the hole as hard as she could. The other end glowed briefly white then a bolt of pure energy shot out, exploding on impact with the target, causing a hole about 10 cm in diamater to be created. She stood back up and smiled again.
\"So it\'s a weapon... My weapon?\" Ruben said, startled at what he had been obviously carrying around and using.
\"Why would I need to wield that much power?\" Ruben said, dumbfounded.
\"Well it does have a few settings, you can toggle the strength and size of each bolt by sliding your finger along this panel\" She said, pushing slightly on one side of the biolance, causing a cover to pop up, revealing said panel. She closed it and said
\"And the speed and time between each bolt is easily controlled by the user with the handle\" She said, popping the panel and setting it to its weakest setting. She fired a rapid succession of 10 bolts in the direction of the closest target. It only created a slight burn mark.
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« on: June 09, 2005, 03:01:05 am »
Ruben stood in the doorway, motionless, before he realised that he was only wearing undergarments. He blushed slightly and attempted to \"cover up\" and clumsily closed the door. He heard Glyure laugh and felt extremely embarassed. He felt his way towards the window and pulled aside the curtains, revealing a drizzly Autumn morning.
The area surrounding Glyures house was comprised mainly of rolling, green hills dotted with very large trees, low, with widespread branches. Ruben turned and looked in the room he had slept in, spotted his clothing and pulled them on hastily. Strangely, he noticed that his knife was missing.
After a few minutes of thought, Ruben felt the ever present grumbling in his stomach. He slowly opened the door and stepped out. He looked around the well furnished room, noting the numerous paintings on the wall, predominately portraits with people posessing the pointed ears Glyure had. He sat down at the large round table in the middle of the room and looked at the object Glyure had lectured him about not keeping clean. \'A biolance...\' Ruben said softly to himself. He looked at it, unsure of what to do. But he resolved that it was his after all, and picked it up. It was devoid of distinguishing features, it was just a box-like object. He lifted it to eye level and looked in the hole. He was astonished to see an intricate maze of copper, gold and silver coloured wires, dotted with small emerald green diamond shapes which pulsed strangely.
He stared at it for a few minutes longer, but with a sharp reminder of his hunger, layed it down on the table and, walking towards the front door, went outside. He stepped out and took a deep breath. He looked around, and spotted a path inbetween the thick trees. Ruben sighed and strolled towards it.
All this mistery wasn\'t good for him...
Inventory:
Same as above.
Equipped:
Same as above, though now wearing his boots.
Status:
Vision slightly sharper than before.
Company:
Glyure... a woman with a whip, pointy ears, and a secret.
The area surrounding Glyures house was comprised mainly of rolling, green hills dotted with very large trees, low, with widespread branches. Ruben turned and looked in the room he had slept in, spotted his clothing and pulled them on hastily. Strangely, he noticed that his knife was missing.
After a few minutes of thought, Ruben felt the ever present grumbling in his stomach. He slowly opened the door and stepped out. He looked around the well furnished room, noting the numerous paintings on the wall, predominately portraits with people posessing the pointed ears Glyure had. He sat down at the large round table in the middle of the room and looked at the object Glyure had lectured him about not keeping clean. \'A biolance...\' Ruben said softly to himself. He looked at it, unsure of what to do. But he resolved that it was his after all, and picked it up. It was devoid of distinguishing features, it was just a box-like object. He lifted it to eye level and looked in the hole. He was astonished to see an intricate maze of copper, gold and silver coloured wires, dotted with small emerald green diamond shapes which pulsed strangely.
He stared at it for a few minutes longer, but with a sharp reminder of his hunger, layed it down on the table and, walking towards the front door, went outside. He stepped out and took a deep breath. He looked around, and spotted a path inbetween the thick trees. Ruben sighed and strolled towards it.
All this mistery wasn\'t good for him...
Inventory:
Same as above.
Equipped:
Same as above, though now wearing his boots.
Status:
Vision slightly sharper than before.
Company:
Glyure... a woman with a whip, pointy ears, and a secret.
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« on: June 08, 2005, 12:19:49 am »
UTM is right, I thought there was no \"official\" storyline? I thought WE made it?! I\'m not as impressed with the concept of PS anymore, that was the source of some of the original appeal for me, contributing little bits to achieve a greater thing, I didn\'t think we had to conform to the set storyline...
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« on: June 07, 2005, 05:06:20 pm »
I have a feeling that there is already published story with that name...
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« on: June 07, 2005, 02:54:31 am »
It is much more likely to liven it up, and I\'d like to share my writing without it having to be related to Planeshift directly. It ca nstill be used by the team, they just need to shift things around a bit to incorporate it into the story.
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« on: June 07, 2005, 01:21:01 am »
It isn\'t like it would be this major hassle though
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