Thanky all. Yes, given my limited knowledge of this artsy stuff I think it turned out well. The poem, meh, I'm not a poem type of person, but I think I had a little inspiration that night.
And thanks Zanzibar, I do know this now, but the screenshots were taken 7 monts ago, and well, I didn't exactly have a game to log into this past week to get a better one. Ah well. Thanks for all the support. I'm thinking he'll see it eventually.