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DormentBlackstress

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DormentBlackstress Comes to Town.
« on: July 21, 2005, 04:39:24 am »
http://www.seanflannigan.com/page7.html

My website isn\'t up yet.. but this is a begining of my Hydlaa Travel stories.. let me know what you think.

Sincerely,
Dorment Blackstress.

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« Reply #1 on: July 21, 2005, 04:41:05 am »
o.O  planescape?

that said, sounds interesting.
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« Reply #2 on: July 21, 2005, 11:28:13 am »
I actually quite enjoyed that, change the name though, planescape sounds bad.
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« Reply #3 on: July 21, 2005, 03:14:49 pm »
fixed it THanks!
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« Reply #4 on: July 21, 2005, 04:43:46 pm »
And the world woyld be better called yliakum...Illium is a nice name though...and I love this Gloki...he sounds like a true caring, wonderful, handsome, clever, strong, everything nice, dwarf....

The story is nice...the use of pictures is excellent...and your spelling is a little off.
Well done though...


GLOKI!
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« Reply #5 on: July 26, 2005, 11:52:53 pm »
Hey Dorment!

Nice Work! I really like the way you gather text and pictures. Keep going man, you are doing great. And this guy, Gloki...*weird name by the way...* seems to be interesting (if he has nothing common with the one I know)  =p .

Lindrae
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« Reply #6 on: July 27, 2005, 03:23:19 am »
Pssst.. It\'s Yliakum, not Yllium.
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« Reply #7 on: July 31, 2005, 04:28:23 pm »
oops yes lots o mistakes but thanks for the feedback!  I\'ll fix the necessary stuff with the next chapter.  Thanks everyone!
*Dorment bows the room*
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