Ok, a few problems with this...
1. Why would other people want to write a story about your character?
2. You do realize the taboo of trying to roleplay with a character who\'s name has a number in it(I\'m not even going to mention the reference to an operating system).
3. You need to work on your knowledge of the PS setting. The \"Planeshift Temple\"? I assume you mean the Temple of Laanx. If so, say so. Also, \"Planeshift\" does not exist in RP. Yliakum does. Who is \"the father\"? Vodul, Talad, Laanx? It better not be Laanx, because having him as a \"father\" well, ugh... If it\'s not Laanx, then whose temple are we talking about?
The list goes on, but those are a few points you must fix before even attempting to continue with this...