[Ok...so i've wanted to write a story for awhile...and over the past few months, ive written several beginnings, several endings...but no story. Well this time ive started again, since i was bored the other night, and im hoping by posting it on the forum, i will be encouraged to finish it. Please feel free to comment with ideas, thoughts, corrections etc, as all would be most welcome
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The trouble began with the clanging of pots and the crashing of plates. It was a very abrupt start to Ely's day, and the loud clamor had her up and out of bed within seconds, bolting down the stairs without even her slippers. Early morning light poured in through every window in the townhouse, but she scarcely noticed as she ran frantically to the source of the commotion. Quick past the study, down one more flight of stairs and Ely came to an abrupt halt. There, sitting in amidst many fallen pans and broken crockery, with tears pouring down her flour-coated chubby face, sat Gimma, looking as if her world had broken along with the kitchenware. Ely gingerly tip-toed through the debris and crouched by the old Xacha, grabbing ahold of one hefty arm to help her to her feet.
“Now, now Gimma, what has you in such mood this morning, eh?” She smiled at the old cook, hoping to lighten the mood somewhat.
“Why Miss Ely, tis' nothin' really...Jus' a bit of bad luck” Gimma scrubbed at her face, but only succeeded in making herself even more of a floury mess. Ely looked around at the debris and bent to pick up a piece of broken plate, shaking her head gently as she looked back up.
“Well this doesn't seem like nothing to me..What in Yliakum happened here?” Ely quickly grabbed a nearby stool and slid it behind Gimma's extensive posterior, just as she began to sway suddenly. Gimma collapsed onto the offered stool and gave Ely a look of gratitude, wiping her face once more.
“Well Miss, it went like this, see? I was jus' sittin' here cookin' some bread, see? An' all of a sudden, this....this....THING, comes crashin' through that window, there” She waved one pudgy hand to the far side of the kitchen, where indeed, the window was smashed, the shutter hanging by one iron hinge.
"Well, I says to m'self 'Self, you can let that....THING...mess up your kitchen, an' smush your breads into bits, OR, ye can teach it a lesson or two' “ Gimma waved her other hand to her right, where her large broom lay broken in two.
“So, I get the broom, an' start chasin' him alllll around the kitchen, see? An' FINALLY, he leaves..but not before grabbing my nice fresh bread an' takin' it wiv him!!” Her bottom lip started wobbling dangerously, and Ely hastily grabbed a nearby hand-towel to daub at her eyes, which were beginning to leak again. Ely sighed and carefully maneuvered her way across the kitchen to the broken broom, so she could begin cleaning up the mess. This certainly was not what she had been planning for today.
A few hours later, the kitchen was cleaned, an order was out for new plates, and Gimma was bustling around the kitchen, humming happily to herself as she prepared a fresh loaf of bread. Ely was finally able to retreat back upstairs to her room to change, pausing a few moments in front of her boudoir before selecting her favorite violet dress. The dress had been a gift from one of her various aunts, she couldn't quite recall which one, and despite several patches and a frayed hem, it still remained her favorite. Her mother had come from a family of nine girls, which certainly made family gatherings quite interesting, if not chaotic. A quick glance in the mirror proved why this dress was her favorite; her hazel eyes absolutely popped, and her dark hair seemed to shine even brighter, each vagrant curl falling perfectly into place. Ely grinned to herself and did a quick twirl in front of the mirror before dashing back downstairs towards the front door. She briefly paused by the entrance and bent down by a large red vase, carefully plucking a book from behind its glossy sides and stowing it safely among her skirts. Then with an impish grin, she bolted out the door onto the streets of Hydlaa.
Ely soon paid for her hastiness, and was nearly run over by an ostentatious looking Diaboli, wielding a large ladle and several giant brown bags. Was it not for his loud “Harrumph!”, Ely would surely have been trampled. She giggled and shook her head, watching him stomp farther down the road, a stormy expression now clouding his dark face.
“Sorry Mister!!” Ely shrugged to herself, and then briefly scanned the street for any more travelers before flying down the hill towards the plaza. She stopped short at the bottom of the hill and turned down an alley instead, finally stopping at the foot of a large, gnarly tree. Its tall arms twisted and stretched past even the rooftops, the leaves creating a natural dome of green shading most of the small back alley. Ely carefully removed both shoes and leapt up to grasp the nearest branch, swinging easily up into the tree. She managed to climb halfway up the tree with no problems, until suddenly she realized she had stepped onto the wrong branch. The next logical step was far too high for her to reach with just her feet, she would have to cling to a higher branch and swing to it. Ely sighed irritably and grasped the higher branch tightly, preparing to swing. Yet, fortune was not on her side that day, and the second her feet left the branch beneath her, her hands began to slip. Ely swung back and forth wildly, trying to reach the next branch with her toes, yet to no avail. Finally, just as the last ounce of strength left her fingers, she felt an arm around her waist, pulling her back to safety. A dry chuckle pierced the silence over her left shoulder, and Ely immediately grimaced.
“Tirin unhand me this instant!” She gripped another branch and turned wildly to face the laughing Dermorian.
“M'lady should be a tad more careful climbing trees, eh?” His grin grew even wider, as he surveyed her face with his wide green eyes. “One might slip and fall, and THEN what on earth would I say to your father?” Ely huffed angrily and carefully climbed back down to another branch to climb back up the correct way. Finally she reached her destination, and easily swung onto one of the rooftops, quickly followed by Tirin, who was never more then a step behind her when climbing trees.
“Tirin? What would you have done if I fell?” Ely found it impossible to be mad at the dermorian...he was just so impossibly CUTE! Tirin grinned impishly and gently chucked Ely under the chin.
“Why miss, do you doubt my catching skills? I would have sprouted wings and flown you to the ground, just as steady as you please” He quickly vaulted to the tallest part of the roof and sat in his customary place, facing the plaza. Ely made a face at him for his cheekiness, and wandered to sit beside him.
“I thought you couldn't come today anyways...weren't you supposed to be training with your father?” she smiled and pulled the book from her skirts “Look, I even brought something to do by myself” She flipped through the pages, displaying a multitude of sketches and drawings of the plaza.