Clearly, Rinenud knows nada 'bout street art. He just dissin' fool, y'know what I sayin'? So I gonna give you some real critics, coz dat's what real homies do, y'know?
So listen, yo, ya poetry need more street flavour, dawg. Like, y'know, it hafta be more street. I ain't no poet but I gonna tell you dis:
Yo, listen. I'ma tryin' to tell ya
Yea, you look dope in dat plate,
Dose fools dis my intentions
But I gonna bust deir f***'en heads.
Coz In dat metallic shizzle
Yea, ya lookin' goddamn tasty, babe,
An' I ain't got no can opener
But tonite, yo I tellin' ya,
You is sweatin' in ma bed.
Oh, I hafta see ya bend dere, baby
Let's get down, we need no words,
All you's gonna say is "more"
Yo, when I sheathe ma f***'en sword.
Y'know what I sayin'?