PlaneShift
Fan Area => Fan Art => Topic started by: JellyWerker on November 14, 2004, 05:57:25 am
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This is a simple flying creature I am working on, it is unfinished, untextured, and low poly, although I will make a high poly version later. Crticism is appreciated.
(http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v504/jellywerker/flyer.jpg)
It is meant to be batlike, while still having a lizardlike body.
Edit: Also, if someone wants to make a texture, they are welcome.
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Looks like a bird that has HUGE wings. The wings on a bat come out where our arms would come out. Not from the back. Also, curve the wings so the look more natural. Finally, The body isnt balanced. put more on the back or less on the front.
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I agree with everything FESFES just said (it\'s so much easier to type, FES, than \"Efflixi Aduro\"). Nice job on keeping the poly count low, though depending on how big this is meant to be you might consider putting some more detail into the head and where the legs meet the body. Can\'t wait to see it skinned.
:emerald:
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Ok, thanks, I am going to put more detail into the head, I just don\'t know what it should look like yet, and I will reposition the arms and bulk it up, well, not right now though, got to go to a regatta.