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Fan Area => The Hydlaa Plaza => Topic started by: Enter_the_Xero on December 12, 2004, 01:52:40 am

Title: Horror Story
Post by: Enter_the_Xero on December 12, 2004, 01:52:40 am

I have written a horror story ({PG}),

http://www.cogashut.com/site_1/asolipd.htm

Whacha think? Suggestions? Flamers? Compliments?

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Post by: WiseKran on December 12, 2004, 03:19:07 am

BRAVO!

well done! i enjoyed it immensly. it could have used a bit more of a climax leading to the end, perhaps a more detailed conflict with complications making it more suspensefull and horrifying.

and the Epilogue was a tad bit morbid...

none the less it was a great story. perhaps you will refine it. it kept me on the edge!

have you written anything else? i like your action packed style, and would like to read more short thrillers!

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Post by: snow_RAveN on December 12, 2004, 03:25:22 am

its a good short story but not my cup of tea (once the hero gets a gun it usually goes down hill for me unless its a zombie movie) .you should be proud of what you have done.

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Post by: WiseKran on December 12, 2004, 03:43:44 am

i usually like medieval/science fiction fantasy.  but i can go for one of those Silent hill or resident evil  type blasting demon zombie things brains out


they are good for excitement now and then