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Fan Area => Roleplaying (Communitive Storywriting) => Poetry, Comedy, and other. => Topic started by: Burntleaf on March 28, 2005, 02:44:37 pm

Title: A Long short story (it's actually short)
Post by: Burntleaf on March 28, 2005, 02:44:37 pm

This is my deeply shallow nonsense story. Hope you like it.

Far away in the huge expanse of flatland, a rock and a worm were arguing on a hill. The rock was smooth and rough and the worm was long but short.
\"Goodbye\", said the rock with its non-existent mouth.
The worm was rather taken aback as he squirmed forwards shaking a fist at the still rock that was walking away.
\"Moving on\", said the worm.
\"Umm how can one move on from nothingness\", uttered the rock in confusion.
\"The simple answer is not, as you will not see, is that i am not one, but two!?\"The worm(s) was now facing the rock, facing as in a a position in which one end of the worm was square on in its circular 1st dimension on with the rock.
The worms melted and soaked into the marble beneath their feet.
\"Where am i?\"said the rock.

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Sorry people if this is an inappropriate post for this section, i just remembered it was about PS.

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Post by: snow_RAveN on March 28, 2005, 03:13:32 pm

*blink* *blink*

err... Ooookay ?
ermm maybe you should like .. you know ...  LAY OFF THE GOD DAMMED WEED WHEN YOU WATCH THE MATIRX !!!!!!!! Mmmmkay ? :P

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Post by: Burntleaf on March 28, 2005, 03:27:44 pm

*sniff* im sorry... is there a limit on how many words in a reply, like so you cant just say *sniff*?

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Post by: snow_RAveN on March 28, 2005, 03:38:46 pm

err kinda, mooige gets angry when you post to little words in a post, and sometimes when she gets angry she bans people so stay clear :P :D

anyways welcome to the fourms i hope you find your stay enjoyable

p.s. if you want to leave dont post a thread that your leaving and the same goes for comming back !

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Post by: Burntleaf on April 02, 2005, 11:05:26 pm

yeah and i dont wish to feel the wrath...?

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Post by: dragonfire999 on April 12, 2005, 11:53:26 pm

im scared...

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Post by: DepthBlade on April 13, 2005, 02:10:49 am

lol it made me laugh, nice work!

Atleast the guy is trying to produce something its more then I can say for half of you or more ^^

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Post by: Under the moon on April 13, 2005, 04:23:06 am

Could we see some more...or would that be less...or perhaps sideways? I really like this rock character. ;) Very abstract. :)

Good (strange but good) work.

Ignore Moogie, her bite is far worse than her breath. :D

*grabs a passing cloud and disappears into the rock\'s shadow.*

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Post by: John_Thazer on April 13, 2005, 10:26:41 am

I like it...I do...(can\'t find a more word to express himself, that rarely happens)