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Fan Area => The Hydlaa Plaza => Topic started by: Annah on June 29, 2005, 10:24:21 am
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Greetings.
Lately, in the Hydlaa Plaza, were started several threads with \"off topic\" art, and even writings. I guess it\'s okay, if I\'ll start myself such a thread, though, focused on poetry. So basically, I\'ll post here some of my poems, and if you want, you can comment on them, saying what you like, and of course, what you dislike.
Until the end of the year, I hope I\'ll have a book published (together with a friend, she\'s an awesome writer), so you can imagine I need as many points of view as I can get.
Of course, if you have some poems and you\'re willing to share them, feel free to post them in here.
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LOVE POEMS
Paths of life
I once thought my destiny is forever sealed
Though, the love that slept within me was revealed
When by chance you?ve entered my life
And time began to elapse without strife
You gave me a new meaning
And together we?ve started a new beginning
For three years I?ve admired your way to be
And this time I always wanted that you could see
That I?ll sure love you for an eternity
We were lost in this world of darkness
And what we needed was a bit of toughness
To realize my love for you is somewhere
And together we just need to search it out there
One night your tears dropped from the sky
And was the only thing that made me cry
I am in love with your body, your soul, your mind
And I wish everyone would be so kind
Like you have always tried
I once promised I?ll show you the world
You know my desire, and that is to trust in my word
Because one day I?ll give you the long promised tiara
And we?ll see the world, from Romania to Sahara
The life we?ve always dreamed at
Will then be a reality to look at
And together we shall reign
Over the land, over the sea
And in this time, the only thing you?ll see
Will be the love I carry for you my beauty!
Tears of an angel
Surrounded by an aching sorrow
Guarding just the serenity of a hollow
You have once shed a tear
Believing you are to no one dear
And through all the heaven?s fire
You have left your empire
Then you have entered my world
And what I know, is that you felt so cold
Your eyes were close to a lifeless sapphire
Forgotten in an endless ire
All covered in a mind with no desire
Though, with you I fell in love
And soon, you became my little dove
Turning all your cold screams
Into beautiful dreams
Now, the only thing you need to see
Is how much you mean to me
And that I?ll wipe your tears, for an eternity!
Mesmerized
To you when I look
Is just like a book
That opens its pages
Though, forbidden in cages
Through your eyes I can see
What many call an endless sea
Where my soul wants to hide
Covered by your delight
Then I?ll sure be satisfied
That we?ll together be united
And the bond that was formed between us
Will never be broken by any of us
But until then, my heart still in agony is beating
And my soul is still broken apart, wondering
Only if you already knew
How much I did love you
To me when you look
Is just like a book
That closes its pages
Though, forgotten for ages
Elly
One day, a precious girl came to me
That showed me, the way everything should be
And was the first time in my life, when everything was so clear
When I could have looked towards my future, without fear
She was so beautiful and to me so close
She was my charming dream rose
Like her, there?s just a few in the world
A girl that can cure you of everything that?s cold
That can make you feel special, with just a word
You can get lost in her dark brown eyes
And what you?ll find there, is a bit of spice
That will change your life forever
And will make you never leave her, ever
What?s so different about her, maybe you?ll never know
But if you?ll stay more moments around her, you?ll see how
Everything for you is changing
That she?ll get into your dreams
Where you?ll both create your own world, that for you it spins
Though, if you?ll know her better, you?ll find someone that more fragile she is
That needs someone to care for her, something more than this
Something more than just some promises
Someone that for her can shed his tears
A mysterious girl for some
An opened soul if something known for few is done
A perfect girl that came into my life
A girl that would always be to others nice
A person so dear to me, who straight from my soul will receive
The life she had always dreamt at, if she?ll only in me will believe
Together Forever
When you gave me that first look
I already knew, that a new book
Will have its chapters written
And that my life, to you is given
I once told you that we?ll be together forever
And I?ll leave you, never
I?ll keep my promise no matter what
And just remember, that anywhere my mind is driving
My heart, still for you is beating
Oh, my darling
Even when you?re crying
Just remember I am to you near
And I?ll wipe away, your every tear
This is a life you?ll never be alone
At me, you?ll always have an open arm to lean upon
And sad if you?ll be, you?ll just have to let me see you through
Because I really do know you so well
And at least a happy word, is something for you I can tell
If someone will try to hurt you
Do not worry little angel, I won?t let anyone this to do
And if any night you?ll feel alone
Just remember I?m always thinking at you, and the loneliness will be gone
I don?t care what paths you?ll follow
Because I?ll be there, near you, filling the hollow
And no matter what, forever the same I?ll love you
And no matter what, I?ll stand by you
I don?t know what shall happen with us, and I guess I won?t, ever
Though, what I know, is that we?ll be together, forever
DARK POEMS
Fallen
Fallen, fallen in disgrace I feel
Sitting alone in the dark, and still
With my faithful eyes I try to see
The light that needs to be around me
An aching pain grows inside
A heavy rain burns as well from outside
The wings of torments cover me
Embraced by insanity, taken into agony
Fallen, fallen in despair I feel
Like my world is kissed by the eternal seal
Why everything seems so sad?
Then, in silence to me I whisper: am I dead?
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When I\'ll have time, I\'ll update the list. As some of you might know, since two days ago my final exams started, so \"this\" time would be somewhere in the future. Just a note, my first grade taken at the exams was at Romanian, and it was a 10 out of 10!
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Ah yes, and for who wants, you can vote some of my poems in here:
Poems & Quotes Profile (http://www.poems-and-quotes.com/author.html?id=105408)
Every vote would be appreciated.
Thanks,
Antonio S.