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Fan Area => Roleplaying (Communitive Storywriting) => Topic started by: DormentBlackstress on July 21, 2005, 11:39:24 am

Title: DormentBlackstress Comes to Town.
Post by: DormentBlackstress on July 21, 2005, 11:39:24 am

http://www.seanflannigan.com/page7.html

My website isn\'t up yet.. but this is a begining of my Hydlaa Travel stories.. let me know what you think.

Sincerely,
Dorment Blackstress.

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Post by: Drey on July 21, 2005, 11:41:05 am

o.O  planescape?

that said, sounds interesting.

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Post by: dragonfire999 on July 21, 2005, 06:28:13 pm

I actually quite enjoyed that, change the name though, planescape sounds bad.

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Post by: DormentBlackstress on July 21, 2005, 10:14:49 pm

fixed it THanks!

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Post by: leuxast on July 21, 2005, 11:43:46 pm

And the world woyld be better called yliakum...Illium is a nice name though...and I love this Gloki...he sounds like a true caring, wonderful, handsome, clever, strong, everything nice, dwarf....

The story is nice...the use of pictures is excellent...and your spelling is a little off.
Well done though...


GLOKI!

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Post by: Lindrae on July 27, 2005, 06:52:53 am

Hey Dorment!

Nice Work! I really like the way you gather text and pictures. Keep going man, you are doing great. And this guy, Gloki...*weird name by the way...* seems to be interesting (if he has nothing common with the one I know)  =p .

Lindrae

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Post by: Phinehas on July 27, 2005, 10:23:19 am

Pssst.. It\'s Yliakum, not Yllium.

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Post by: DormentBlackstress on July 31, 2005, 11:28:23 pm

oops yes lots o mistakes but thanks for the feedback!  I\'ll fix the necessary stuff with the next chapter.  Thanks everyone!
*Dorment bows the room*