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Fan Area => Roleplaying (Communitive Storywriting) => Topic started by: Konogan on August 11, 2005, 12:09:31 am

Title: I'm not a slave
Post by: Konogan on August 11, 2005, 12:09:31 am

What my name? I don\'t have \'a\' name, I was born in the Doar mines, Doar was an evil man who take my parents as slave, every one who born in these mines was called \'slave\'. Doar put a lot of other dwarves as slaves, so the Great council of Smurland decided to free all dwarves and kill Doar. A mercenary was called to do that, this man was Konogan.

My father and my mother were killed before Konogan free us, when I was free, I was young, so Konogan decide to take me like his son, he ask my name, I answered ? called me slave ?, he asked me why I want to be named Slave, I explained that it help me to remember myself my past.

And at this time, I decided to serve Konogan, my new Master

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Post by: Keyaz on August 11, 2005, 12:30:04 am

a simple dwarf with a simple dream eh?

it\'ll do to keep yer name ^^

as time passes you may want to rewrite this, adding more detail and expanding your horizon :)

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Post by: Burntleaf on August 11, 2005, 02:20:09 pm

yes i love your use of simple language...   You could be the next P.R Bromtheim.. The guy who wrote \'The calender of doom\'. It was a big hit in Bulgaria you know.

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Post by: Konogan on August 11, 2005, 04:15:57 pm

My english is bad, I know sorry for that...

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Post by: Burntleaf on August 11, 2005, 07:05:33 pm

HUH! That wasnt an insult to ur english by the way

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Post by: Taurenthefirst on August 12, 2005, 02:13:56 am

i like it.  i don\'t think a slave would really have a really long or complicated story... he probably wouldn\'t be very literate, and would just have something short and simple like this. :tup: