PlaneShift
Fan Area => Roleplaying (Communitive Storywriting) => Topic started by: leuxast on October 07, 2005, 12:45:14 am
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Chapter 1.
The Reason
The dwarf sat on the rock. She looked broken, an empty shell. Around her fires raged, lighting her weathered, mournful face with broken light, dancing in a brutally cheerful pattern off the walls to reflect in her tears like a frosted looking glass. A Kran strode out of the smoke towards her. She raised her head, her face filled with the dawning realization that her end was near. The Kran raised his almighty broadsword. ?My name is Kenti!? he roared, ?Let mine be the last face you look upon!?. A bright flash of steel shot through the humid air and lopped off her head. The merciless Kran turned his back on her dead body and walked away. Not looking. Not caring.
Chapter 2.
The Revenge
Gloki Aslian lifted the Kran high above his head. ?You killed my mother!? he screamed wrathfully.The Kran panicked at the fearsome sight and whimpered ,?I was made to.?
?Coward!? , said the dwarf chillingly ,?you would kill an innocent old woman but you do not dare to face me!?.
?No-one calls me a coward, let alone a dwarf,? roared the Kran.,?Give me a sharp sword and I will murder you where you stand, as I did your mother!?
?No Kenti,? the dwarf replied,?We fight like men, no weapons but our hands, no armour but our skin, and no power but our own!?
Chapter 3.
The Redemption
As I bent over the bloody, pulverized carcass I realized how worthless it had been. It did not bring comfort. It did not stop the memories. It did not bring her back. It made me a murderer. It made me like him.
My quarrel was over, at least for now. I was content, yet no better than before. I had to return to my guild, for they were a part of me, and to lose them was to die inside. If they would accept me back, soiled as I was.
Chapter 4.
The Return
The jovial dwarf skipped along, playing on his beaten pipes a bright, bouncy tune. He sat by the gates to the guild hall he knew so well, knocked, and prepared himself, but one thing was certain, he would have a fine tale to tell tonight.
PS: As you might have guessed, I\'m back, but as Gloki Aslian rather than Gloki Verrxe.
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Excuse me...? Why are you posting about me? And why did you make me a coward? I never whimpered, I said I didn\'t kill your mother >.>
Exageration people, don\'t listen
EDIT: Also, Kenti was a melee fighter, I never used swords accept for after the wipe...Get your facts straight
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Exactly kenti, don\'t you see? I left the Planeshift after the introduction of super swords, so this story takes place during that time. And also it had the use of STOPPING the quarrel between us...hopefully.
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We never quarreled, but I wish you wouldn\'t have posted about me behind my back and make my character a wimp...Also not lie about my character using sharp objects to fight, he was always a melee character (and I only used swords after the wipe because melee was too hard to train with the new level up system implimented)
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Never quarreled my beard! Me? Make your character a wimp? Well....compared to me...
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I do like the story and had wished it to be longer. You write well and I did enjoy however....
upon reading the posts there after I thought if Suno_Regin does not want his name used maybe you should edit?
Tis the gentleman thing to do :)
I do leave that up to you but it does spoil your story just a little
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Originally posted by Dylia
... I thought if Suno_Regin does not want his name used maybe you should edit?
Tis the gentleman thing to do :)...
I have to agree with Dylia-but it is your decision as she said...
That much said:
Leuxast wrote:PS: As you might have guessed, I\'m back, but as Gloki Aslian rather than Gloki Verrxe.
/me smiles brightly ear-to-ear.
Welcome back, Brother Dwarf, your presence was sorely missed. Ye who led me on my first steps in Yliakum, and who always brightened Hydlaa Plaza with your antics. :)
It is a joy to have you back with us, and I look forward to seeing you again in-game! You will find much has transpired since you were last here. ;)