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Fan Area => Roleplaying (Communitive Storywriting) => Topic started by: Guest on October 11, 2005, 04:28:10 pm

Title: wannabe Enkidukai bard
Post by: Guest on October 11, 2005, 04:28:10 pm

as I was gathering ratbits ...inspiration struck


\"rat, rat, my favorite snack;
 the more they spawn, the more I swack\"


GENIUS, I tell ya!

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Post by: yayoo on October 11, 2005, 06:25:55 pm

I dont know if we are allowed post 2 line poems but what the hell

Trepor there Trepor here
Trepor wearing underwear :O

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Post by: dragonfire999 on October 12, 2005, 01:11:03 am

This is so stupid... why did you post this in the RP section?

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Post by: Guest on October 12, 2005, 03:45:59 am

well dragonfire, you certainly added some much-needed intelligence with your staggering wit =P

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Post by: dragonfire999 on October 12, 2005, 04:21:26 am

Okay , want critisism?
Enkidukai dont eat rats, We arent your regular cat. And cats dont eat them anyways, the chase the rats tail. Also, saying that they spawn isnt very in character, no?

And Yayoo

Saying that trepors are wearing underwear is just plain immature, which can be expected from one of your age (10)

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Post by: dragonfire999 on October 12, 2005, 04:33:58 am

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Originally posted by dragonfire999
Okay , want critisism?
Enkidukai dont eat rats, We arent your regular cat. And cats dont eat them anyways, they chase the rats tail. Also, saying that they spawn isnt very in character, no?

And Yayoo

Saying that trepors are wearing underwear is just plain immature, which can be expected from one of your age (10)