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Fan Area => Fan Art => Topic started by: Thorain on October 31, 2005, 04:17:54 pm

Title: Female Diaboli...?
Post by: Thorain on October 31, 2005, 04:17:54 pm

Since i love flipping around in the fan art area and really enjoy looking at other peoples creative work, i want to post a picture i did some time ago, long time before i knew planeshift exists.

I know she is not beautiful and her head and face look deformed (i was not very experienced at drawing faces), but if you dont look at this or the wings, doesnt she have something in common with a female diaboli?

(http://img333.imageshack.us/img333/3962/klein1xr.th.jpg) (http://img333.imageshack.us/my.php?image=klein1xr.jpg)

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Post by: Draklar on October 31, 2005, 04:36:34 pm

The emboss for the flames looks pretty cool, works quite nicely the way you used it.
Eheh, but sometimes I get the impression that the hair are actually burning ;)

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Post by: Gentar on October 31, 2005, 09:17:25 pm

why does everyone have to make a zillion new threads??!? just make a thorain\'s art thread!

p.s. not bad

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Post by: WizardsRule on November 01, 2005, 04:22:39 am

Nice wor, but you might try curving out the chin area.  Currently, it just seems too blocky.

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Post by: Thorain on November 01, 2005, 10:45:24 am

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Originally posted by Gentar
why does everyone have to make a zillion new threads??!? just make a thorain\'s art thread!

Yes... youre right, Gentar, did not think about it... dont be too strikt with a forum-newbie  :)

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Originally posted by Draklar
Eheh, but sometimes I get the impression that the hair are actually burning ;)

You got me Draklar, i like things that burn :)

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Post by: Claire Voyant on November 21, 2005, 04:42:46 pm

D:

Well I don\'t think you have a bad concept (I realize a lot of time has passed since this was posted) but anyways, first you\'ll want to get facial features a bit more accurate. The eyes seem too close, and the overall face structure is too \'blocky\' remember women are very curvy, epsecially this race in PS.


Also, your colors are too flat and don\'t go so well the the flames you put in there. The flames I think take away the eye from the picture and are to distracting.


D: Overall, your general layout isn\'t bad. I think you just need to mainly work more on bringing your characters/drawings to life rather than have them just sit flat on a page. :3


Good luck.

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Post by: Dylia on November 23, 2005, 01:04:18 pm

I believe you have a job well done on the collar bone structure but her eyes are very kind I will say that; maybe a little more diamond shaped may look very nice. (but then again I am not the maker ;) ) I do think overall it is very good and well put together. I do hope that if you work on it you will post the changes (hint hint :P)