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Title: The Story Of Zorbels
Post by: zorbels on November 05, 2005, 11:44:38 pm
:D This story is dedicated to the creators of PS. I tried to write my story keeping planshift in the back of my mind. Please let me know through PM's if you see something not right. All the events you are about to read have taken place and have come from my PS logs. Please email or Pm me if you do not like something that I have written about. Enjoy......

[Edit] I just thought I might add this is my first story ever written. I quite enjoy PS, so thank you PS for bring this new talent out in me :D
Title: Chapter One
Post by: zorbels on November 05, 2005, 11:46:15 pm
                                   
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I walked through town thinking of a way to tell the people of Yliakum my life story. A Dwarf, with strange colored hair runs by in a huff. He grunts and glares at me as he passes.
"Tis a great day and good hunting to you" I say, shaking my head and chuckling to myself. Got to love those stonebreakers and admire their culture. They may be high tempered but they are great warriors trained in warfare skills and magic. Though their magical abilities are not strong, they make up for it in their skills as blacksmiths. I have seen some fine weapons from those Dwarves. I think about my good friend Necro, who after many heated arguments and fun times had given me a Fire Claymore. That was my first solid sword. It was beautifully crafted, the claymore was thought to be slow ......but if it hit you, you felt it and sometimes didn't get up.

I was almost to the sewers in Hydlaa city. I was looking for a trainer, I knew Percival Hawthorn would be standing near the sewers because that is how he makes a living. He picks up newcomers and shows them around town telling them of his training skills, in hopes they will hire him to train them. I smiled to myself thinking of all the times I had paid him to train me. It was money worth spending I truly believe he was one of the finest trainers Hydlaa had. I was about to tell this great role model in my life that I must go my separate way for he had taught me all he knew.

"Stop right there, Lady Zorbels. I know that look in your eyes!" He let out a sigh and plopped down to the stone ground below with a soft thud. I said "M'Lord I don't know what you are talking about!" I tried to meet his eyes without looking away. I gave in, "Okay fine tell me if you know Lord Percival," I sat down beside him watching people hurry in and out of the sewers. "You are just as pushy as ever Zorbels" he smiled at me the way a dad would to his daughter. I suddenly felt sorrow. It is true I will probably see him from time to time, but would be training in Akkaio. I would not be spending afternoons in the fields with aggressive Trepors enjoying Lord Percival’s teachings of melee, agility, and swords.

"Zorbels, you must move on. You and I both know you are ready but I want you to know you are one of my best students.", he said. He gave me a huge grin and said "Now my goal is to find another who was once like yourself, always so full of questions, and rushing into things!" He added, "Lord Ogu is right you are hot headed." I laughed at the comment knowing if Lord Ogu was here he would be laughing with me. "Tis true M'Lord Percival but you and my guild have taught me patience and discipline. I know now I have lots to learn, but thanks to you I am able to be a little wiser in my dealings. I sighed and wonder where my life in Hydlaa will lead me next. After getting the name of a new trainer to enhance my growing skills I waved goodbye to my old friend and bounded off to the Plaza.

Then it hit me why not just write this story as I travel and remember things from my past. I could make notes of events I feel the people of Yliakium would want to know. I checked to see how much parchment I had, I didn’t want to run out while walking from one city to the other. I looked up at the sky and frowned. “Tis getting dark”, I thought and admired the movement of the clouds, and how graceful it all seemed.

I decided to go to the tavern in Hydlaa called Kada-el.  There I could stay for the night and rest my weary head.  It was like a second home to me there, for all of my companions stayed there if they did not live in Hydlaa. I wondered into the tavern and purchased a room. I threw my bag of supplies down by my bed, then I stripped down to nothing and crawled into the mass of blankets and pillows. I let the memories of my life in Yliakum wash over me as I laid there staring at the ceiling.  I thought about my guild and how I came to meet them, a smile crossing my face as I pictured Lord Eolius beating the rogue I so desperately wanted a good sword from. “I was so lost then,” I thought to myself. I was apart of a guild at that time. I did not understand what we stood for or why I had even joined it. It seemed like there wasn’t enough support for the members and I was looking desperately to get out of it. “I was so foolish back then,” I grumbled to myself. I was shy but my need to belong some where was much more overwhelming. I approached Lord Eolius and begin to ask him of his Guild. He was very kind I noticed right away and offered to give me a good sword if he came across one. This surprised me because he seemed to truly want to help me. My walls crumbled and I told him about how I was apart of a guild who did not help its own members and how I felt foolish to give myself over to them so easily. “I think you should be apart of a guild because you believe in what it stands for Lord Eolius, something I didn’t think about before I accepted this name,” I said unhappily. He smiled at me and replied  “Same thing happened to me with my first guild, so I quit and created one...” He seemed to go into a deep thought, then looked at me with interest. “Would you like to go for an adventure with me?” he asked. “Yes please” I replied to him excited at the chance to learn a thing or two from a guild master. We spent the day traveling the Yliakum country side hunting and talking about his guild and what their purpose was. After a long day we returned to Hydlaa to rest in the tavern. “I learned so much from you today M’Lord Eolius, and had so much fun!” I grinned still excited from the days hunt. Lord Eolius took a sip of his ale and said “ You are a wonderful student and if you decide my guild is for you I would be honored to have you join.” “I will think upon this tonight and contact you when I am ready with an answer M’Lord,” I smiled and waved goodbye as I headed for bed.

As I opened my eyes the next morning there was not doubt in my mind that I wanted to be part of the Protectors guild. I rushed to put my clothes on and hurried downstairs to see if Lord Eolius had gone hunting for the day. He was sitting at a table with a two of his guild members discussing guild business.  I later found out the two guild members were Lord Ogu and Lord Heroro. “I am sorry to interrupt but I was wondering Lord Eolius if I may join your guild?” I said in a hurry trying to catch my breath. “I put a lot of thought into my leaving the other guild and I realize it is my destiny to be in yours,” I felt strongly my words were true and this was my path. Lord Eolius, Ogu and Heroro exchanged glances and all started to grin at the same time. “We were just talking about you Lady Zorbels, to be honest and we are happy to hear that you would like to join,” said Lord Ogu extending his hand to meet with mine in a handshake. “Lord Ogu and Lord Heroro are my right and left hand men in the guild M’lady Zorbels,” said Lord Eolius with pride. I bowed and told them I was happy to make there acquaintance.
I sat down at the table with a little hint of distress in my eyes. “What is wrong M’Lady Zorbels?” Lord Eolius asked concerned. “Well M’Lord I am spoken for by a Kran named Stronith, and I am concerned now because he is still apart of this other guild I am to part with,” I frown not pleased with the task ahead of me. “We are like a package deal and I am not sure how he will take to me leaving this guild and joining another without talking with him first,” I looked up with worry in my eyes and then looked back down at the ground. “I truly would like him to join with us,” I said with a sorrow filled voice. “Talk with him Lady Zorbels and meet with us back here tonight” Lord Eolius said. “Yes let us see what Lord Stornith thinks of all of this and then we can make a decision,” Lord Ogu said to me gently. I promised I would do this and headed out the tavern door to speak with Stronith and face the task of telling my old guild that I was leaving.

I found Stronith slashing away at a rogue who had insulted him greatly. I grinned as I watched those rock arms move with blinding speed. I quietly crept up and whispered “I love you” in his ear while dodging his movements as he attacked the rogue. Stronith swung one last swing of his sword and took down the rogue. He turned around and picked me up into his arms. “I missed you my love, and am glad you are at my side,” Stronith said with warmth in his deep voice. “Were have you been?” he asked. I motioned for him to put me down and waited patiently. “What is wrong my love,” Stronith asked concerned slowly sliding me to the ground. I looked down at the ground and then up into his white eyes and frowned. You see Krans do not have pupils or irises like other creatures do. They have white only that covers every inch of there eyes. I wrapped my arms around him and gave him a gentle yet passionate kiss.

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“You make me melt Zorbels,” he sighed and looked down at me with a look of love that would melt any Ladies heart. This made me feel even worse about my decision making and I could only hope that he would not be angry with me. “I have met a guild master that has showed me what a true guild should be Stronith,” I smiled sadly at him. “I have left our guild to join with the Protectors for I feel it is the right path for me,” I looked into his eyes again expecting to see anger but only to find there was none. “My love you do not have to clear everything you do with me, though I am honored you take may word to heart,” he smiled. “As for switching the guilds I’m not angry with you for I to do not feel at home with them,” he frowned and put his arm around my shoulder pulling me in close. “My only concern is that I may not join with you as much for you will be with your new guild learning and hunting,” he sighed. “That is just the thing Stronith I was hoping you would consider joining with the protectors as well,” I smiled at him letting him see the hope in my eyes. “They have requested that we meet with them tonight in the tavern at Hydlaa city,” I said. “Lord Eolius will tell you of the guild and if you like what they stand for he is willing to have you join as well!” Stronith thought for a moment and then said “I will meet this guild master Eolius and listen to his information, but understand this Zorbels I may not want to join. After the last guild I am starting to wonder if there is any point to it,” Stronith looked at me and smiled. “Oh trust me Stronith I feel this guild has a good heart and they help others,” I paused and then continued “and they really take care of there own” I showed the excitement in my eyes. “Shall we go meet with them then my love?” Sronith asked. “Yes lets” as I grabbed his hand and pulled him forward.

That night Stonith and Lord Eolius sat in the corner talking about the guild, while I sat with Lord Ogu and Lord Heroro playing a game of cards. As we played Lord Ogu told me the story of the Armageddon that had taken place long before I came to Yliakum. Lord Ogu had me so involved in the story that I lost my card game. Stronith strolled over to me and announced that he was to join with the Protectors. I was pleased and let it show all over my face. I hopped up from my chair and threw my arms around his neck and hugged him with all my might. “Lord Ogu and Lord Heroro stood up to extend their hands for handshakes and to welcome him into the guild. A noise caught my attention and I looked over to see Lord Sasek from my old guild enter the tavern. I glanced over at Stronith with a worried look and then went to approach Lord Sasek to let him know I was no longer a member of his master’s guild. “Why M’Lady Zorbels did you leave?” asked Sasek curious with no hint of anger. I told him my reasons. “Well I completely understand for I am starting to feel the same way,” Sasek said with a frown. I asked Lord Sasek if he would like to join me for a hunt because I felt his need to talk about his problem with his guild. He agreed to this and off we went.


To Be Continued…

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Post by: Lolitra, Celorrim Purrty Twins on November 06, 2005, 12:00:07 am
can\'t wait for the next installment.
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Post by: Odessa Wildfire on November 06, 2005, 01:32:29 am
I could not stop reading... even my coffee went cold! (and thats saying something).

Im really looking foward to more :D.
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Post by: r.guppy on November 06, 2005, 06:11:02 am
I was spellbound more is all i will say.  :))
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Post by: zorbels on November 06, 2005, 06:04:00 pm
Thank you all. :D Your comments are encouraging and I will continue the story soon. I am working on it as we speak.
/me types furiously on the keyboard trying to get part two done
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Post by: shorty13 on November 09, 2005, 11:38:28 pm
Nice story, now do the story of Nibbles and how you came across the cute and fun-loving groffel.  :D
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Post by: zorbels on November 10, 2005, 02:29:26 am
:D That will come in time shorty 13. I am writing my story from when Zorbels first came to Yliakum. I am taking these events out of my logs, so I am not even close to adding in little Nibbles. Plus Nibs is only two days old and really has no stories to tell.... I have to create a character profile for Nibbles. Do not worry though my little companion will be added to the story at one point.
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Post by: shorty13 on November 10, 2005, 02:42:04 am
cool.  You do have a nice story there though.  Well done.
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Post by: Guest on November 10, 2005, 03:39:19 pm
keep it coming, Zorbs :)
very enjoyable
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Post by: Arka on November 14, 2005, 09:25:16 am
I have only one thing to say...

MORE!!!


Arka :D
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Post by: arcain on November 14, 2005, 04:05:51 pm
awsome story zorbels!i truly enjoyed it!thank you
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Post by: Alhana on November 16, 2005, 11:36:20 pm
Hmm, I wonder what will happen next ;)

Im looking foward to hearing about some familiar faces lol.
Title: Chapter two
Post by: zorbels on November 18, 2005, 11:16:15 pm
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Lord Sasek and I spoke of many things but one story he told caught my interest overall. He had mentioned Jorshera his father’s name. This attracted my attention because my parents Akezka and Boethius had mentioned my true parent’s name to me. You see I left my family at a very early age. I wandered off and got lost in a forest, blind with curiosity. After days trying to stay warm and live off of tree bark a couple of Ylians found me cold and half dead from hunger. They took me in as one of their own and brought me up. This would explain some of my Ylian traits.

My mother had run into Jorshera one day in the Hydlaa library while searching for a book.  Jorshera recognized the smell of me right away for I had not been separated from my family long enough for him to lose his sent of me. My foster parents agreed with Jorshera that it would be best for me to stay with them for Jorshera had his hands full with many other cubs, after losing my real mother to an illness that not even the best wizards or healers could treat.

Once Lord Sasek realized that I was his sibling he told me of another, his younger sister Lady Dylia. I was overjoyed to find that I had found some of my lost family and celebrated into the night with Lord Sasek and Lady Dylia. “It is so good to meet you sister,” Zorbels said excited. “I am glad we found you Lady Zorbels, I always felt there was something missing.” Dylia said with a warm smile. I hugged my sister so hard and cried tears of happiness into her shoulder. “You both must come and meet my guild members, they are like a second family to me,” I said excitedly. Both Lady Dylia and Lord Sasek showed interest in joining the guild and I was pleased when my guild offered to invite them in. “This to me is the best thing that could ever happen and the guild now truly is a family,” I smiled warmly at my guild members.


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The next few months to come I trained my skills like mad. Lord Ogu and I grew close everyday that past. He was my training master and helped me find my way around. He introduced me to the finest Trainers that Yliakum had. I learned of the wild life to be hunted in Yliakum as well. I spent most of my time in Trepor valley, and came to know many different races and guilds from Yliakum.

Stronith and I decided one afternoon that we would have an ale in the Kada-el tavern and then go hunting in Trepor valley to train my newly developed skills in swords. It was here that I met Sheridan and Harvey.

“Wheres that elf who was serving us ale the other day?” asked Stronith.

Sheridan replied, “No idea M’Lord Stronith but I will be happy to take over, I am sure they would not mind some help.” She casually strolled behind the bar and pulled out four mugs. She took one look at the inch of dust both on her fingers and the mugs and made a face. “Before I serve anything I must wash these mugs,” she said with disgust

“Whatever will make the ale pour,” Stronith replied, sitting down at the closest table to the bar. Stronith and I watched her scrub away as we held a casual conversation with Harvey.

“Ok what will it be?” asked Sheridan.

“I will have a Dwarven Ale and bring one for Harvey here to please,” Stronith said happy to finally have something to quench his thirst.

“I will have a cold milk with cinnamon myself please Sheridan,” I said while licking my lips. “Put it on my tab Sheridan….. my treat,”

Stronith smiled and slapped down some trias on the bar table.

“Stronith don’t think you are having another night like the last,” I scolded him. “You were walking in to the walls for goodness sake!”

“Ahhh never mind Zorbels I will not have a repeat of what went on the night before,” Stronith answered with a hint of teasing in his voice.

After a short time of drinking and talking about the hunts we’d all been on I started to feel anxious. “Shall we go and hunt Stronith?” I asked.

“Where are you off to hunt Lady Zorbels and Lord Stronith?” Sheridan asked curiously.

“I do believe we are heading out to Trepor valley M’Lady,” I replied as I stood up to show my impatience.

“May Harvey and I join you?” Sherdian asked politely.

“Yes that would be lovely, I am sure Lord Stronith and I would like the company,” I said with a warm smile. “Let us be off,” I declared readily.

Stronith stood and held up his hand. “Lady Zorbels I must go to the healer Lady Liera Zireti and buy a few healing potions, so I will catch up ok my love?” he said in his deep kran voice.

“Ok Stronith just don’t take too long or there may not be anything left to hunt,” I grinned with a hint of mischief in my voice.

“Till we meet again my sweet,” Stronith said as he picked me up in his arms and gave me a crushing hug.


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Sherdian, Harvey, and myself strolled towards Trepor Valley in a silence. We were all preparing for battle checking our equipment, picking our favorite weapons to hunt with. The day was clear and the wind crisp, the valley was full of trepors grazing. We set up a camp behind one of the big rocks down wind from the trepors, so that they wouldn’t smell us and be spooked.

I said in a hushed voice “Shall we start our hunt?”

Both Sherdain and Harvey nodded in unity. I made a hand signal pointing out one to the far right of me. “I will take this one” I whispered. I slowly crept up to the trepor making sure not to step on anything that might catch its attention.

I gripped my swords ready to strike when I heard a noise behind me and then heard Harvey cry out "Zorbels look out!”

It all happened so fast, as I turned I saw Harvey leap onto the trepor’s back that was about to take a bite out of me and bring his swords down hard onto its neck. The trepor’s head rolled off and in seconds Harvey was in front of me smiling.

"Wow that was quick and thank you for saving my life," I said, still stunned with the events that just taken place. "I didn't even hear the trepor coming," I said unhappy. I had just enough time to see Harvey smile and open his mouth to say something to me when I heard the trepor that I was originally hunting coming my way. "I got this one," I said.

 I turned preparing for the fight, and watched the trepor closing in for the kill. From its body movements I could tell it was about to lunge at me. I was right, it did lunge though I was prepared and laid flat on my back with my swords sticking up. As the trepor came falling towards me it realized its mistake but to late and landed on my swords. With an audible crunch, my swords pierced its stomach and in doing so trepor blood splattered all over Harvey and I. I rolled the dead trepor off me and got up with a disgusted look on my face. I must have been quite the sight because Harvey took on look at me and started laughing.

"What are you laughing about," I asked with a smile slowly spreading across my face, "You should see yourself." I giggled joyfully.

Sherdian came around a corner looking just as soaked and messy in trepor blood. Soon we were all rolling on the soft grassy ground laughing hard at the way each of us looked.

"I am here, Stronith announced happily. My eyes widened to see not only Stronith but an army of wild life behind him. At first the mess of Trepors, Tefusangs, Ulbers, Rats and Clackers didn’t make sense in my head.

“I have brought some hunting game for all,” said Stronith pleased with himself. Sheridan, Havery, and myself looked at one and other a slow grin started to form on all of our faces.

“I shall call this hunt The Parade,” I declared happily. We all rushed into battle, killing all in our sight. I looked over to see Sheradin pulling legs off a trepor, while Stronith lead the ulbernaut on a chase after him.

“Stronith you always did have too much ulberlust,” I shouted at him while I hacked away at a tefusang. Harvey was in his glory attacking a tefusang and two rats.

 “Look behind you Zorbels” Stronith laughed as the ulbernaut took a swing. Stronith ducked and plunged his short sword into the ulbernauts foot. The ulbernaut seemed surprised and Stronith took the opportunity to strike the ulber in the stomach with his long sword. I turned around to see that two trepors were about to be on top of me. I jumped into the air and landed on the one trepors back. The other lunged at me crashing into the other trepor and sending us all to the ground. As soon as the trepor who’s back I rode hit the ground, I rolled off so that my fall would have no impact. I stood up as soon as could get to my feet and turned to see the two trepors had decided to fight with each other.

For the next hour Harvey, Stronith, Sheridan and I hunted.

“I say we head back to the tavern and get cleaned up,” I called to my hunting group.

“I think that is a great idea,” Stronith said happily.

“I have some cheese and bread we could snack on,” offered Sheridan.

“Aye that sounds good to me,” Harvey said as he rubbed his stomach.

“Then it is settled, I shall meet you all there after I sell my goods,” I smiled happy with my accomplishments.

After the days end, a few good drinks and conversations with my friends at the Kada-el tavern; I reported my progress back to my guild and turned in for the night.


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The next morning I received a message from Stronith to met him at the cliffs on Ojaveada road. As I approached Stronith I noticed he seemed really nervous, he kept shifting his weight from one foot to another. He wouldn’t look me in the eyes, I began to feel as though something was wrong.

“What is it Stronith,” I asked worried.

“M’Lady Zorbels….” Stronith let his words tail off. I grabbed his hands and forced him to look into my eyes.

“What is it Stronith, you are really scaring me,” I said with uncertainty in my voice.

He held my paw with his massive hand and finally managed to make eye contact. With an awkward smile he spoke, “Zorbels you have been the reason I get up every morning, the warmth I never new until I met you and…” he paused, “I wish to never lose that. It only seems right that we….. That is I wish you to be my bride. Will you marry me Zorbels?” He appeared to blush, however impossible that was.

My heart was beating so hard I barely noticed he got down on his one knee and was holding out a ring. It took me a moment to have what Stronith just asked sink in, but when it did I was overjoyed.

“Yes Stronith I would love to be your wife,” I said as I threw my arms around him. “Nothing would please me more” I smiled happily.

“Then let us go talk with the priest in the temple and make arrangements, then we can tell of our news,” Stronith said.

After speaking with the priest all of our plans and dreams came crashing down for we found out the the gods would not allow an Enki and a Kran to marry. The guild was shocked by this and so began the quest to find a way to have Lady Zorbels and Lord Stronith married.


To be continued.............

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Post by: sasek on November 18, 2005, 11:57:29 pm
Great story so far Zorbs keep it up i cant wait for the next chapter!
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Post by: arcain on November 19, 2005, 01:28:22 am
thats a terible way to end a story..its so mean..leaving all the readers on there toes..anyway i loved it! you better have some more soon cuz im addicted!
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Post by: zorbels on November 19, 2005, 01:29:53 am
YAY!!! Sasek you read my story, I am glad you like it. I will be adding chapter three in a couple of weeks. :D I have to move my house and family so I will not have the time till my move is done to work on my story. :/ *Zorbels walks off grumbling something about packing*

[edit] Sorry arcain due to the above that is what stops me from writting more. I will give you a hint though, Talad is involved and Stronith must face a change.
Title: Very nice sister
Post by: Dylia on November 19, 2005, 01:32:07 am
I love the story so far and look forward to reading the rest.
;) I hope mine turns out half as good as yours
Dylia hugs her sister and runs away trying not to get stabbed \"keeheehee\"
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Post by: Bebel on November 19, 2005, 01:46:31 am
magnifique !
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Post by: Guest on November 19, 2005, 01:49:50 am
I will forever be picturing Zorbs bathed in the blood of various beasties now ...
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Post by: Reor on November 19, 2005, 11:19:03 am
lol Zog  :D

Too bad we have to wait so long for the next chapter, but.. have fun moving, Zorbels ;)
I especially liked the hunting parts, sounds like you had a blast :) Can\'t wait for more.
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Post by: Shadeslayer on November 20, 2005, 01:50:56 pm
Awesome work Zorbels(or should I call you Lady Zorbels?)

I think maybe I should picture people in another perspective after reading chapter 2 and like Reor said sounds like you had a blast :D

/me bows down to a true master of lore
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Post by: Aluna Brightburn on November 26, 2005, 03:32:49 am
Hey Zorbels,

Great story.  I read it with a warm feeling.  Whens more coming this way ?.
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Post by: shorty13 on November 26, 2005, 05:10:10 pm
very nice story.  Can\'t wait to hear about the rest of it :D
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Post by: zorbels on November 26, 2005, 06:48:33 pm
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Originally posted by Aluna Brightburn
Hey Zorbels,

Great story.  I read it with a warm feeling.  Whens more coming this way ?.


Oh without a doubt I am writing more. :D The next installment however is taking me a bit of time to write. I can\'t give a time line on when it will be posted. :( I will keep you all updated...... (I am working with Stronith on this next part of the story and moving at the same time :/. After I am settled I will be able to focus my attention on it ;) )
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Post by: Lolitra, Celorrim Purrty Twins on November 26, 2005, 09:26:45 pm
It is developing well and I love it! :D
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Post by: neko kyouran on December 01, 2005, 08:34:28 am
Hey Zorby, it\'s your Nicken.  Just wanted to let yeah know that I finished it and will be working on the comments after I get back from my cruise.  Overall, good stuff so far.
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Post by: zorbels on December 15, 2005, 12:55:38 am
My move is almost done, I will be working on my story for the next couple of weeks. The third part will be posted in two weeks time ....... Thank you all for your patience.
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Post by: Grndmasta on December 15, 2005, 04:34:56 am
Can\'t wait...Great work so far...
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Post by: Arka on December 15, 2005, 11:51:03 am
Absolutely awesome work, as usual. I shall be watching this thread avidly from now on!

:D
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Post by: zorbels on January 31, 2006, 08:42:00 pm
update: Well wrting this third installment is alot more difficult than I imagined. It is taking me a bit of time, I can\'t say when it will be done but I haven\'t given up on my story. I am just a perfectionist, and somethings in the story just don\'t meet my standards. All in all it is being written, just very slowly. :/
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Post by: lanser on January 31, 2006, 09:19:07 pm
I wait with baited breath :)

slowly going red faced

now green

passed out from lack of oxygen :P
Title: Re: The Story Of Zorbels
Post by: Sarff Rullan on May 15, 2006, 05:33:01 am
Zorbels you did a fantastic job with this story. I do hope you get this third installment figured out because I would really like to know if you marry Stronith. Anyway great job, I enjoyed it.
Title: Re: The Story Of Zorbels
Post by: Suno_Regin on May 15, 2006, 12:51:26 pm
Actually she's engaged to Satayne now, for whatever reason. =/
Title: Re: The Story Of Zorbels
Post by: zorbels on May 15, 2006, 09:52:40 pm
Actually she's engaged to Satayne now, for whatever reason. =/

Sarff is talking about my story Suno, not what is currently going on in game. Eventually the reason I am with Satayne with be written in my story, but I have alot of other stuff to write about first. After Stronith, comes the story of Alhana and Zorbels.

I almost have the third installment done pretty much. I am just trying to finish it off and make sure it coincides with Stroniths story, as we both wrote about the same things. It's coming, I just had a bad case of the writers block.
Title: Re: The Story Of Zorbels
Post by: zorbels on July 14, 2006, 04:08:06 am
                                                                       Chapter 3

“I do not understand Stronith,” Zorbels looks into his eyes with tears spilling down her cheeks. “Why do the Gods not let us marry?” She cries out in anger.

Stronith walks over to Zorbels and pulls her into his arms and sighs. She weeps on Stronith’s chest uncontrollably. “They do not let us marry, my love, because we are not of the same race,” he says as he puts his hand under her chin to raises her face to his. “The guild has called a meeting to see if there is anything that we can do to make our wedding happen,” Stronith smiles and wipes the tears away from her face tenderly.

 Zorbels looks into his eyes with a hopeful gaze and says, “Then let us go met our guild and pray to Talad that I can marry you.” Zorbels gives Stronith a weak smile, but he knows she does this only to make him feel better.

Later that day the Protectors guild met at the broke door tavern in Akkaio a section in Ojaveda city.

“My guild members we are gathered here today because of an issue that has arisen with two of our guild members, Zorbels and Stronith. As you know, they wish to be wed but cannot for the gods have told the temple that they will not allow them to marry because of race,” Lord Heroro announces in a strong yet assuring voice. Lord Heroro looks at the couple with a smile upon his face and puts a hand up to silence the guild members chatting excitedly amongst themselves. “I have volunteered to go myself and speak with Talad if he will hear me out and ask for these two to have their dream granted and be wed to one and other. I stand before you and ask if you will all trust in me to do this task,” Heroro looks around at the guild and then lets his gaze fall upon Stronith and Zorbels.

At first Zorbels is shocked but quickly over comes it with a strong feeling of appreciation and bows to Lord Heroro. “It would honor me M’lord for you to have this task. I trust in you, and even if Talad will not help this wedding take place, your intentions are noted and I am humbled to be here in this guild that I call family.” Zorbels declares with emotion in her voice.

Stronith nods in agreement and says, “Nothing would please me more, M’Lord.

The tavern suddenly filled with shouts of approval and comforting words to Stronith and Zorbels swearing that this wedding would happen. Zorbels looked around with pride and squeezed Stronith’s hand to show him that she was pleased with what the guild was doing for them. Zorbels leans over and whispers softly in to Stronith’s ear “I would not wish to be any where else but here my love. These people are our friends and family and I will always remember this day.” Zorbels then went into deep thought and silently hoped the gods will listen to Lord Heroro’s request on behalf of the couple.   

Early the next evening, Zorbels paced back and forth unsettled wishing for Lord Heroro’s return.

“Zorbels, relax. Wearing a hole in the ground will not make Heroro return faster.” Stronith said with a sigh.

 “I know … I just, I can not help it!” she gently drops down onto the soft ground and leans against a thick tree trunk in the plaza with a deep sigh escaping her lips. She watches as Harnquist speaks with new travelers explaining how to get to the magic shop and smiles to her self enjoying the familiar surroundings.  “Hey Harnquist, need me to show these travelers to the magic shop for you? I can tell that you are very busy trying to buy and sell. Surely I could be of some assistance to you?”

“No M’Lady I am fine, but it is good to see you,” Harnquist replies with a warm smile.

Just then, a menki with scars visible all over his body and a mysterious look to him came into the plaza. Zorbels watched him with curious eyes as she heard him greet Harnquist in a friendly, business like manner.

“Zorbels there you are!” Zorbels jumped a bit startled by her sister’s sudden appearance. “I have heard that Lord Heroro travels back to us with an answer from the god Talad about your wedding,” Dylia exclaimed excitedly.

Zorbels’ eyes widened and as she was about to reply the strange enkidukai she had her eye on before caught her attention yet once again. He appeared to be arguing with a Dwarf.

“Myysst you are impossible!” the frustrated Stonebreaker said.

“Well you could always give me your ears as a payment!” Myysst smiled with resentment written all over his face.

 Zorbels watched the two’s quarrel with interest. Dylia grabbed Zorbels’ hand pulling her up gently and motioning for her to follow. “Come sister I would like to introduce you to someone,” Dylia said with a warm reassuring smile. “I have a feeling you two will get along wonderfully,” Dylia giggled.

 “Oh?” Zorbels exclaimed with curiosity. She noticed her sister pulling her towards the strange menki.

Dylia cleared her throat and tapped on Myysst shoulder. “Excuse me Myysst but I wanted to introduce you to my sister, Zorbels. Myysst stopped his argument half way though his sentence and stared at Zorbels.

“Ummm … uhhhh ….  Sorry to intrude, it is a pleasure to meet you,” Zorbels said, feeling slightly uncomfortable.

Myysst smiles, “So this is the sister I have heard so much about, it is a pleasure to meet you as well Zorbels. How are you two this fine day?”

Dylia declares contently, “I am well Myysst. I have been training most of the day. I decided to take a break and eat some dinner. I also came to give Zorbels some news.”

“Oh?” Myysst replies with a raised eye brow.

“Yes,” Dylia states shortly not willing to volunteer more. 

“Yes and what good news she brings to my ear. Or at least I hope…..” Zorbels casts her eyes towards the sky trying not to show her emotional state to the new menki. She then wraps her cloak around her for extra warmth as a cool wind intrudes the conversation.

“Hope?” Myysst asks a bit puzzled.

Zorbels smiles and replies in a flat tone almost spitting the words out “The gods will not let me wed the kran I love the most. One of my guild members is questing to change that. He is to return soon with word, I desperately hope his words will be happy ones.”

Myysst takes in what he heard with interest and replies, “Well I do hope the best for you m’lady.”

“Thank you, and now I must bid you all a goodnight.” Zorbels bows gracefully to Myysst and turns to give her sister a hug.

 “Awww,  so early sister? Well no matter just let me know if you hear any news by day break.” Dylia smiles lovely at Zorbles.

“I shall sister. You know you will be the first I come to. See you around Myysst and take care.” She waves as she turns to walk towards the tavern.

“Take care as well lady Zorbels, I will be around. I wish you good luck with your wedding,” Myysst calls after Zorbels.

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“Sweeti,” Stronith whispers into Zorbels ear softly. She stirs not wanting to open her eyes and wake up from the deep sleep.  Stronith then shakes her gently and repeats softly yet once again, “Sweeti, get up.”

 Her eyes flutter and she groans “Wha…..” Zorbels opens her eyes slowly, as they come into focus she sees Stronith bent over her with a huge smile.  The events from the day before roll over in her mind and she jolts out of bed and into Stroniths lap. “Did you receive word? Is it good news?” She cries out excited.

“Yes my love, Lord Heroro has made his way back to us with word and will be announcing soon to the guild what he has come to find out.” Stronith said in a calming voice.

Zorbels studied Stroniths face and smiled up at him lovingly. “I don’t care anymore if Gods or even the people agree to let us marry or not. I will see us that way in my heart.” She said with a serious tone. She climbed out of bed after the most delightful kiss good morning. Zorbels grabbed her brush, pulling it through her long hair humming while grooming   herself   preparing to join her guild mates.  She says softly “I am ready my love, let us go,” Zorbels holds out her hand to Stronith. As he takes her hand into his the couple sighs in union and  prepares themselves for Lord Heroro’s news.

As they entered the guild hall faces turn to look upon the couple and this made Zorbels feel nervous. She squeezed Stronith’s hand thinking this would be a perfect time for the floor to open up and swallow her. Instead she follows Stronith’s lead and slips a smile on her face trying to appear hopeful.  As they take their seats, Stronith looks at Zorbels with a calming  look and squeezes her hand reassuringly then turns his attention to Lord Heroro standing to make his announcement.

“I have gotten word to the god Talad and he spoke back to me. I have only this to say……” Zorbels heart began to pound and she began to gasp for air feeling like she was going to faint. Stronith saw this and picked her up gently. He positioned her on his lap so that he could look over her shoulder but hold her close to him. Zorbels instantly became relaxed and felt she was ready to hear the news Lord Heroro had to relay.

He continued in a deep voice “Talad’s wish is to see Stronith himself. He will appear before Stronith by the next night fall. He did not tell me any more than this.”

Gasps and shocked faces was all Zorbels could see as she looked around the room. She then looked at Stronith with uncertain eyes and saw him still absorbing the news. He blinked a few times which you rarely saw with krans. He opened his mouth to say something but shut it again with an uncertain look.

“What could this possibly mean? Could Talad be angry with us for such a request Lord Heroro? Will he take Stronith from me……?” Zorbels begins to panic as she finishes her sentence.

“No M’lady, if Talad wanted that he would just smite you. I think he means no harm,” Lord Heroro explained carefully.  “He could however want to question Stronith and make sure this is what he wants, or may want to explain why he will not grant the wedding …………” Lord Heroro lets his sentence trail off.

Zorbels looks over to Stronith with a worried look. Stronith then stands up abruptly and shakes off the feeling of shock, “I will meet him by the next night fall then and see what my God would have of me.”

Zorbels swallows hard and nods slightly but doesn’t meet Stroniths eyes. “I will hope for the best …… and see this as an honor that Talad wishes to speak with you,” she exclaims weakly.

Lord Eolius stands slowly pushing his chair back and raising a hand motioning that he is about to speak. The hall quieted down to hear the guild masters words. “This my friends is a great honor for Stronith and Lady Zorbels, I think tonight we shall celebrate this and dine and drink until our hearts are content. Soon we shall be celebrating a wedding.” Lord Eolius raises his mug in a cheering fashion and the guild hall rings out with voices cheering.

The next morning Zorbels wakes to a note beside her bed side. She blinks a few times rolling over onto her side and reaching out to retrieve the note.


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Dear Zorbels,

My love, I have decided to head off into the wilds to meet with Talad tonight. I know what your thinking, but he is a god and he will find me, this I know. I hope when I return to you all will be settled. Don’t worry about me, I will be back to hold you in my arms regardless of the answer Talad will grant us.
                                                                                                Love Stronith

She hugs the note to her chest as she looks out her window over looking the town. She watches people moving to get to their destination, stopping to say a polite good morning to one and other.  Zorbels tumbles out of bed and files through her clothes looking for something to wear for the day. Once dressed she heads down to the tavern from her room in Kada’s and orders her breakfast even though she isn’t feeling very hungry.  As she picks at her food she wonders what she could do to keep herself busy and mind off of Stronith.

 “Hello Zorbels, how are you today?” She turns to see where the voice had come from. Her eyes fall on a table with two Klyros’ by the corner back wall.

“Sirunie  and Constrabus! How are you both? I haven’t seen you both in quite some time. Might I join you?” Zorbels asks.

Contrabus nods “Of course you can. It is always a pleasure to be in your company Zorbels.”

She picks up her breakfast plate and strolls over to their table.

“We have heard about Stronith and your plea to Talad. My guild and I send their best wishes to you both as we know you would make a fine couple.” Sirunie says in a quieted tone.

Constrabus nods in agreement.  “Aye, my guild and I also send our best to you both Zorbels.”

“Thank you both. I am beside myself as to what to do today. If I could just keep my mind off of Stronith, I don’t think I would worry so much,” Zorbels looks at her plate unhappily.

“Well I have a cure for that. With Constrabus’ guild and my guild with me, we were thinking of have a practice war. It actually starts very soon.” Sirunie looks at Zorbels and smiles “Would you like to join us? It may very well do you good to practice your skills, and keep you busy.”

“I would more than love to Sirunie! What a great idea!” Zorbels says as her eyes lighting up. “I could use the practice.”

“Just don’t expect us to take it easy on you Zorbels.” Constrabus winks at her with a mischievous smile.

“I wouldn’t dream of it,” Zorbels chuckles.

“Then it is settled. I shall let all guild members know you are to join in with us. I am sure Constrabus will do the same, it does not matter to us which side you fight on, as long as you have fun. Sirunie stands and pushes his chair in, then drops some trias on the table for a tip.

Contrabus stands and says “Meet us in front of the temple when you are finished your meal Zorbels. We must go and prepare for our guilds battle training, so no rushing your breakfast unless you want to hear more beginner lectures in battling.

She shakes her head rapidly “No thanks I have heard enough from my own guild elders! She laughs lightly and nods to the door ‘You had better go before your guilds start without you, and thank you both. This will help me pass time nicely.”

In the blink of an eye the klyros take flight outside of the tavern door and Zorbels is left in silence, wishing she could fly like that.  She motions to the bar keep “One more milk please.”  She downs her milk and heads toward the temple after paying the bar tender. “Well this should be fun, I just hope Stronith is ok.” She whispers to herself.

©Copyright 2006
Title: Re: The Story Of Zorbels
Post by: zorbels on July 14, 2006, 04:09:57 am
[Note: This next installment is written by Stronith. You can find his Story called the Krans Tale at this link ~~~~~> A Krans Tale (http://hydlaa.com/smf/index.php?topic=20344.msg222919#msg222919) ]

Stronith sat down near a boulder at his camp and looked up at the sky.  He figured there was no rain to come this eve, hence he did not worry about covering his things.  He repositioned himself in such a way as he could polish a sword or two while he thought about what Talad had promised him.  It was not too long before sleep had taken over.

The following morning, Stronith awoke to a rustling of the leaves behind him.  He had maintained his grip on the short sword he slept with throughout the night so in an instant he was on his feet brandishing his steel.  Seeing no-one, he scanned the bushes near him for the cause of the noise he woke to.  From the corner of his eye he saw a glimpse of fur.  He swung himself around quickly enough that his tail swished around and slapped him in the leg.   

He dropped his sword to the dirt below his feet and grabbed his tail in his palm.  Now, fully awake he looked at the furry appendage in his paw.  He looked at his hand that was no longer his and for a moment was confused.  That moment passed fairly quickly, and he became excited. I must find Zorbels and show her my change, he thought to himself.  He bent down to get his sword, noticing immediately the increased flexibility he had this morn.  He had spent hours polishing his sword the night before and when he brought the flat edge towards his face he saw the reflection of a stranger within it.  The chiseled features he once possessed were replaced with the natural curves and short fur of an Enki.  He studied his new face in the reflection and felt something was in fact familiar about the fellow looking back at him.  It wasn’t until he had looked closely at every aspect of his face that he looked himself in the eyes.  It was then that he saw himself.  His eyes remained as they were before his change.  The eyes staring back at him were solid white, without colorful iris’s that every Enki he’d met possessed.  This comforted Stronith, he felt like himself to some degree now.  He took a moment to take stock of the rest of his body, amazed at the difference in shape and texture.  His tail swayed naturally and unconsciously behind him.  He then realized that it was his tail that had rustled the leaves as he slept, awaking him from his night’s sleep. 

He noticed that he was not wearing any clothing, as he never had a need before now.  This perhaps was a problem.  All but the Kran and the Klyros wore some sort of garment.  He never felt a need to dress in cloth; in fact he couldn’t recall a time that he had at all.  However, walking in to Hydlaa naked now seemed somehow inappropriate.

Suddenly a feeling came over Stronith that was new to him.  He was uncomfortable standing naked at his camp, alone as he was.  What if someone saw him?  Would he care?  He never did before… Yes, he decided – I must find something to cover myself with.  Zorbels will surely help, but to reach her I must enter the city walls.  He walked over to his packs to see if there was something that he could fashion into some sort of garment in the interim.  He hoisted his pack from the ground to the boulder beside him and noticed the difficulty he had maneuvering it compared to what he was used to.  Rummaging through his things, knowing that he would not – in fact – find anything to wear he was startled again by a sound behind him.  He spun around quicker than he remembered being able to before and saw Lord Heroro standing before him.

“So it’s done, my friend.  Lord Stronith, you are a new man.”, he approached and circled around him. “Amazing, up until now I wasn’t fully convinced it would be possible…”  He stopped and looked at Stronith in the face, “Wow.  Your eyes…”

“Hello, Lord Heroro,” Stronith attempted a smile for the first time with his new face.

“Indeed, you have changed.  Here,” he said, “Put these on, you’re embarrassing me standing there all nude and all.” Heroro smiled as he threw a handful of clothes at the Enki.

“Thank-you, Heroro – for all you have done.  Talad is surely great, for bestowing this form on me for the greater good of Zorbels and I.” He struggled with the clothing for a moment, but managed to dress himself with minimal laughter from his friend.

Satisfied that he was decent enough to go to Hydlaa, he thanked Heroro again for rescuing him from an embarrassing moment.  “I must see Zorbels; do you know where she is at?”

Heroro explained that she had gone hunting with some friends in the Valley of Trepors. 

“That is where I must go. She must see me in the form I am now; I hope she will be pleased.”

“Lord Stronith, I assure you that she will.  Zorbels loves you in such a way that your physical appearance is only an afterthought.  Trust me, you have nothing to worry about…now go!” He grinned as he watched Stronith scramble (and struggle) with his packs to be on his way. “Farewell Stronith. Let me know of the specifics for the wedding”, Heroro said with a smile.

Stronith waved as he exited his camp heading for the valley.  He thought to himself how fortunate he was to have such good friends.

[End of Stroniths writing]

Zorbels lays in bed thinking about the days events and smiles to herself. “That practice war with the two guilds was so much fun. It managed to keep my mind off of Stronith at times, and it taught me a thing or two about my sword skill.” She speaks to herself in a quite tone. Her thoughts return to Stronith and she wonders if he has seen Talad yet. Maybe he is traveling back to her now? I wonder what Talad has to say? She drifts of into a restless sleep with Stronith on her mind patiently waiting for his return.

©Copyright 2006
Title: Re: The Story Of Zorbels
Post by: Noobis on July 19, 2006, 09:19:34 am
Mmmm *rocks impatiently* when you going to get to the part with me in it  :-X :P
Title: Re: The Story Of Zorbels
Post by: zorbels on July 19, 2006, 06:23:00 pm
Believe me it will be written. It is just going to take some time. I can't wait to add everyone to the story that I have encountered in planeshift. Technically with how far this story has gone, I have only written my first two months in planeshift. I have ten months worth to catch up on.  :-\
Title: Re: The Story Of Zorbels
Post by: Terenak on July 21, 2006, 08:29:30 pm
Your stories are great!

I dropped by to see how you wrote and I am really impressed. I'm really looking forward to wririting with you and Arka  in the Community story.

Great story - guess I'll have to wait for more.

TE

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