PlaneShift
Fan Area => Roleplaying (Communitive Storywriting) => Topic started by: Suno_Regin on December 08, 2005, 03:13:16 am
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Xilam walked around town, noticing aged grounds and landmarks. As he walked further, he noticed a door slightly opened, and people were inside, looking as though they were plotting something.
\"...so, are you up for it?\" A man said.
\"Do you think that I would work for you!? Your insane, that guy\'s nearly invincible!\" Another man said, sounding a bit scared.
Then, there was a crashing noise from inside the building, meaning the man got what he deserved for denying the job.
\"Fool, do not disrespect Grog!\" A Kran said, with a booming voice.
Then, Xilam knew he heard enough, and decided it was time to get some more dirt on this \'invincible\' person.
\"So, you\'re having trouble finding someone to take on your job, eh?\" Xilam said, as he walked in the building.
Everyone\'s attention turned to Xilam.
\"Who the hell are you!? Don\'t you know that this is Grog\'s -\"
Xilam smacked down the Kran before the sentence was finished.
\"Shut up, I don\'t care who the hell this Grog is. If he has a job, I\'m ready to take it on.\"
Then, a rather large Diaboli walked into the room.
\"So, this Klyros thinks he can defeat the Enkidukai?\" The Diaboli said.
A few of the men started to laugh.
\"Spit it out, who is this Enkidukai?\" Xilam answered.
\"I am sure you are aware of a recent event, involving someone by the name of Mitaki. A feeble little Klyros such as yourself, would have no chance against him.\"
\"Mitaki? I don\'t care what the hell hes done, if he\'s powerful, then I will fight him. Yet, if this is just another small fry, then I\'ll let you redeem yourselves for wasting my time, by paying with your lives.\" Replied Xilam.
\"Very well then,\" The Diaboli said, \"your job will begin immediately. Mitaki is somewhere in the general Plaza, go there, and make sure he does not escape alive.\"
Xilam nodded, and left the building. He knew that he heard the name Mitaki spoken somewhere before, a long time ago.
\"Wait - Someone named Mitaki passed through our village a while ago, could that be the same...No, that was too many years ago, that kid couldn\'t have survived the walk...\"
(To be continued)
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I really do like your stories !
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Heh, thanks. :)
This was my first attempt at a character that isn\'t exactly public friendly. Not one with special powers of manipulating shadows, but simply an average Klyros assasin. Seemed like a good idea, but it is impossible to act out ingame, accept for maybe a fight with one of the people on the \"To-kill-list\" :P
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Ha Ha...quite amusing...I wonder if Mitaki enjoys to victory or defeat :D
Like your style Suno...I always have time to read a good ol\' bloody story...or maybe not so bloody ;)
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Well, the key to my stories is the word \"Legend\" meaning not the full details (EX: Person walked into the Kitchen. He sat in the chair. He ate his breakfast. He scratched his hair. etc.) it just gets right down to the main events, such as this meeting before the fight, then the fight, then the \"aftermath,\" and so on. You could say that it\'s just a summary, but it also means that the main events are more exciting, and eventful, thats what I\'m trying to hit at, and so far, people like it. :)
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i m a fan :D as you said \"legend\" it s more like \"manga \" for me ;)
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Now all it needs is pictures.