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Fan Area => Roleplaying (Communitive Storywriting) => Single Author Stories => Topic started by: Garris Shrike on February 24, 2007, 12:19:45 am

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Post by: Garris Shrike on February 24, 2007, 12:19:45 am

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Title: Re: The Community of One (Not for the faint of heart)
Post by: Quitarias on February 26, 2007, 08:33:03 pm

Change .... change ..... other than saying you could have made it longer there realy isnt anything that i didnt.Real captivating though it realy was one of those storys that keep you glued to them.

Title: Re: The Community of One (Not for the faint of heart)
Post by: Garris Shrike on March 01, 2007, 07:18:05 pm

Thanks, Quitarius. Check out my new short, not yet finished, http://hydlaa.com/smf/index.php?topic=27885.0 (http://hydlaa.com/smf/index.php?topic=27885.0) or known as The Teller of Tales

Title: Re: The Community of One (Not for the faint of heart)
Post by: Phinehas on March 03, 2007, 11:44:41 pm

So... why wait a year to burn the whole thing to the ground? Was the guy who came a year later somehow significant, or did that just strike the kid as a good day to end things?

Title: Re: The Community of One (Not for the faint of heart)
Post by: Garris Shrike on March 04, 2007, 12:20:47 am

The kid really had no mind, I suppose, therefore he had the twisted idea that when the man came along, that was a good time. He had been living by himself, so I guess the sight of another human just drove him over the edge, or something. Thats it.