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Fan Area => Roleplaying (Communitive Storywriting) => Single Author Stories => Topic started by: Kendrick on January 26, 2002, 11:20:59 am
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Legend of Sapashas\' Armor
*You Sit in front of your grandfather as he tells you a story*
It was a cold night, when Jagana, a young male Diaboli started work on the armor. The armor was meant for his son, who Jagana had planed to train to be the greatest thief in all the world. The armor was sewn with a two layers of a purple-black leather. It was to be a full dress of thief armor, a strong, flexible pair of pants, a strong pair of boots, with a soft padding in the sole, to prevent noise, and a vest. The vest is what makes this armor special. The vest had a golden cross in the front, and two angel wings in the back. Jagana finished many years after he started and by the time he was done, his son was old enough to begin training.
Sapasha, Jaganas\' son trained in the art of the thief for many years, and after he finished, he was rewarded with the armor.
A little ashamed of his fathers choice of decoration wore the armor anyway because of it\'s strength. On the way to show his friends the new armor, Sapasha was attacked and killed by another Diaboli because of the religious look of his armor.
The man who killed Sapasha tried many months to destroy the armor, but failed every time. Finally, he just thrust the armor into a lake and hoped nobody would find it...
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Good story... but were does it fit into the tale of PS?
(or it is just some stroy that you thought up, which is cool)
And then...?
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Let me re-explain what I mean...
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Great Story! You should write a longer and more detailed version.
I would definitely read it.
-Toru of the Winds
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and kendrick nwo that you have starte dthe great story you have to give a second part
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it\'s just something that whould go good with a thief armor description
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Great :-)