PlaneShift
Fan Area => Roleplaying (Communitive Storywriting) => Single Author Stories => Topic started by: RoberetGoldsmith on August 21, 2007, 05:57:14 am
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[My first try at a planeshift story, hope you enjoy. This story has passion, romance , humor .....and errrm well just read for your self ;) and prepare for mass spelling mistakes :D ]
Chapter 1 In the beginning
Gregory is a young Stonebreaker, who has just entered Hydlaa , he is eager and optimistic about his future. He wears simple but clean clothes, his trousers are slightly dirty at the bottom due to traveling.
He walks, carrying his bag, with a broad smile on his face and a gleam in his eye. He stops outside the Tavern to take a look at his surroundings
"Here it is beautiful Hydlaa, beautiful beautiful"
Gregory, being tired after walking so far, decides to go in to the tavern to have a pint of ale
He walks in, seeing only the barmaid and a Yilian in dirty clothes ordering a ale. Gregory walks to the bar.
"One pint of your finest ale" Gregory says still smiling
The barmaid looks around confused "Who said that?"
The Yilian looks down at Gregory "Down there" He point with his mug
Gregory loses his smiling and mumbles in coherent words
The Barmaid looks down "Oh sorry, that always happens with..."
"Dwarfs?" Gregory mumbles just loud enough for the Barmaid to hear. The Barmaid blushes
"Yes..... one ale coming up sir" Shes says while going to one of the barrels filling a empty mug with ale. Gregory regains his smile and says "Cheers". The Yilian looks at Gregory, sipping some of his ale,he puts his mug on the bar and with a cheerful voice says
"Greetings" Gregory looks up at the Yilian, his clothes were dirty and torn, he did not seems very wealthy.
"Greetings sir" Gregory replies
"Here you go , that will be five trias sir" The Barmaid says opening her hand
Gregory goes on his tip-toes and gives her trias from his pocket, he then grabs the mug full to the brim with ale.
"Care to join me at a table" The Yilian says, pointing to a table.
Gregory looks at the table and nods, they both walk to a table with three candles on it.
"So whats your name dwarf?" The yilian says sipping some of his ale
"Gregory Dover" Gregory says looking at one of the candles. The Yilian spits out some of his drink and laughs
"Gregory Dover?!?! Not exactly a name for a dwarf" Gregory frowns
"Whats your name then?"
The Yilian sighs and says quietly
"Maurice Gangelberry" Gregory bursts out laughing
"Looks like were even, when it comes to names pal" Maurice says winking
"Aye" Gregory replied, sipping some of his ale "I am new to Hydlaa, I just arrived."
Maurice raises a eyebrow "Really? Why did you come to Hydlaa then" He says sipping his ale expecting the same old story
Gregory puts on a grin as he speaks proudly "I have come here to gains glory, honor,fame and have money.....and success"
Maurice sighs and puts his mug down "Sorry to burst your bubble, but everyone else is doing exactly what you wish to do, it is not easy" He looks Gregory in the eye "For one successful Hydlaa person they're twenty failed ones" Gregory loses his grin "Really.....?"
Maurice still with his serious voice says "No I lied" he then starts laughing "But you get my point" He picks up his mug and sips some of his ale.
Another Yilian walks into the Tavern, wearing chain armor and carrying two swords. He has many Imperial markings on his armour.He seems youngish...in his early twenties, he has long brown and a trimmed beard. He orders a pint of ale and looks around the Tavern
Maurice smiles and shouts "Roberet! over here pal" Roberet smiles back as he grabs a mug of ale and walks over
"Gregory I would like you to meet my friend, Roberet" Maurice says sipping some of his ale
"Greetings sir" Gregory says looking up at the Yilian.
"Hail, Roberet Goldsmith of the Imperial Trades and Imperial Guard at your service" He bows slightly, then he sits down next to Maurice
Maurice chuckles "Enough with the formal stuff Robbie, your at the Tavern"
Roberet chuckles "So you have a last name Gregory?"
Gregory bites his lip "...Lets keep it at Gregory....sir......what is this Imperial ... ...organisations you say you are part off" Gregory says trying to take away the subject of his name out of the conversation. Roberet smiles as he sips some of his ale
"Just the one organisation ....or guild ...whatever you may call it. I am in the Dark Empire" Gregory looks shocked
"Dark? your evil?" Roberet bursts out laughing, then he stops
"No ..no. do not let the name fool you were not evil" Roberet smiles while sipping some of his ale
Four other people walk into the Tavern and walk over to the table next two Gregorys table, Roberet takes a look at them with a worried expression
The four mumble, an Enki says loudly "Those Imperial scum, we should crush them" The other three agree in nodding
An Klyros takes a look at Roberet seeing all of his Imperial marking his holds up his arm and points "There is one of those Imperalist scum!"
Roberet stands up and quickly finshes his drink and puts down the mug
The Klyros stands up "What is your name?"
Roberet looks at the exit then looks at the Klyros "Roberet Goldsmith of the Imperial Trades and the Imperial Guard" The klyros shouts "Get him!' The four start running at Roberet with swords and axes Roberet looks at Gregory "It's been a pleasure , but I must go" He says smiling , he then proceeds to run to the exit , with the four chasing him out of the door
Chapter 2 "O how the heart beats"
Later that day Gregory and Maurice were at the Hydlaa plaza, Maurice was showing Gregory around Hydlaa
Maurice points to the Blacksmiths and the surrounding area
"Thats were you can get your weapons made and repaired ....if you have the money, the Hydlaa Plaza is where most citzens tend to be, so if you want to be noticed .....here would be a preferable place."
Gregory smiles as he sees the crowd around the blacksmiths
"Thats most of Hydlaa for you" Maurice says with his hands in his pockets
Gregory then sees a female Ywnm, he begins to gaze at herr, she looked beautiful with a unblemeshed face and wearing a clean robe. She seemed to light up every direction she looked at. Gregory snapped out of his gaze and says in a soft voice
"Who is she?" He points toward the Ywnm. Maurice looks at the Ywnm
"Ah. her ....do not know much about her....only that she has one massive , muscle bound Ywnm as a partner" Maurice says while Gregory was still in a gaze "Shes ....beautiful .....I .......think I .....love her......shes beautiful" Gregory says as he seemed to have ignored what Maurice said about the female Ywnm having a muscle bound partner
Maurice looks at Gregory "First looks can be deceiving pal" Grgory still in a gaze ignoring Maurice still
"I must be with her .... she must be mine...... she is so beautiful
Gregory sighs "Well good luck trying"
To be continued......
[ Will Gregory get the Girl? Will the muscle bound Ywnm notice that? Will Maurice get a job????? All to come ;D]
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Chapter 3 The Princess and the Dwarf
Maurice stood there frozen by love,he kept on staring, until the Ywnm caught a glimpse of Maurice while she was talking to a small group, she turned and faces Maurices direction, the Ywnm gave a polite wave to Maurice, wondering about who he was.
As she waved , Maurice snapped out of his gaze, he went bright red, then he manages to put his hand up to wave back.
Gregory noticing all of this puts his hand on Maurices back "Better go there and ....introduce your self" Gregory says smiling to Maurice Gregory looks up to Maurice
"I geuss.....do I look alright? my clothes ...my hair....my beard..... " Gregory goes into a mumble until Maurice pushes him towards her
"Don't be fussy he said as he pushed Gregory"
Gregory,after being pushed by Maurice, proceeds to walk up the Plaza stairs and towards the Ywmn. The female Ywmn notice this I strayed away from the group she was talking to, and stood,facing towards Gregory.
Gregory clears the lump in his throat as he looks up to the female Ywmn. Her eyes dazzled a crystal blue. He spoke nervously "Greetings, I could not help but notice you......may I ask....if you would be so kind as to tell me your name?" The female Ywmn replies in a warm voice "Greetings,sir dwarf, my name is Daisy, Daisy Hatfield"
[Ah read the rest later :D]