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Fan Area => Fan Art => Topic started by: Xolani on November 29, 2007, 03:05:01 am

Title: Xolani's Art
Post by: Xolani on November 29, 2007, 03:05:01 am

Hi there

I have looked around the art forum and have really been amazed at the talent. I myself do a bit of 3d modeling and drawing so I make this thread to display my pitifull creations. I know I may be asking alot out you when I say don't laugh to hard but when your done it would be nice to get some constructive comments.


Heres a drawing I did some time ago that I call Mouse for obvious reasons

(http://i217.photobucket.com/albums/cc226/_Xolani_/Mouse2.jpg)

Title: Re: Xolani's Art
Post by: LigH on November 29, 2007, 10:47:18 am

Well done. Good proportions, credible pose; just possibly a slight lack of structure and details (fur lines, tail skin).

Title: Re: Xolani's Art
Post by: Kieve on November 30, 2007, 02:17:50 pm

Nice. And it even has the one eye! Hm... I smell 30xp...

Heheh, kidding. Looks pretty good, and I really like the shading.

Title: Re: Xolani's Art
Post by: Baldur on December 01, 2007, 10:09:34 pm

I agree with Ligh. Variations in/between shadows, darker and lighter, would be a good tip aswell. Also, go wild if you like :) There's nothing stopping you from adding a bit of details: thinning whiskers... Bling bling, you know what I mean?

Title: Re: Xolani's Art
Post by: zorbels on December 02, 2007, 12:07:59 am

Wow, I am really impressed with the shading of your mouse. I think the tail needs a little work though. It seems like it doesn't fit quite right because it is so dark. Great work!