PlaneShift
Fan Area => Roleplaying (Communitive Storywriting) => Poetry, Comedy, and other. => Topic started by: Xillix Queen of Fools on December 30, 2008, 03:55:46 am
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I made this as a Christmas gift for Rizin, I thought I would share.
Your own personal Blackflame
Someone to Damn your soul
Someone who's cold
Your own personal Blackflame
Someone to Damn your Soul
Someone who's bold
Feeling alone
I am on my throne
of Flesh and bone
By the telephone
Lift up the receiver
Ill make you a deceiver
Take second best
Put me to the test
Things on our chests
We never to confess
I will dissemble
I make existence tremble
Lash out and crush faith
Lash out and crush faith
Your own personal Blackflame...
Feeling alone
I am on my throne
of Flesh and bone
By the telephone
Lift up the receiver
Ill make you a deceiver
I will dissemble
Till all existence crumbles
Lash out and crush faith
Your own personal Blackflame
Lash out and crush faith
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(http://img72.imageshack.us/img72/4519/personalblackflameas2.png)
In stores after Christmas
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What a lovely dark poem. I wonder what kind of music will come with it. Seems kinda suitable for deathmetal. ;)
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The required music is here: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=_xo6syBndKM&feature=related
This version might suit it better ;) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Q3G2BQVrcOs
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I wasn't saying Manson's version was better, just that his version was more suitable for the lyrics Xillix wrote :lol:
...Gahan skipped to step 5 (http://www.hydlaaplaza.com/smf/index.php?topic=31257.msg360191#msg360191) right away :P
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