PlaneShift

Fan Area => Fan Art => Topic started by: Falcon Avian on May 28, 2010, 09:41:05 pm

Title: Planeshift comic! \o/
Post by: Falcon Avian on May 28, 2010, 09:41:05 pm
I might make more later  :flowers:
Also sorry for the low quality, I only had 5 minutes to draw this.

(http://i835.photobucket.com/albums/zz272/Esorono/Comic.jpg)

More detail on this at: http://falcon-avian.deviantart.com/#/d2qlsxg
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Post by: Sen on May 28, 2010, 11:28:49 pm
Well drawn; made me laugh  ;D
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Post by: Geoni on May 28, 2010, 11:32:42 pm
You should take your time while drawing things. Though, I get the concept. I would like to see more detail on the faces to add humor.  ::| But alas, I can't draw much better than you can, so who am I to critique? 
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Post by: Illysia on May 28, 2010, 11:34:20 pm
This is cute though. It's nice to have a PS comic around again.  :D
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Post by: Falcon Avian on May 29, 2010, 12:05:15 am
This is cute though. It's nice to have a PS comic around again.  :D

I'll be doing more once I get my projects done...Only 16 more to go  :@#\

You should take your time while drawing things. Though, I get the concept. I would like to see more detail on the faces to add humor.  ::| But alas, I can't draw much better than you can, so who am I to critique?  

Our assignment was to draw a comic in English...Only problem is they only gave us 5 minutes to draw it  :-\
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Post by: Geoni on May 29, 2010, 01:42:06 am
Your English teacher deserves a brain slap. That is too short a time to make a comic, which has hardly a thing to do with literature.
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Post by: Illysia on May 29, 2010, 01:52:06 am
Pretty good for 5 mins. I usually get bogged down in making it look right and stuff... I still haven't gotten past the 1 page on a comic I was working on...  :-\ Not a PS related one.
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Post by: Falcon Avian on May 29, 2010, 02:05:47 am
Your English teacher deserves a brain slap. That is too short a time to make a comic, which has hardly a thing to do with literature.

Thanks, I didn't have time to color it, I did that after and the teacher didn't get the joke and she didn't like that it wasn't colored so I got a 65%  :thumbdown:

Pretty good for 5 mins. I usually get bogged down in making it look right and stuff... I still haven't gotten past the 1 page on a comic I was working on...  :-\ Not a PS related one.

I get very irritated if I get something wrong in my pictures so doing such a quick sketch nearly killed me XD I won't do my very best on drawing in comics, but it will still be better than this.
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Post by: derula on May 29, 2010, 02:17:05 am
Thanks, I didn't have time to color it, I did that after and the teacher didn't get the joke

Huh? The joke was rather straightforward. She must not be familiar with the concept of permanent death. She's probably been to DR too often!
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Post by: bloodedIrishman on May 29, 2010, 05:39:46 am
This is filth, pitiful compared to my fine art. Falcon you have crossed me for the last time. I challenge you to a duel.


Do you accept or reject?
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Post by: Falcon Avian on May 29, 2010, 04:03:14 pm
This is filth, pitiful compared to my fine art. Falcon you have crossed me for the last time. I challenge you to a duel.


Do you accept or reject?

One moment, only 13 more projects to go.  :woot:
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Post by: bloodedIrishman on May 29, 2010, 05:22:16 pm
Coward  ;D
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Post by: Dralion1221 on May 29, 2010, 07:44:05 pm
D'aww funny :)
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Post by: Sarras Volcae on May 30, 2010, 04:39:09 am
lol

but you should always use a concept your teacher is familiar with. such as literature, politics, some current event irl. they will count off if they have no clue what you're trying to say.
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Post by: Falcon Avian on May 30, 2010, 04:46:29 am
lol

but you should always use a concept your teacher is familiar with. such as literature, politics, some current event irl. they will count off if they have no clue what you're trying to say.

I call dollars tria at times  :-\ And I had about 5 minutes to draw and for a plan so I just went with first thing that came to mind.
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Post by: Candy on May 30, 2010, 09:17:55 am
Your English teacher deserves a brain slap. That is too short a time to make a comic, which has hardly a thing to do with literature.

Well, five minutes is too short a time to make a comic, but for all the entertaining but meaningless stuff like Scott Pilgrim or Kicka** Girl, some comics can be literature, much like for all the trashy romances and westerns, you can probably name a long list of books one might have to read in English class. You want comics that may well be literature? See Sandman (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Sandman_%28Vertigo%29) and Persepolis (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Persepolis_%28comics%29). I'm sure there are more, but I'm just looking at what's on my own shelf right now.
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Post by: Geoni on May 30, 2010, 09:30:40 am
I love Persopolis  :love:. That can be considered literature, but I think literature has more to do with the writing part of the comics. If I were an English teacher the only reason I'd have my class draw&write a comic is for the purpose of teaching humor or irony. My students would definitely get more than 5 minutes to do it.
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Post by: Falcon Avian on May 30, 2010, 10:54:40 am
I love Persopolis  :love:. That can be considered literature, but I think literature has more to do with the writing part of the comics. If I were an English teacher the only reason I'd have my class draw&write a comic is for the purpose of teaching humor or irony. My students would definitely get more than 5 minutes to do it.

Or if you are bored and want some entertainment  ;D
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Post by: Xifer on May 30, 2010, 06:24:59 pm
I call dollars tria at times  :-\ And I had about 5 minutes to draw and for a plan so I just went with first thing that came to mind.

Yes Esorono! That's a win... lmao
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Post by: Falcon Avian on May 30, 2010, 07:18:39 pm
I call dollars tria at times  :-\ And I had about 5 minutes to draw and for a plan so I just went with first thing that came to mind.

Yes Esorono! That's a win... lmao

Hehehe :3
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Post by: Candy on May 30, 2010, 08:09:32 pm
I love Persopolis  :love:. That can be considered literature, but I think literature has more to do with the writing part of the comics. If I were an English teacher the only reason I'd have my class draw&write a comic is for the purpose of teaching humor or irony. My students would definitely get more than 5 minutes to do it.

“The difference between illustrated prose and comics is that in illustrated prose, the pictures illustrate the text, and in comics, the pictures are the text.” Found that here (http://forum.newsarama.com/showthread.php?t=124318).

Also, shamefully, I forgot to mention Maus.
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Post by: Sarras Volcae on June 01, 2010, 11:29:16 pm
candy, you have something to say about westerns?
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Post by: Candy on June 02, 2010, 06:07:47 am
I'm not saying westerns are bad. In fact, I've read some good ones (given, the ones I've liked the most also teeter on the brink of the "trashy romance" category  :-[). I'm just saying they're not usually literature. Most genre fiction isn't.

"Not literature" isn't an insult, it's just a statement.

Having typed this brings a Mark Twain quote to mind - "A classic is something that everybody wants to have read and nobody wants to read."
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Post by: Geoni on June 02, 2010, 08:53:22 am
Pfft...westerns, easterns are better.

Anyways I think that a graphic novel has more literature element to it than the old super hero comic books. Though when it comes to books with pictures, I'm no expert. I read NOVEL novels.
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Post by: Falcon Avian on June 02, 2010, 11:14:55 pm
I'm almost finished with a comic, I just have to ink and color it now.

(http://i835.photobucket.com/albums/zz272/Esorono/Non-spoilercomic.jpg)

Sneak preview :D
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Post by: Candy on June 03, 2010, 12:50:41 am
Chat channels = taverns now? Sheesh, PS really is turning into WoW...
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Post by: Xifer on June 03, 2010, 02:17:04 am
I see me... \o/ Although, the black bar has me a bit worried. Is it a censor??
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Post by: Falcon Avian on June 03, 2010, 02:38:30 am
I see me... \o/ Although, the black bar has me a bit worried. Is it a censor??

Nah, I just wanted to see the reaction I get if I put a censor bar there  ;D
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Post by: Geoni on June 03, 2010, 05:16:22 am
Chat channels = taverns now? Sheesh, PS really is turning into WoW...

lolz that made my day. It's kinda true if you have the wrong group of players in the tavern.
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Post by: Candy on June 03, 2010, 06:12:05 am
Chat channels = taverns now? Sheesh, PS really is turning into WoW...

lolz that made my day. It's kinda true if you have the wrong group of players in the tavern.

Well actually, what I'm referring to is that there are often IC channels in WoW - "/hearthstone" is usually set in a tavern, my main's guild has a channel set in a castle all our characters live in, and my home server has a channel that acts as a radio frequency. I loathe the idea on PS, but because WoW's world is so huge and you get so many strict-PLers on the RP servers, it's much more forgivable there. xD
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Post by: Sarras Volcae on June 04, 2010, 01:12:40 am
am i the only one who can't see the text?

edit: damn my blindness, i didn't see the part where you said you had yet to ink it.
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Post by: Falcon Avian on June 04, 2010, 01:37:28 am
am i the only one who can't see the text?

edit: damn my blindness, i didn't see the part where you said you had yet to ink it.

Not only that, but I blurred them out :D
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Post by: Knightspark9 on June 12, 2010, 03:26:31 am
Comic = awsome. 
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Post by: Falcon Avian on June 13, 2010, 07:49:47 pm
...Now if only it didn't take me years to finish something so simple >_<
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Post by: Knightspark9 on June 13, 2010, 09:45:02 pm
* cracks a whip *
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Post by: Candy on June 14, 2010, 10:39:08 am
*Godmode-steals Knightspark's whip*

Take your time on art; rushed work is never as good. We'll be patient. *Looks at the whip* Er, most of us.
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Post by: Knightspark9 on June 16, 2010, 05:47:25 am
Sorry, it's just that your art work is too awsome!!!
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Post by: Falcon Avian on June 23, 2010, 04:01:43 pm
(http://i835.photobucket.com/albums/zz272/Esorono/IMG-3.jpg)

I gave up trying to digitally make it better :p So I just contrasted it...

Also...Watch me on Deviantart and hope many people join us! >w< http://esorono.deviantart.com/

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Post by: Xifer on June 23, 2010, 07:25:38 pm
Awesome...
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Post by: Geoni on June 24, 2010, 02:13:07 am
imho Sarras should be more gangsta in this. She's like a little hood rat.  :P
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Post by: Falcon Avian on June 24, 2010, 02:24:33 am
imho Sarras should be more gangsta in this. She's like a little hood rat.  :P

This was before I got a chance to look at her creepy sig.

>.>
<.<
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Post by: Illysia on June 24, 2010, 02:28:16 am
So that's what goes on in that place I never go. ;D

Nice one. :thumbup:
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Post by: Knightspark9 on June 24, 2010, 12:37:24 pm
Hilarous.
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Post by: Sarras Volcae on June 29, 2010, 10:53:07 pm
lol... interesting  :P

making any more?