PlaneShift
Fan Area => Fan Art => Topic started by: Xoel on July 15, 2010, 03:01:17 am
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Hey. Thought I'd finally set up a bit of a thread, comments and critique on the art welcome.
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oB__zWNBwHw (http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=oB__zWNBwHw)
This is the Kore Irka Clan trailer I've been working on recently. Has no sound.
Feedback please. (It's my first skeletal animation piece)
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:o - :o - Are those ... Sarraghi Enkis? - :o
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Well done. Quite credible animations and scenarios.
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No, almost all Enkidukai in the video are Kore. Akaiddo, my character, has a mane. The other pale Kore with almost no stripes is Barike, leader of House Cheshire, Core Clan of the Enki Alliance (hence in the short alliance founding scene)
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Ah, so you modelled an additional mane...
Hmm, so I still wonder how Sarraghis will look like. The image in the PS Wiki is still empty. But I will stay as patient as possible. :innocent:
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Very nice. Akaiddo reminds me a bit of Kieve's Avatar. (http://www.hydlaaplaza.com/smf/index.php?topic=30695.msg412580#msg412580)
I would love to see more of that very short battle scene with the vilenaut (and maybe less of the patrol with the pterosaur - the mesh has still this clumsy touch).
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Minus the glasses, yes, and a different tone of skin, being a Kore.
The vilenaut scene was cut short because the animation in the last half was a bit crap :P
And I think everyone agrees that pterosaur's face needs changing.
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The animation itself seems very stiff - the movement could be a little more fluid and natural-looking - but otherwise it's pretty nice. I like the shot of the clan at the end.