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Fan Area => Roleplaying (Communitive Storywriting) => Single Author Stories => Topic started by: seperot on November 06, 2003, 04:20:12 pm
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well ok heres my story i think its not great but it explanes my history in ps:
SMACK! Seperot falls down a flight of stairs landing on a table breaking it \"OH that\'s it, it\'s the chains for you\" Seperot scrambles he knew
what that ment he thought as he raced for the back windows he turned around to see his adopted father run around the corner to grab him
with out a moments pause Seperot jumps out of the 3rd story window and lands in a mud pile. as if nothing had happened he jumped up and ran for the forests
from behind he could ere his father swearing at him. Seperot was used to this it was his daliy life his adopted parents tried to punish him for doing something anything at all
and he run off hide in the wood s then come back later because theres only so much a 6 year old can do he checked himself over for cuts and found one on his arm. after making bandages
for himself he decided to look for his den. later that day he trudged back home. as soon as he opened the door his adopted mother threw him againced the wall and punched him in the stomach
a few times \" don\'t you dare look at me you little whelp do you know how much that window will cause\" Seperot didn\'t answer he know how much he breaks then every few days to escape
being hung from the ceiling by his arms for the rest of the day \"WELL!!\" the woman yelled Seperot stayed quite \"why i oughta--\"\" just then the 3 children barged in the house \" ah my babies\"
she says in delight how was your day? \" fine\" they chimed in unisence. \"good...well i\'m afraid to say children but Seperot here broke another window so i cant buy you sweets this week\" Seperot
knew what was coming and stood up in defiance well i\'ll leave you kids alone for a bit\" and walks off the 3children where 9, 10 and 12 all related to the mother by birth. Seperot was adopted at birth by this family
because they couldn\'t conserve another child but at 3 years old they realized they chouldent afford there extravagant lifestyle and had to down grade there house. ever since Seperot was blamed for everything and since 4 years old
had been fighting for survival the 12 year old smacked Seperot right in the jaw then yelled \"come on lets get little pale fur here. Seperot was pale he had white fur and very light blue eyes which gave the others something to bully him about.
Seperot took a few more blows before fighting back rendering the 9 year old unconscious he beat up the other 2 for a bit but sep knew it was a pointless fight because just at that second the father turned up pining him to the wall to let the others hit him.
a few years later and things hadn\'t got better except now the 3 children don\'t fight Seperot anymore they stopped after the time he broke there arms. now he fought with his adopted father. finally at the age of 12 things had peaked and his adopted parents had
become fed up with hurting Seperot and tried to kill him they fed him poison from a rare fish. the burial was the next day unfortunaly the a few where immune to the poisons full effects and makes them go into a very deep sleep for 72 hours
when Seperot opened his eyes he was in shock he scrambled open the coffin but couldn\'t as he kept trying fear became anger and Seperot had a lot of it. infact he had gone so anger his eyes filled with blood. as he broke free he had one thing on his mind revenge
and ran home kicked the door down and murdered his entire family. still seething in anger he could only think of one thing more death and jumped thought the next door window house killing them to by the end he had killed and burn half the town to the ground he was released from his rage
and realized what he had done and ran to the woods. his fur after the events had slowly turned black untill it was jet black.
6 years later and Seperot had finally dared to re-enter his old town he had a cloke he stole of a villager that had passed be a few months back the covered him. he decided to keep quiet and went into bars and shops and just listen to everyone he had no knolage anywhere else to go so was afraid to go anywhere unless he could
find someone to go with it took 2 years for him to find somewhere suitable to leave a place called hydella a city for all walks of life Seperot knew his profession of roguishness chould help him in big city\'s he got all exited thinking that he might be able to act like he wants to for the first time in his life.
he traveled as a guard for the caravan merchant along the way they chatted about Guilds in hydellia gods and other stuff since Seperot had no idea about any of this. once he arrived in hydilla he was amazed the merchant gave him a few coins for his work and left him in the town center.
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poor Seppie... you haven\'t had a nice infancy, have you? :P
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Um... wow....
Two words: ANGER MANAGEMENT
Next time you feel like murdering your family, your neighbors, and burning half the village, count backwards from 10!
Or even better go to that place on Moogie\'s sig!! (http://badgerbadgerbadger.com)
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Wow, I can seriously say that that was pretty darn scary. 8o
No no, not your story Seperot, it was pretty interesting. I\'m talking about that link that Yarulion posted: I haven\'t been that scared since I nearly fell off that megasaur from 1000m up.
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Wow...and it even has the authentic Seperot spelling mistakes. I like it. 8) You\'re one reseilient little guy. Fell from a 3rd story window, you say...the other two stories are underground, right? ;)
Good story.
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wow ty i shoulda put more detail after i burnt the village but well mebbie i put it into more detail sometime
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Try to put some comas and dots. Otherwise, nice writting, sad story.
I\'m not walking ten feet near you! :) ;)
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Originally posted by Yarulion
Next time you feel like murdering your family
i\'ll take care of that ;)
anyways, what was your age when you got adopted, 3? i need to know to set how old was I when our real parents died...
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i got it already thought out your game chars 24 our perants died when you where 3 or so so it works out that not long befor our perants died i was born and adopted days after to that mean old dead family :P .
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nope, i couldn\'t be 3...
Draklar remembers his parents just fine, and he had some light trainings before his parents died, so i say at least 8.
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oh well i was sent for adoption at birth anyways so it just means you forgot about me since you where only 3
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Weeeeelll i had a go at redoing me story and heres part one..might do part 2 when i get back online :)
*Smack!* Seperot flew down a fight of stairs landing on a table to break his fall. the small enki male had not a second to think before hes step father appeared at the top of there stairs. \" Jan\'s good table!\" his father remarked anger covering the Ylian\'s bearded face his fist dripping with blood from seperot\'s nose \" right! its the cellar for you\". the felines eyes opened wide with horror and without thinking bolted across the hall his step father yelling him to stop and chasing behind him. just as the father was about to grab him Seperot slid under a table sliding to the other end to see the Ylian running across the top of it. once again seperot bolted this time straight out a window falling down from the 3rd story down into a patch of muddy water his knee hitting his chest as he lands knocking the wind out of him. the Enkidukai looked up to see his adopted father holding a chain collar in one hand, seperot heaving for breath stood up and slowly moved to the near by forest gaining speed as he got closer knowing if he didn\'t make it his step father would soon be chasing him again. seperot entered the forest and climbed in to the trees finding his \"den\" hiding there for several hours. this was seperot\'s life as he knew it a family who hated him the rest of the town thinking of him as almost a pet ignorant to his race being a enki the violence was seen by most as deserved and no one helped him when he asked leaving seperot to turn to the forest to protect himself from all others.
later that day seperot walked home his tummy begging him for food. his eyes firmly shut as he walked inside dreading what would happen. as he closed the door and opened his eyes he saw the table had been thrown downstairs and knife marks made to look like claw marks put in them to set him up. the enki sighed he didn\'t know why they bothered setting him up anymore they just beat him anyway and no one cared anymore. as he walked in the kitchen he was greeted with a fist in the face by his oldest \"brother\" seperot rubbed his face and looked at the 14 year old Ylian who then said \" we wont be getting any treats for a week thanks to you breaking the table\" and with that 2 more blows to Seperot\'s chest where made the 3rd blow was blocked by seperot who held he\'s \"brothers\" hand his claws extending out and digging into the Ylian flesh. the child panicking pulled away but in doing so tore his skin around his hand. Seperot grinned but was short lived as a rolling pin smacked him across the face knocking him flying to the other end of the room. he looked up to see his adopted mother holding the pin \" we let you into this house after your mother abandoned you.. left you for DEAD! and this! this is how you repay us breaking my mother\'s table and then making an unprovoked attack against your brother\" she then called her husband who quite quickly after hearing her telling him about the cuts on there sons hand grabbed seperot by the neck lifted him up the wall and kept punching the enki in the chest till he passed out from the pain and lack of oxygen. Seperot awoke hanging by his hands in the cellar to the sounds of children giggling and sharp poking feelings. he opened his eyes to see all 3 of his brothers where stabbing him with sticks. he hung there acting calm then quickly snatching one of the sticks out of the younger of the 3\'s hand started to beat them around the head with it until they left then lifting his feet above his head pushing the stick inside the crude built lock system ...it took Sepeort little over an hour to unlock both his shackles and get to the floor. Sighing again he sneaked into the kitchen in search of food.
this lifestyle rolled on for the enki for 7 years the white furred blue eyed feline constantly getting abused but slowly getting stronger and faster slowly able to beat his \"brothers to every punch and soon his step father dared not fight him still not feeding him and locking away any food seperot became better and better at sneaking and lock picking. this when on until his 14th birthday in witch his adopted family had, had enough and put a rare kind of poison into his food that he usually steals. Seperot of course did take the bait and had soon collapse after checking his heart rate had stopped they called the priest from Talad\'s temple for a burial... they buried seperot the next day with a plain tombstone reading \" Seperot Carter loved by few \" and etched at the bottom \" if anyone \" the end...
or it would be the end if the family had made the small realization the poison was special because it only effects the body for 2 days putting them in a near death state. Seperot awoke in the coffin his eyes unable to see anything in the total darkness panicking his hands shot upwards feeling the cheap velvet lid of the coffin causing him to panic even more his mind becoming more conscious of what has happened and rage taking over fear. years and years of rage and abuse building up uncontrollably. breaking free of his own grave seperot felt rage holding over his body making every muscle feel stronger looking down to see his fur tips his whole life had been a pure soft white, had turned black as the night, his eyes losing focus all he was able to see was red. he felt his conscious mind fall silent. Seperot\'s body started running it ran all the way to his house smashing the door in he walked in to she family all looking at him in shock there shock was short lived as the enraged enki\'s paw lunged out at his step father his claws extended as he digs deep into the Ylian\'s throat seperot\'s paw closing around his windpipe and pulling it out in one brutal pull. the rest of the family running away in horror and the step father twitched as blood rained from his neck. then seperot jumped at his eldest brother as he started to run. as the Evenki stood on his brothers back his foot started kicking the Ylian\'s head until he stopped moving seperot lifted him up and shoved a fire poker into his heart sticking the lifeless corpse against the wall. grabbing the 2 other fire side tools and chasing after his mother beating her to death with them. walking into the basement and finding the 2 younger brother\'s hiding in the corner each one getting the fire tools he had killed there mother with jammed into there chests.
Seperot had killed his adopted family but still lusted for blood of those he felt betrayed him leaping from house to house slaughtering family after family until the town he had spent his life in was almost devoid of life all together houses burning to the ground, blood flowing into the streets. standing at the edge of the forest seperot regained consciousness looking at what he had done gasping in horror at first but then almost a pleased look came over him his fur had now turned jet black looking in a small pool of water as he started to trek into the forest he saw his eyes where now as red as blood as he walked into the darkness the flames behind him becoming smaller as he lived in the woods. striping away the name carter and calling himself by her real motheres name \" Darkstorm\"
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Originally posted by seperot
seperot lifted him up and shoved a fire poker into his heart sticking the lifeless corpse against the wall.
strike while the iron is hot :]
yea, bloodshed is always nice ;) :P
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You thought that was scary? See this. (http://www.weebls-stuff.com/toons/24/)
And yup, nice Story Sep :D
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The fact that youre a psycho has made you rise in my estimation Sep...cool. And I thought Tybalt was sick... :)
p.s. OMG evil badgers :D
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LOL, i see many similarities between the story of Tybalt and Seperot. Do you guys have unfinished youth trauma\'s or something? Want to talk about it?
PS are Draklar and Seperot biological brothers?
*note to self, don\'t get in the way of seperot*
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isn\'t draklar a dermorian?
does the story explain seperots hair?
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Originally posted by TheTaintedSoul
PS are Draklar and Seperot biological brothers?
nooooooo.... it\'s just that this story was written at the times when I still was an enkidukai :P
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kinda violent But hey iam rping Evil So Yeah more blood and gore Woot woot :D:D:D:D