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Fan Area => Roleplaying (Communitive Storywriting) => Single Author Stories => Topic started by: Dexlan on December 04, 2003, 11:26:11 pm
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Ok I\'ve a bit of free time so i\'ll have a bash at this, other wise i cant really comment on anyone else can i!
This is my PS game character so i\'ll give him some back ground and maybe i\'ll join \"The legend has wings\" if only there was more time in the day!!
right, This is the background and the after will begin Kaytos story......
Kayto walked to the window. He leaned heavily on the still his forehead against the glass, eyes shut.
It had been three years ago that he last saw his family, His wife, two sons and four daughters. The Enkidukai was on his way back to the family home, the youngest son Keli had been ill, Kayto now had a fresh potion in a pouch hanging from his belt. But he would never make it back home?
The ground came up and hit him; the world spun about and flame fell like rain from the sky! He did not even have time to panic. Suddenly the ground on which he lay was gone and he fell. And that was that.
His settled family life was gone torn away without reason or warning. Here he was in a new world. One which he had not asked for, he was not looking for a new start. He had family and love and peace. It was to be his children that would seek adventure and he would guide them. Kayto had already lived his life and now wanted to watch his children live theirs. This was all wrong and now they were gone.
He managed to drag himself out of the wilderness to the city of Yliakum. Here he learned the full extent of just how lost he was, not just in another land but another world! He gathered information from where he could. Settled life had dulled his skills with sword and agility, so he worked where he could often employed in hard labour. There were many races in Yliakum, but there were also other Enkidukai. Many of different origin breed and from lands he did not know. They had each arrived in a different way; some came close to Kaytos description of events. He learned from others that parties of Enkidukai had set out to make their way back home but none were successful as yet. Many were returning to Yliakum, many which were never seen again. The weight of this knowledge crushed him. So it was as Kaytos fitness and skill improved to be more like they once were in his youthful years that his path became clearer. In order to return to his family he would need new knowledge in the ways of magic. The hunger for this knowledge drove him. He was always aware that time was slipping by and every moment in Yliakum was a moment away from home and family. He knew pushing his limits would not be fast enough. So he began to change. This change in him became clear to Kayto when he accepted the teachings of Diana.
Diana told him of his passion, a passion with which Kayto could achieve his goals through her training and guidance. She chose him for his drive and because Kayto would not venture in the realms that he would need to follow. A darker path, one of blacker magic. He had not given it a second thought she had a means and answers he had only to do her biding??.
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ok dragging out a bit? sorry never tried to write anything before! well let me have it then!will continue with Kaytho\'s story soon.......
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thats quite good Dexlan its more relaxed then anything i can write (but then if something drastic dont happen in my storys i call it a faliure) keep it up :tup:
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I like your character background. It has lots of room for expansion, and adventure. Maybe you\'ll be sent out of a quest to stop the Cemetery eating Kran? :D
Not really, but you should join \"The Legend has Wings\" ....It seems to have stopped dead, and needs someone to give it a push.
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Thanks! I\'ll keep this going a bit and see how it goes.
I just put details for my character in \"The Legend has Wings\"
but not joined in yet afraid i wont have enough input or just time to give!
will see!
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Right onwards with the story, now there\'s a back ground hope it will gain some interest or comments!
Family Lost
Kaytos story.......cont,
Flashes of brilliant bright light broke through the trees that rushed by. Kato leaped on a large boulder and propelled himself off it and into a tree, landing neatly on a branch he let himself tumble forward flipping and landing in the next tree. He ran the length of the trees long limb and became air born once again the light exploded all around him as he left the tree cover. He landed cat like and was coiled ready to spring into action; he closed his eyes and let his breathing slow. The chants he had studied earlier were now burned into his memory.
Diana?s silhouetted figure made its way to him. Her curvaceous form wrapped in a long flowing robe, short soft white fur with a hint of speckled grey spots and large blue Enkidukai eyes. A low growl escaped Kayto.
?This form does not please you?? Diana purred in a taunting voice.
Kayto stood upright as she came to stand beside him, closer than there was room for so that he brushed against her as he rose. They were face to face and their lips almost touched as Diana spoke in a low whisper
?I do admire your methods of study, learning the spell and committing it to memory through physical exorcise. You achieve a trance like state during your exertions that few can learn in the seclusion of a private place.?
Kayto did not answer her his breathing was still to heavy his nostrils flared, Diana caught the moment her eyes focused on the sweat damp fur, she stroked her feline fingers through it her eyes went to the where Kaytos fur disappeared beneath his tunic.
?And what do Mature Enkidukais in training wear beneath their clothing?? Her hand slipped under his tunic Kayto caught it and stopped her from going any further.
?It would seem little if any, just as a Diaboli.? Kayto said.
Diana met Kaytos eyes again. Her features changed to be more familiar; her fur grew longer and darkened to a faun colour. Kayto did not even try to cover his reaction and she smiled at his sharp in take of breath.
?More pleasing?? she asked.
Kayto felt her tail curl around his leg.
?Why do still play these games with me?? Kayto asked.
?Why do you ask questions that you already know the answers too?? Diana replied.
?You do not need to please me I am yours for the taken.? Kayto answered.
?And when you want me I may take you? said Diana.
Diana continued ?Until then these games will continue, so you did not answer my question.?
Kayto moved away from her. ?You are very alike Serena!? He said in answer. ?I would say that you were my wives twin if she had one.? Diana face brightened ?Really??I am pleased then.?
?I am also pleased at your progress, you must be also?.?
Kayto looked back at her she had taken the illusion away and was in her natural form, a dark skinned Diaboli. She was impossibly even more curvaceous than the feline illusion.
?I have come far, even more so thanks to your guidance. I have learned much ?.?
Diana folded her arms across her chest and interrupted ?Still not enough, and no! I known you mean not to disrespect.?
?After all there is purpose in this training and learning of magic making your hunger and your will strong,?
Kayto thought he saw something in her face as she spoke, pride anticipation?
She continued ?Most learning these arts do it for power and grandeur, unattainable goals of god like stature! You have a single purpose one which you can attain and you strive for it!?
Diana?s look became more intense ?Why do you think I teach you??
Kayto stiffened his face darkened. ?You have uses for me?. and are forging a tool to be used.? He said flatly.
?This is why you teach me and in turn I gain knowledge in furthering my wish to find a way back to my family.? Diana?s face kept the intensity ?We shall see.?
Her look returned to one of pleasure ?Now watching you train has made me hungry?.?she turned away and looked back over her shoulder ??.and not just for food!? her eyes flashed at him and she walked on.
Kayto swallowed hard. He loved his wife and children and knew to allow himself any feeling to Diana even purely physical would be dangerous. Of course it was one thing to know this and it did not guarantee immunity to her charms. Kayto followed.
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Hmmm there they are, not the kind of action you were thinking Seperot! If i can keep it up there will be soon!
hope you like it!
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Oh my! I like this its really good, back ground is great but Diana is a bad bad girl!
There\'s more right?
No way am I going to be able to post in here now theres so much good stuff!
maybe i\'ll draw a pic! cant wait for your next chapter Dexlan!
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Hope to get some more comments on what you think there will be action just have to get it down but heres what i have for now...............
As usual Diana had a full table with a choice of meats, vegetables and breads. Diana simply greeted Kayto and they got on with eating the food. Kayto tried not to be tense but knew Diana was not a fool he had not made eye contact with her much since the initial greeting.
Diana however seemed to be letting it slide. She did this with ease eating the food with a passion, one thing Kayto shared with Diana was that they both enjoyed their food, at least Kayto use too. Even so he could feel her eyes on him and so he waited for what was coming next. He did not have to wait long.
?Do you think you are ready??
He looked up at her and her eyes impaled his.
?I am always ready for whatever it is that you have for me.? Kayto felt his will become steal and his balance return.
?Really, would you kill for me?? She asked.
?I would always protect you, you are too important to me.? He knew this was not what she meant.
?Do you think that I need your protection? After all I am just a weak frail woman am I not?? She held her gaze on his eyes.
? No, no you are not weak or frail or defenceless.? He tried not to hold his breath.
?Then answer my question, would you kill for me?? she asked for the second time.
?And lets be clear shall we, I?m saying that there is a politician that I need out of the way, or I have a rival for a lover and so she must be dealt with. No one evil, or harming others. Just jobs that I have fashioned my tool for.?
?I am to be an assassin at you command?? said Kayto flatly
Diana did not answer but held his eyes. He could read nothing from them.
? My answer then is no.? Kayto answered darkly, even now knowing that he was not been actually asked to carry out such a command. He might be ending a quicker path that would take him to his family but he was not an assassin!
Diana held his gaze a moment longer raising one eyebrow and smiling before releasing his eyes.
?So,? she said looking into her glass of wine.
Diana meet Kaytos eyes once more ?You are no longer simply a tool but something with a mind of its own.?
Her smile was not as taunting now ?If you think that has now just been a revelation to me then it is you now who are playing games with yourself!?
Kayto waited he had lost nothing yet but where was this leading them?
But Diana would not be hurried.
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Thanks Tuatha! Diana is a Diabloi it\'s a Trait of her race they are natural charmers must be some Irish blood!
I will get to the quest and action soon!
Please post your comments i really want to hear them good or bad!
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Well, well Dexlan. I enjoy your story. I just happened across this thread today, and I am anticipating hearing more. Keep it up please!
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goopace and a nice look into the way your character thinks.