heres an update of this one. im gonna keep drawing on this. once i draw some more on it. im going to reupload this file.

BTW if anyone is interested in how i start on these. i start with a gesture that takes about 5 to 10 minutes. and then i start a new layer in the gimp. And start adding details. if you are really interested in improving your drawing. then getting better at gesturing is essential i think. heres a picture of how this drawing started out. But anyways, i start with the gesture layer. i go back to it occasionally, when i need to plan something out. after that i go back to a detail layer. eventually when i feel good enuf about the detail layer, i turn off the gesture layer, or turn its opacity down.