Ok, you NEED ambiant sound, ambiant life, awsome effects, you need to invert the view to the mouse (first-person) and put a cross hair on it, make it to were you don\'t have to click on the message box just to talk...some thing like the \"T\" key, and more areas!, put monsters and fighting in it...weapons...magic..., better animations, and more music (your music is freekin awsome!).   I would suggest a song called Salvation is created, its a good song.