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Roleplaying (Communitive Storywriting) / Re: Dakkru's faithful
« on: March 30, 2022, 01:19:49 pm »
[Thanks for the comments! I'll admit, this will be written slowly as I decide to come back to it. Hope you all enjoy the next bit.]
There was a small temple of Dakkru in the slums of Quintherion. Its banners had been defaced. The roof was partially collapsed. Most of its idols were permanently ashen. But when Linas decided that Saiix had been called, she sent him there after school to learn. The priestess, Cerrit, was a cold ynnwn. Under her close watch, Saiix swept the charred floors, collected and counted the tithe, and polished the darkened Dakkru figurines that littered a dozen pedestals. She always told him to rub until he could see his face in the gleam, but whatever fire had razed the temple years ago also left each idol tarnished. At best, he managed to wipe the latest layer of dust to collect on their surfaces.
Despite enduring many pointless toils day to day, Saiix kept returning to the temple to be present during Priestess Cerrit's evening sermon. Cerrit went through her usual remarks on the finer points of worship. Then, before the session closed, she guided the room in a song of praise. Her voice was incredible; cool and honeyed. Whenever her singing spread through the room, that tiny temple felt so much larger. Like everything of importance in the city of Quintherion was held within those walls.
Each night Saiix would rest his broom in the corner and sit in the back pews with pen and paper. He copied the lyrics as best he could to practice the songs at home. There were tunes dedicated to worship and dittys that discussed Dakkru's place in the pantheon, but Saiix's favorite songs were about heroes. Individuals who fought monsters and men on behalf of the goddess. Their stories ended in either victory or glorious defeat. He found himself humming the epic of Obernaught, the Fanatic while he polished. Or singing the deeds of Kerd at the pulpit when Cerrit was away running errands. He wanted to be like these heroes and win glory. But he also enjoyed the way their stories made sense of the goddess and of death. It all seemed less scary and more natural the more their tales rolled off his tongue.
One day, Cerrit caught him singing loudly to himself while counting the tithe.
"When did you learn that," she asked.
Saiix flinched, but noticed that the priestess wasn't speaking with the harsh, punishing tone he was used to. She was simply curious. When he showed her the pages of songs he had copied, that curiosity turned to zeal.
"Well then," she said, setting the pages neatly back into his hands. "Let's see what the goddess has in store."
Cerrit taught Saiix of great Ynnwn and Diaboli masters of death; legends not only of warriors but apothecaries, priests, and academics.
"Death is not the sole dominion of gladiators and sell swords. The Octarch could send more to die with a decree if he willed it."
As he grew older, he studied the accounts of various faithful who had returned from the Death Realm, as well as religious texts that explained the relationships of the gods and the history of Yliakum and the labyrinths beyond the Bronze Doors. Occasionally, his studies would mention the enemy, but he wasn't sure who that referred to. Whenever he asked Cerrit, she said very little. There were believers who focused on doing battle with a nemesis who works against Dakkru, she'd say. But that was the focus of certain sects. It was not how everyone choose to serve the goddess. The priestess wanted to push Saiix toward being a great healer or alchemist.
"Mages, scholars, learned men. They all advance both society and serve the goddess."
But tales of mighty warriors had cemented in Saiix's mind. He took up the sword and practiced in the alley behind the temple. The time between sessions with the priestess and cleaning duties was filled with the sound of a dulled blade thudding against makeshift a straw dummy. By the time he was a teenager, Cerrit suggested he travel to a proper temple.
"There are greater temples to Dakkru outside of this city. Your boy can learn whether he's well suited to the life of a warrior."
"But how can he make the journey alone? He's still a child." Linas asked. His grandmother's hands were quaking at the suggestion. She took a seat to calm her nerves. Spending time at the temple had been her idea and it hadn't occurred to Saiix until now how much it weighed on her. He was home less and less. He had grown taller, but also more well-muscled than the Demorian boys that lived on the block. The neighbors avoided him now. And he spoke of death casually, even hummed songs dedicated to warriors who were killed in battle and called them lucky for their violent ends.
"I'm old enough, grandmother," Saiix said. He put a hand on her shoulder and squeezed He smiled. "I promise, I'll come back home." He hoped that his words would be a comfort. But when she met his eyes, he realized the extent of his ignorance. She turned away quickly and closed the door on her bedroom. And Saiix recognized the look of someone afraid to be left alone, waiting forever.
Linas was never convinced. Sometimes, Saiix thought she may have went to the goddess wishing that she had stopped him. But maybe she understood there had been no other choice. Dakkru had called him, and she was waiting.
There was a small temple of Dakkru in the slums of Quintherion. Its banners had been defaced. The roof was partially collapsed. Most of its idols were permanently ashen. But when Linas decided that Saiix had been called, she sent him there after school to learn. The priestess, Cerrit, was a cold ynnwn. Under her close watch, Saiix swept the charred floors, collected and counted the tithe, and polished the darkened Dakkru figurines that littered a dozen pedestals. She always told him to rub until he could see his face in the gleam, but whatever fire had razed the temple years ago also left each idol tarnished. At best, he managed to wipe the latest layer of dust to collect on their surfaces.
Despite enduring many pointless toils day to day, Saiix kept returning to the temple to be present during Priestess Cerrit's evening sermon. Cerrit went through her usual remarks on the finer points of worship. Then, before the session closed, she guided the room in a song of praise. Her voice was incredible; cool and honeyed. Whenever her singing spread through the room, that tiny temple felt so much larger. Like everything of importance in the city of Quintherion was held within those walls.
Each night Saiix would rest his broom in the corner and sit in the back pews with pen and paper. He copied the lyrics as best he could to practice the songs at home. There were tunes dedicated to worship and dittys that discussed Dakkru's place in the pantheon, but Saiix's favorite songs were about heroes. Individuals who fought monsters and men on behalf of the goddess. Their stories ended in either victory or glorious defeat. He found himself humming the epic of Obernaught, the Fanatic while he polished. Or singing the deeds of Kerd at the pulpit when Cerrit was away running errands. He wanted to be like these heroes and win glory. But he also enjoyed the way their stories made sense of the goddess and of death. It all seemed less scary and more natural the more their tales rolled off his tongue.
One day, Cerrit caught him singing loudly to himself while counting the tithe.
"When did you learn that," she asked.
Saiix flinched, but noticed that the priestess wasn't speaking with the harsh, punishing tone he was used to. She was simply curious. When he showed her the pages of songs he had copied, that curiosity turned to zeal.
"Well then," she said, setting the pages neatly back into his hands. "Let's see what the goddess has in store."
Cerrit taught Saiix of great Ynnwn and Diaboli masters of death; legends not only of warriors but apothecaries, priests, and academics.
"Death is not the sole dominion of gladiators and sell swords. The Octarch could send more to die with a decree if he willed it."
As he grew older, he studied the accounts of various faithful who had returned from the Death Realm, as well as religious texts that explained the relationships of the gods and the history of Yliakum and the labyrinths beyond the Bronze Doors. Occasionally, his studies would mention the enemy, but he wasn't sure who that referred to. Whenever he asked Cerrit, she said very little. There were believers who focused on doing battle with a nemesis who works against Dakkru, she'd say. But that was the focus of certain sects. It was not how everyone choose to serve the goddess. The priestess wanted to push Saiix toward being a great healer or alchemist.
"Mages, scholars, learned men. They all advance both society and serve the goddess."
But tales of mighty warriors had cemented in Saiix's mind. He took up the sword and practiced in the alley behind the temple. The time between sessions with the priestess and cleaning duties was filled with the sound of a dulled blade thudding against makeshift a straw dummy. By the time he was a teenager, Cerrit suggested he travel to a proper temple.
"There are greater temples to Dakkru outside of this city. Your boy can learn whether he's well suited to the life of a warrior."
"But how can he make the journey alone? He's still a child." Linas asked. His grandmother's hands were quaking at the suggestion. She took a seat to calm her nerves. Spending time at the temple had been her idea and it hadn't occurred to Saiix until now how much it weighed on her. He was home less and less. He had grown taller, but also more well-muscled than the Demorian boys that lived on the block. The neighbors avoided him now. And he spoke of death casually, even hummed songs dedicated to warriors who were killed in battle and called them lucky for their violent ends.
"I'm old enough, grandmother," Saiix said. He put a hand on her shoulder and squeezed He smiled. "I promise, I'll come back home." He hoped that his words would be a comfort. But when she met his eyes, he realized the extent of his ignorance. She turned away quickly and closed the door on her bedroom. And Saiix recognized the look of someone afraid to be left alone, waiting forever.
Linas was never convinced. Sometimes, Saiix thought she may have went to the goddess wishing that she had stopped him. But maybe she understood there had been no other choice. Dakkru had called him, and she was waiting.