Story

[Kendrick]

Heh. I was bored and decided to do something productive. here it is. gets a little violent near the end. be as insultive as you like
btw I already know it doesn\'t make sense


                It was a cold night in the middle of the Xaqad Forest when, your and a friend, Schragan, walked into an empty Kada-el pub, it was empty mostly because the bar was put there to serve the dwarves that worked in the mines, but since the dwarves got free beer from the Black Hand Dwarf company, they rarely came in. The Pub only stayed in business because the Black Hand didn\'t give beer to anyone that wasn\'t a dwarf.

 Schragan came in with a dark purple cape tied to his Gleaming silver-like armor that had his families crest ingraved on it. You wore your usually black leather armor that was missing the bottom of one arm. He and you had spent the day exploring a few new tunnels that had been uncovered by the Black Hand Dwarf Company two days earlier. Together you sat down at the bar and ordered a drink when you heard a sound coming from outside the pub, you thought nothing of it.

    You slowly finished your drink when Schragan decided to investigate the sound. As he opened the door a giant wind knocked him from the  door in front of the bar to the walk in the back of it putting a crack in his armor as he struck the wall. You stood there shocked at what had happened. He screamed in pain as the crack cut into his skin. Lipan, a waitress in the bar that evening ran over to help him. She unhooked his armor and pulled it off of him as bright red blood seeped out of the hole on the back of his shoulder, she took
off her apron an aplied pressure to the wound with it.

    Suddenly the door to the bar was ripped off it\'s hinges by the wind, it flew across the room, hitting Lipan in the back of the head.

 You jumped over to see if she was ok. She wasn\'t. The door had put a large dint in the back of her head. You set her up against the wall and went to check on Schragan, who had not moved. The cut was still bleeding. You removed the apron that had been bunched up to cover his cut. You were shocked as you saw a piece of his armor that was still in his back, but the sight of the steel quickly vanished as a river of blood spilled from the hole. Schragan didn\'t move. You shook him. He did not move. You realized that Schragan, one of your best friends... was dead.  Placing your hand on his chest and prayed \"Another great warrior of to guard the Gaits of Heaven.\".

    Great anger took control of you. Quickly you grabbed you sword and moved towards the door. The adrenaline that was pumping through your veins helped you fight the wind. Managing to get outside, you saw that many trees had been uprooted.

The wind calmed.

   You saw a man who you assumed caused all of the wind, because he was putting a scroll back into a scroll box. You yelled at him \"You, You there with the scroll!\" you scream this at him while running as fast as you could towards him.

  He Turned. The man had fire in his eyes. You didn\'t care, you wanted revenge. \"You, Evil man of hell, you shall pay for the death of my friend!\" you yelled. The man smiled and reached of a sword in his pack.

    Before he completely unshealthed his sword, you stuck him on the face with the back of your hand, sending him many feet back. He tried to laugh, disspite his pain. He fully unshealthed his sword and lunged at you. You took yours up into a defensive position and prepared for the on coming assault. He managed to hit you fairly hard, his sword putting a gash into yours, but you managed to keep your limbs.

  You flipped backwards while throwing one of your arrow heads at him. The arrow head hit him in the lower leg. He yelped and pulled the head out and flung it right back at you. You felt a wetness on your cheek. You put your hand to it to see what it was, and you saw that the head had put a fairly deep cut onto your cheek.

  He held his sword like a bat and started his next assault. You jumped backwards and got into a attack position. He just stood there. Staring. You stood there staring back.

 You held the sword upward over your head closed your eyes, and jumped at him.

  You hit nothing but dirt, your sword deeply imbedded into the ground. You saw that he had moved. He swung his sword at your blind side. You dropped to the ground as the sword missed you by mear centimeters. You turned and jumped at his feet, tackling him. You decided to end this. You crawled on top of him and took him by the hair, getting a good grip for what you were about to do. You put your hand on his chin, and quickly turned his head. Hearing the snap that was all too familiar. You knew you had conquered yet another foe.

 You stood up, and walked away. You returned to Yliakum to brag in the bars about the victory that was yours just moments ago, and live life like nothing happened. You are a iron hearted man/woman. You live your life by conquering evil. You are a Warrior.

[Bill]

Not bad Kendy, can I call you Kendy?

Maybe, if its possible, you could write some scrolls for the Jayose Library.

[Bill]

Here is a story by moi:

You and your friend, Jadiam, spar on the top of a secluded, and large hill behind the Gangria Mountains.

You lash your Steel Sword, with the words \"Kharuk Azade-Merene\", which means \"Dwarves Live Forver\", embedded on it, at Jadiam. He hovers his sword at his waist and blocks your sword. You slash again and this time you hold your momentum and push against his blade, pushing him to the ground. You raise your blade and swing it at his neck. It flys down straight to his neck and stops half an inch from his jugular.

You smile, and he smiles, then you both crack up and you fall down laughing. As Jadiam pounds his fist on the ground you listen to the wind. It is silent but you hear some whistle. CRACK! You look at the lone tree on the hill, and a arrow is stuck in the wood. You neal down, and motion to Jadiam to stop laughing but he does not hear you. You say it again, and this time he hears you and stops.

You put your hand up and grip the arrow and release it from the tree. You inspect it a bit and relise what kind of arrow is it. \"What kind of-\", says Jadiam but is cut off by your words. \"-Goblin. Their goblin arrows! Run!\", you yell at the top of your lungs.

You both scramble to your feet, and you run down the hill, Jadiam leading. You stop for a second and look back as you see a thousand goblins, some with arrows, others with blades ten times stronger than your own.

Five arrows fly by your head make you run down the hill. You and Jadiam run as fast as you can with arrows flying everywhere and a few swords being thrown. Finally after about half of a mile you reach a wall, with no way out.

You both turn around and unsheath your blades. You raise them, gripped with both your hands, and wait for the oncoming onslaught. You see heads peaking over the hill, and then bodies, and more bodies, and then even more. You get your sword ready and shout \"Kharuk Azade-Merene!\" You hear a rumbling and you turn around.

And light appears on the wall and changes into a circle. The circle crumbles on the edges and opens. You call Jadiam and you both run threw. A goblin arrow flys threw the hole and hits Jadiam in the arm, completely going threw it. He reaches for it, but you tell him not to pull it out.

You run down a large tunnel until you come to a large corrider with many collums. A red glow is in your sight, and since it is the only thing you can see the the dark place, you run towards it and find a maze of stair cases in a giant open room, over a boiling lava pit.

You and Jadiam run down the stairs and you soon realise goblins are stationed in the holes in the ceilings and are shooting arrows at you. One hits you in the leg, and another shoots into Jadiam\'s chest. He screams in pain but you make him move on.

You see the flood of the goblins have stopped at the top of the stairs, but now they are throwing anything possible at you.

Another arrow flys into Jadiam\'s chest. \"Kill me, kill me please!\", he begs of you. You raise your sword, and swing it at him. You turn your wrist and hit him with the butt of your sword and knock him out. You put him over your shoulder and run down the stairs, meanwhile a few stones have crashed into your legs and back.

You come to another large passage way. At the very end you see the stairs have broken and there is a gap between you and the other set of stairs. But now you are out of the cavern and over a waterfall. You look at Jadiam and realize he cannot live threw the fall to the water, but he will not live if you sit there. A tear slides from your eye as you drop his body and decapitate him. You say a prayer and drop his body into the water so the goblins do not mutalate it. You drop yourself in the water and prepare for the drop.

You slide off the edge and fall 100 feet and are knocked unconscious. You wake up in a small cottage. A little old lady is wetting a cloth and is frighten by you. \"Dear me! You scared me! I found you on the river bank, and saw that you were hurt. I am making a potion as we speak to heal your wound\", says the little old lady. You look around and see no cauldron or beaker, or any sign of a potion. You spy a dagger on a counter close to you. You dare not do anything yet for you could be delerious.

You look at the old lady and see something strange on her head under her large bandana. A green thing. It seems to be moving...what is....ITS AN EAR! You launch out of the bed and grab the dagger. The old lady turns towards you and screeches as sharp claws burst from her fingers and she turns into a goblin. You leap into the air and slit its throat, killing it.

You slide open the door and peer outside and realize you have been taken to the three towers used by Dargon the dark lord to summon evil spells on the world. You slam the door shut and arm yourself with the dagger, and candle stick, and the black covers of the bed which you use as a cloak. You open the door and ready your dagger for the escape of a life time.

To be continued...

Ya like?

[Kendrick]

nice

[antonio842]

i am gonna me a critic

The entire thing was great

except one part
why would the goblins be throwing all of there weapons at a mere 2 enemies

thanx i can almost not wait for the second, i mean next part  

[antonio842]

You were walking along in the wilderness as looking for something, when all of the sudden you heard a horrific scream. You started jogging in the direction of the scream when you heard it again and you immediately started running so you could help.
   As you got there you see a full grown man on his knees crying you ask him what?s wrong, as he looks up you notice that both of his eyes had been gorged out. His eyes were bloody as well as his mouth; at the sight you grasp your sword and start looking around on the ground and all through the trees.
 You see nothing but emptiness, there isn?t even birds yelling and there is an eerie feeling about. You try to help the man but the second you touch him he screams ?no please don?t hurt me? and dies or fright right there in your hands.
  You look around once again and see another man in the distance. You begin running at him with the intent of hurting him. When you get to him you raise your sword and begin to swing it at his leg. In mid swing your sword disintegrates and you are left with nothing but the leather on your handle. You try to kill with your dagger but you notice it isn?t there. As you turn to run from your odd new opponent you see the man with the gorged eyes. Except he is different, alive for one, he has nothing wrong with his eyes.
  You run to him thinking he is on your side and he jabs your own dagger into you. You fall to the ground in pain but not close to death. He knocks you out and him and his companion carry you through the woods.

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