We know you didn\'t mean any harm, but you know what they say about good intentions...er, actually I forget the exact saying, but you get the idea.
I pretty much left the whole of the text intact since it\'s what it says on history page verbatim. There were some grammatical errors (one of which Kaseijin corrected, I assume). For future reference, please know that just because anyone can write in Wikipedia does not mean that anyone
should write in Wikipedia any way they please.
There
are standards. Without standards, Wikipedia would not be as well-respected as it is, now would it?
Read the
Wikipedia Tutorial before creating any new articles in the future. Start out small by editting minor things on articles that have already been written.
Oh, goodness. This appears to have gone entirely off-topic now. Moogie, could you please move this thread to the Hydlaa Plaza? (or any moderator for that matter) Unless, of course, it isn\'t actually off-topic. Or something.
~Indi