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Ralleyon

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[RP] Strange dreams
« on: January 29, 2007, 01:28:23 pm »
[This is a new roleplay idea I'm trying to roll out, dawning on a new form of religion / worship - a cult of the ancestors]




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In the plaza, by Harnquists's shop Ralleyon meets up with some friends by chance. It's been a busy day and the Crystal is about to set, so he suggest to go somewhere quiet and catch up on the news.


 Gaian smiles 'If I don't know where... is a bit hard' and giggles
 GuildChat from Easton: wherever you'd like Lady Gaian
 GuildChat from Ralleyon: Anywhere but here...
 Gaian smiles again
 GuildChat from Ralleyon: I'm beginning to feel agoraphobic
 GuildChat from Gaian: I know what are you thinking, Rall, I was joking *smile*
 GuildChat from Ralleyon: I know *smile*
 GuildChat from Gaian: Go, then!


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They quickly arrive to lady Gaian's house in a secluded place of the city, with a splendid view above the plaza.


 Ralleyon breathes some fresh air
 *Gaian digs in the keys, then takes one and open the door
 Eldkin says: Ahh... peace and quiet
 *Easton smiles
 Easton says: Gonna check out the view.. be right back
 Ralleyon says: 'course
 Ralleyon says: By the way Eldkin, I have found a ruined sword in my backpack
 Ralleyon says: I believe it is yours
 Ralleyon says: Also... about that sparring match of ours
 Eldkin says: Not exactly a view from my office but still nice ey ?
 Ralleyon says: I have been busy these days dulling some blades which would serve our purpose very nicely
 Ralleyon says: aye, indeed
 Ralleyon says: Where is your office though?
 Eldkin says: you still have my wooden training sword ?
 *Easton chuckles
 Ralleyon says: aye
 Easton says: Eldkin's office is up high
 Easton says: Not my type
 Eldkin says: at the top of Harn's house
 Eldkin says: He doesn't mind though
 Easton says: He doesn't mind cause he doesn't know
 *Easton chuckles
 *Eldkin chuckles
 *Ralleyon laughs
 Gaian smiles 'something to eat or drink, sirs?'
 Easton thinks, "Hmm.. I have an apple here actually, I think that'll do just fine."
 Ralleyon says: It's a nice warm evening
 Ralleyon says: Why don't we lay dows some mats and drink a bit of tea?
 *Easton nods, "Mats and tea sounds nice."
 *Gaian smiles and nods
 *Gaian runs in the kitchen
 *Eldkin rolls out a bigger blankie
 *Easton takes his place on the mat
 *Ralleyon smiles and sits down
 *Eldkin leans against the column
 *Gaian [is] back with some cups of tea, smiling
 *Gaian puts it on a little table
 *Ralleyon leans against the wall
 Ralleyon says: Mmmm, smells great
 Ralleyon says: What's the secret milady?
 Ralleyon says: What spices and ingredients do you use for this fine tea of yours?
 Gaian smiles
 Gaian says: 'Nope, tea is just tea' and giggles
 Ralleyon says: hehe
 Ralleyon says: smells great
 *Easton whispers to Ralleyon, "She's hiding the secret ingredients..sneaky.."
 Ralleyon takes a cup of tea and sips form it carefully
 *Ralleyon nods
 *Ralleyon snickers
 *Eldkin grins
 *Gaian raises her head shaking it, laughing as a mad
 *Ralleyon fudges near the kitchen window and looks for some cookies to snatch
 Gaian says: 'Drink, it sure in it there are not poinsonouse herbs and if you wait again a bit it will become too cold, then you will not say 'she hides secret ingredients'!'
 *Easton smiles
 *Gaian giggles
 Ralleyon says: I am sure it's just fine milady
 Ralleyon says: I was just asking because I like collecting herbs as well
 Ralleyon says: Perhaps we can try some receipes sometime
 Ralleyon sips his tea and "mmmm"s
 Gaian says: 'No poisonous herbs in tea surely no, but maybe in the kitchen...' and laughs
 *Ralleyon has a craving for fudge
 *Ralleyon leans against the wall and looks at the beautiful night crystaldome
 *Ralleyon hums a song
 *Ralleyon wiggles his wings cheerfully

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Ralleyon fidgets around, thinking about the latest events in his life. Eventually, he picks up some courage and decides to share a story with his friends and ask their opinion.


 Ralleyon says: So...
 *Gaian thinks on
 Ralleyon says: Let me tell you a little something
 *Easton munches on his apple
 *Easton listens
 *Gaian nods 'I love the myths'
 Ralleyon says: I've been thinking about something, and would like to ask your opinion
 *Ralleyon smiles to lady Gaian


A stranger in the night approaches and looks about, feeling lost. She asks for directions and leaves hastily.


 Ralleyon says: So... where was I?
 Ralleyon says: Ah yes... a little story
 *Eldkin nods and listens
 Ralleyon says: I've been having some strange dreams lately and I'm not sure what they mean
 Ralleyon says: They seem like messages from beyond, from another realm
 Ralleyon says: and the faces I see, although I forget their names, are very familiar
 Ralleyon says: I feel very much at ease in these dreams, although the beings I meet and talk to are spectral
 *Gaian tilts her head thinking
 Ralleyon says: What do you think about it... what could it mean?
 Easton says: Hmm..
 *Gaian smiles
 Easton says: I'm not too sure..
 Ralleyon says: I have a little theory... but first I'd like to know if you have a possible explanation
 *Gaian looks calmfully
 Easton says: Well..
 Easton says: I don't know.. are there any other specifics you can give?
 Ralleyon says: Not really.
 Ralleyon says: They are random dreams
 *Gaian closes her eyes, still tilting her head...
 Easton says: Hmm.. I really don't know..
 Easton says: What do you think?
 Ralleyon says: There is a setting for all of them... they seem to be part of normal life
 Ralleyon says: I am in a tavern let's say and talk to that spectral being
 Ralleyon says: It all feels comfortable and strange at the same time
 Ralleyon says: I do not know much about it myself... but I heard rumours
 Easton says: Well, you came here from a portal.. maybe someone is trying to contact you from the realm you came form
 Ralleyon says: You see... Klyros do not like gods and do not belive in them
 Ralleyon says: I know they exist, but we as a race do not like to submit ourselves to their will.
 Ralleyon says: The word for it is called atheist I believe.
 *Easton nods
 Ralleyon says: However... some old Klyros legends mention another form of religion
 *Gaian raises a claw, how to asking the word
 Ralleyon says: but only a few have that gift and they were considered madmen by my folk
 *Ralleyon pauses
 Ralleyon says: Sure Gaian, ask away
 *Easton nods..
 Gaian says: Is happened something in the day you got this 'vision'?
 Ralleyon says: Nothing specific
 Gaian says: Too a simple book...
 Ralleyon says: But I have had a general feeling for a long time... I got a bit homesick
 Ralleyon says: Which makes me thnk it can be a side-effect of nostalgia and perhaps a bit more
 Gaian says: Read some myths... heard something which remember an old myth..?
 Easton says: Hmm..
 Ralleyon says: Well...
 *Gaian nods
 Ralleyon says: There is that old Klyros myth I've been telling you about
 Ralleyon says: about the old religion
 *Gaian nods
 Ralleyon says: like I said, Klyros do not like gods
 Ralleyon says: But have always held their ancestors in high esteem
 Ralleyon says: Even when I was little, there were special ceremonies to honour our dead and our family
 Gaian says: Uhmm...
 Easton says: Well.. maybe thats what it is..?
 Ralleyon says: this myth I'm telling you about refers to a stronger form of "reverence"
 Ralleyon says: So, if my memory serves me right, there was an underground cult
 Ralleyon says: ...of Klyros performing rituals, as in a cult of the ancestors
 Ralleyon says: I couldn't make anything of it back then since I was little
 Ralleyon says: But in the light of the latest dreams... I'd say it might all be connected somehow
 Ralleyon says: Or perhaps I'm just homesick and thinking too much
 *Ralleyon laughs
 *Ralleyon finishes his cup of tea
 Ralleyon says: What say you, about all of this, does it sound plausible?
 Easton says: You know.. I can't help but feel dumb
 Easton says: I really don't know.. I think its something you have to figure out. and you'll know when you do
 Ralleyon says: Aye
 Ralleyon says: I'll keep notes about this and see what becomes of it
 *Easton nods
 Ralleyon says: Well, I just felt that I had to get it off my chest
 Ralleyon says: It's been bugging me as of late and I couldn't hold it anymore... so I turned to my closest friends
 *Ralleyon smiles "Thank you for listening"


As soon as they are done, everyone disappears into the night, aiming for a good sleep. A street urchin lurking about approaches.


 Ralleyon says: Greetings
 Miyen says: hey.
 Miyen says: Just taking a look.
 Ralleyon says: No problem with that
 *Eldkin nods, greetings
 *Ralleyon smiles
 Miyen says: Surely not.
 Miyen says: staying out to enjoy the night, or waiting for someone?
 Ralleyon says: Just finished a tea party actually
 Ralleyon says: And the night was lovely indeed
 Miyen says: I see. Tea party.
 Miyen says: You'd try a beer party.
 Miyen says: More of a party, if you know what I mean.
 *Eldkin nods, yap just cleaning the place
 Ralleyon says: One feels the need for quieter and more relaxing ways to have a chat... away from that dreaded and crowded plaza
 Miyen says: Oh, I see.
 Miyen says: Trascendent meditators.
 Miyen says: You'd put a warning sign out there.
 Ralleyon says: Well, this is lady Gaian's house, we couldn't be so rude as to do a beer party.
 *Ralleyon snickers
 Miyen says: Gaian, uh?
 Ralleyon says: We leave that for the tavern
 Miyen says: Interesting.
 Ralleyon says: Aye, a good friend of ours
 Miyen says: You're just cleaning her house, aye.
 Ralleyon says: All done here!
 *Eldkin nods
 Ralleyon says: Better go to the tavern, perhaps I can still find a spare room for the night
 *Miyen smiles
 Ralleyon says: Else, a night out camping is not bad at all in this good weather
 Miyen says: You aim for the beer, don't you...
 *Ralleyon grins
 Ralleyon says: Ssssshhhhh
 *Eldkin grins
 Ralleyon says: Shall we, gentlemen?
 Eldkin says: yeah...
 Miyen says: Go, please.


The party disappears into the night, Eldkin and Ralleyon heading to the tavern to get a beer before hitting the sack.


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[This log is a snippet from withing the game, with small edits to cut out irrelevant or OOC chats and correct some typos / errors]

[To be continued]
« Last Edit: January 31, 2007, 04:21:56 pm by Ralleyon »
To see the world in a grain of sand
And Heaven in a wild flower,
Hold Infinity in the palm of your hand
And Eternity in an hour.
     
   [William Blake - Auguries of Innocence]

Coneitic

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Re: [RP] Strange dreams
« Reply #1 on: January 30, 2007, 11:02:43 pm »
You should take what was said and wrap it into a short story rather than just copy and paste logs.
makes it more entertaining and enjoyable to read.

just my two cents =)
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Re: [RP] Strange dreams
« Reply #2 on: January 31, 2007, 04:01:57 pm »
Actually, I chose this style on purpose for a great deal of reasons, including my ease to RP and not having to rewrite everything in my own words at the end before posting it. The general idea is that it resembles a sort of a play and I like how it turned out - it is an in-game roleplay event after all. I appreciate the criticism, but it's not going to change (due to those reasons above) so, you have two choices - read it or... don't.  :)

On another note, the dates before each chat do not belong there so I'll remove them.
To see the world in a grain of sand
And Heaven in a wild flower,
Hold Infinity in the palm of your hand
And Eternity in an hour.
     
   [William Blake - Auguries of Innocence]