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Kartinitso

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The story of heart break
« on: October 27, 2007, 03:49:17 pm »
Kartinitso left this land long ago, thinking he could find happiness in the worlds outside of this one. But he found that he was homesick once he reached his destination. So he returned. And to his surprise, one ..only one person remembered him ... and had a fire that still burned for him. Agara ....

They started seeing each, reacquainting with one other and talking about years past. Once realizing their friendship went beyond that of a normal one, they seeked a relationship that was much more .. marriage.

It was some time before they were able to wed, but thier wedding day was magical. All of Agara's family and friends showed up to wish them forever love and compassion for each other. Promises and love was passed around. It was a beautiful day.

After that. naturally, children came along. A few girls and few boys, all as beautiful thier mother and father. But Kartinitso had business to take care of, buisness that would mean some time away from the family he treasured more then anything in the world. But Agara assured him that she will always love him and will wait eagerly for his return.

Kartinitso, once able to return home, did with incrediable haste. He couldn't wait to in the arms of his beloved wife and children once more. But a shock would meet him instead when he returned.

The love of his life, his wife ...had met someone else while he was away. His one true love betrayed the vows of marriage and had moved on to a new suiter ... He couldnt bare it ... and his wife ...had the audacity to expect him to be okay with this and just be friends as if it were the natural order of things.

No, he couldn't, he wouldn't. Unable to bare to be in this world with his love, he left again never to be seen by a single soul of this world.

A long time after, it seemed impossible, but somehow Agara had found Kartinitso once again. It had seemed the ordeal was as painful to her as it was to him. Her suitor did the same to her as she did to Kartinitso, only more numerous times. She said it was a mistake that she left, That she was so stupid to have not seen Kartinitso was the most faithful person in her life and that she still carried love for him.

It took some convincing to bring the notion of even taking her back to be even acceptable. But she promised that this time, she will be with him no matter what, that she would return to the world in which they met only when he was there, and that her love for him will never break. With this ..he brought her back into his heart and returned to this world with her.

Kartinitso truely thought this would be happily ever after for him. His wife was back in his life as well as his children. He was on his way. Small ordeals caused him to leave and come back to this world only a few times.

But on the last visit, he learned of something terrible. His beloved wife, Agara, had yet again betrayed him. But now she was under the ownership of a mistress, a mistress that paired her up not with her husbend, but with another mate of the mistress's choosing. And Agara seemed okay with it.

This was the end, he took her back even after betraying their marriage. That was it. He left her on that day he found this out. No man should have to suffer this pain, this ordeal he was put through. It was wrong. His wife promised him this would never happen again. And what did she have to say for herself ? Nothing ...

As before, she expected him to be okay with it, like it was the natural order of things once more. This was final, he was through with her forever. If they were ever to meet again, he would sooner take his own life then agree to take her again. he had lost all respect for this woman.

This woman had single handedly ruined this world for him. What does he have left without her ? Nothing. he maybe seen by other on rare occasion around this world, but it would a day under a blue moon before he would ever let someone that close to him again.

[ So ends the relationship between Agara Kureta and Kartinitso Atamoth. Agara, you have hurt me for the last time. You are nothing to me now. I don't care if some of you think this has no place here. I am putting this here because i believe all should know this story of happiness and pain. I was a fool .. but never again shall i be ]
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Re: The story of heart break
« Reply #1 on: October 29, 2007, 10:21:26 am »
*snif, snif*  :'(   that is good...but i think you should put it one step thurther... :devil: SUISIDE!!!! :devil:

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Re: The story of heart break
« Reply #2 on: December 30, 2007, 07:53:50 pm »
Wow you're mean.
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Re: The story of heart break
« Reply #3 on: January 03, 2008, 05:23:31 pm »
One word: Emo.

Seriously, I am kinda unsettled by the OOC part, either you are dragging RP stuff into OOC, or your dragging your own issues in, and both is something I am not really content with. I hate to play the dumbass bouncer, but keep your issues outside.
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Re: The story of heart break
« Reply #4 on: January 03, 2008, 05:29:07 pm »
Locking this is several months old the chars have moved on and there is no point in dragging it up again
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