Small note on the Tutorial.

[soultwister]

I've been going trough the Tutorial one day and this small thing came up to me:

Kicking the ground is not a facial expression.

That's all, don't flame me for making a topic to say that, i found it disturbing.

[ThomPhoenix]

Yes, I can totally see how that ruined your day.

[Raa]

Actually, that bothers me too. xD

Edit: 777! zomfg!

[Tuxide]

-Xargon grins.-

Xargon Guurn says:  Facial expressions for example.

-Xargon kicks at the ground, stirring up some dust.-

I concur, kicking the ground is not a facial expression.  It should say something along the lines of "-Xargon kicks the ground with his face, stirring up some dust.-"  Maybe he has telekinetic powers or something, and all he has to do is grin to stir some dust up, I don't know.

[Zan]

The context might make things more clear ...

-Xargon Guurn says: While talking is a very useful tool when roleplaying, you also have to be able to express yourself in other fashions, eh?
-Xargon grins.
-Xargon Guurn says:  Facial expressions for example.
-Xargon kicks at the ground, stirring up some dust.
-Xargon Guurn says:  Or even more complicated actions.

You see here that the grinning, he did was a facial expression and the kicking up dust was a more complicated action.

[Beniel]

Perhaps Xargon should say it this way then:

-Xargon Guurn says: While talking is a very useful tool when roleplaying, you also have to be able to express yourself in other fashions, eh?
-Xargon Guurn says:  Facial expressions for example.
-Xargon grins.
-Xargon Guurn says:  Or even more complicated actions.
-Xargon kicks at the ground, stirring up some dust.

[Zan]

Is this really worth editing?

[Beniel]

I know it's a fairly minor issue, but I imagine it wouldn't take too much time to change is words around. In any case, I would hope that by the time we hit 1.00 something would have been done to make that bit of Xargons dialog less ambiguous.

[geloren]

'is it really worth editing...'

In my opinion, yes. If too many people see this as ambigu, then it's almost as bad as a typo. It's noticed and payed attention to. If it was good (in other words to be released for a possible 1.O release) then it wouldn't make people argue about it.

[Rizin]

Oh my.... the tutorial will grow and change as well.... just so you all know....

Until then....

... I swapped the order of sentences. Someone go test it now and make sure it looks right.

*Rizin bangs her head against the wall while waiting for a thumbs up.

[MrGadget]

 

[Rizin]

Thank you. 

Lock please.