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Zackery

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A paladin's tale
« on: June 06, 2004, 07:30:12 pm »
I decided to make a story just for fun :).
                   Chapter 1: Time of death.
    Sid sat down with his face pressing against the table as he soundly snoozed, Fwawr shout\"Wake up!\"
      He grumbled\"Not yet mommy.\"
      Fwawr walked out of the house to get cold water from the river. Then, he walked in and drenched Sid with it.   Sid woke up in alarm\" What!?  What?!\"
      \"There is a beast in town that is killing many people. We have to vainquish him.\"
      \"Oh, disription?\"
       \"All I know is that it wears a black cloak and sucks the life out of people.\"  Fwawr paced back and forth because he knew what danger they were in.  But, Fwawr remembered his palidan trainer was Sid the slayer.
      Sid interupted his thoughts\"We better destroy it.\"
      They hurried toward town as they saw the people causing pandamonium.  They knew it was worst than they thought.
       Sid taunted\"You taffer, come and get me.\"
        The dark hooded beast slowly turned it\'s head and hissed\"Fool!\"
       It swiftly ran towards them as they drew their swords.  It swiped them with its long claws it struck Fwawr and then it all blacked out.
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« Reply #1 on: June 08, 2004, 10:27:04 pm »
Dicontinued...
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« Reply #2 on: June 16, 2004, 01:40:14 pm »
You should have continued the story. That was a good starting post - With some more improvisation work on it in subsequent posts, it\'s possible that the story could  become quite a good read.
« Last Edit: June 16, 2004, 01:41:22 pm by MechPaladin »