BRAVO!
well done! i enjoyed it immensly. it could have used a bit more of a climax leading to the end, perhaps a more detailed conflict with complications making it more suspensefull and horrifying.
and the Epilogue was a tad bit morbid...
none the less it was a great story. perhaps you will refine it. it kept me on the edge!
have you written anything else? i like your action packed style, and would like to read more short thrillers!
