And the winner is . . .

[XeNoDeMoS]

This is my first time writing here so i hope u enjoy..

   The sword came to rest wegded between two rocks. Kevin and the bandit both scuffled after it, but the bandit got there first, stomping down hard. To the bardling\'s horror, the sword snapped halfway up the blade.
   For a moment, Kevin and his foe stared at each other , frozen.Then the bandit slowly grinned, revealing a mouthful of ulgy teeth.
     Too bad, boy. I win, you lose!\"

[XeNoDeMoS]

With that, the man leaped at him. Kevin scrambled on his feet, looking frantically about for another weapon. Out of the corner of his eye, the bardling saw the bandit\'s knife flash again, this time aimed at his unprotected neck. He twisted about, just barely  managing to catch the man\'s wrist in time.

[XeNoDeMoS]

But I. . .can\'t. . .hold him. . .he\'s just. . .too strong. . .
The bandit continued to grin. Slowly he began bending the bardling\'s wrist back and back. . . Kevin gasped as renewed pain shot through his bruised hand, and lost his grip. The knife began its plunge-

[XeNoDeMoS]

okay now im going to introduce a new character, his name is Naitachal and he is a dark elf.hope u enjoyed to so far.feel free to comment.

  But then the bandit froze as a dark-skinned hand closed on his neck. The man\'s eyes widened, gaping in sudden blind horror. As Kevin stared in sheer disbelief, he saw the man\'s hair hair fade from black to gray to white. The leathery skin sagged, wrinkled. The bandit let the bardling go so suddenly Kevin fell, dragging himself frantically away as what had been a living man a moment before crumbled to ancient dust
   Naitachal stood revealed, eyes still blazing red from the force of his spell.

[Harkin]

um.. umm.. can you not keep making new posts, go back and edit, one post can have 12345 characters in it, no reason to boost your post count like this :O

[XeNoDeMoS]

okay i wasnt thinking of boosting points, i just wanted to keep the suspence.... ill edit frmo now on