comment please

[Gilibran]

half finished, created with a program (Mindscape webcreator 2.0 deluxe) I already regret ever buying it. it still needs a lot of work but for a first try on making a website not that bad if i may say so myself.

graphics turn out to be a lot worse then during the WYSIWYG creating of the site.

but whatever, please comment on general set-up layout, surfability etc. Don\'t hold back on comment but keep in mind it\'s my first ever try on a website

here\'s the link it should be online!! well at least I can look at it, and it also should be at least mindscape 4.0+ and explorer compatible according Mindscape?

http://www.gilibran.nl or

http://gilibran.nl/pages/indexpag.html

some things went wrong with uploading the guestbook and forum pages, there should be a underconstruction notification.

p.s.
the Comics Collection part is the only part completely finished and only needs some resizing and button work.

[Tharizdun]

Mozilla and probably Firefox as well chokes on http://gilibran.nl/pages/indexpag.html, a whole bunch of script is dumped to the screen instead of doing what it is supposed to do.

http://www.gilibran.nl/ gives a \"Forbidden: You don\'t have permission to access / on this server\" apache error.

Have you tried the web editor Nvu? http://www.nvu.com/

[Valbrandr]

Its a good start.  Just keep working.

[verideon]

Cool, I tried making something like that a few weeks ago in http://www.freewebs.com but for some very obscure reason it won\'t let me acess my newly made site , I think it has something to do with my Java Script :]. But yeah once I get mine worked out I will tell everyone about it, HEHE. Sorry for taking up the room Gilibran but yeah, cool site. Can\'t wait for the finished product

[Annah]

Yep, a good start.
 Though, I have two suggestions. First, get rid of that background, it makes the text harder to be read.
 And well, from far away the best page is the Hot Babes one. We want more girls and more *coughnakedcough* aham ...

[Merdarion]

Originally posted by Annah
Yep, a good start.
 Though, I have two suggestions. First, get rid of that background, it makes the text harder to be read.
 And well, from far away the best page is the Hot Babes one. We want more girls and more *coughnakedcough* aham ...

ehrm, I dont know if Elvira will like this.