Sorry about the stone thing, but it was such an enthralling character. xD
My story seemed hacked and jumbled to me, and a bit forced. For me to write a short story is alike pouring the ocean into a bottle and hoping it will all fit. Oh well, off to write longer tales then.
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You should try a themed story contest next time. Or perhaps one of those where you give a sentence or two and then the writers must continue from there, such as \"The night dakened as he felt the eyes upon him again. They had taken him by surprise last encounter, but this time he was ready...\"
Anyways, allways fun to read everyone\'s works. Continue please, and fear not how others may see your writings. It only matters how you see them.
