Well Datruth, this time you did it.
I hope you don't take this the wrong way, but I really didn't like the previous videos you made because they always had something that didn't fit, in my opinion. Either rather loose storyline, or music that simply didn't catch the mood (at least for me it didn't), something was amiss. I did however appreciate the work put into them, and it shows that you have perfected your skills, or better said, trained your eye to capture more in-depth actions and moods.
So like I was saying, this time it was a lot better. Loved the soundtrack (I know where it is from
) and generally speaking the atmosphere was much more in tune. If I were to describe a category it fits in, I would put it into the "Exploring and game features", with particular liking to the exploring part.
Now coming back a little criticism (mixed with features I liked):
- The mood was alright. This "mood" thing is a very important, and at the same time delicate, part of a video, which must not change from its original idea. This isn't to say that moods throughout it can't vary, but they must be connected.
- Music was very nice (personal opinion since music tastes vary)
- Storyline can be improved - try to create something like a script in your mind and stick to it or only make slight changes so as not to change the overall mood you had in mind originally.
- Camera movement was a plus, you moved it at the right time and with a certain effect to the on-going action.
Conclusion
There is room for improvement, but you're on the right track. Adding more depth and storyline is the overall advice.
